User talk:GilboBaggins

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, please try to punctuate correctly. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.

You might also want to consider avoiding the phrases began to and start to. These are good phrases to use to indicate continuous action such as it began to rain, most of the time, it just bogs down action that should happen, not begin to happen. Do not begin to start to do something. Do it! --Platypus 01:48, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

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