User talk:Platypus

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Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

Hi Platypus.
You obviously have a lot of experience with this website and its users and content. Could you just give me a quick (honest) opinion/review on this story I have been working on for a while. Rate it out of ten, tell me if its good or not, give feedback, whatever. Two or three sentences is all I need. Here it is: 120 Minutes Remain
P.S: It's not yet fully finished. The categories are going under some extreme editing and there may be occasional spelling mishaps. The story itself is also a W.I.P, but I only ask for a review on the (current) content and not the layout or the length.
Thanks! -Adam02oc

Hi Platypus.
Sorry for bugging you again. I know I could probably find this info on the wiki (I suck at using it anyway) but, just out of interest, how long have you been working on the site? -Adam02oc

Hey platipus. I did add a title. What are you talking about? >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives.

Hey dude, i do not know if i am overriding other peoples work or not, i understand the warnings, but lack the knowledge to put the information contained in said warnings to use.

Please help, the main page has been taken over

@Platypus Thank You for correcting it. I may be an English major, but I'm certainly no Grammar Nazi, so I tend to miss things fairly often. I usually correct it if I notice. Sorry bout that. Looking forward to working with you! - User:Durzan replied 11:23PM MST; Jan 21st, 2018

Could you delete the following link? The address was changed, thanks. http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Go_into_the_next_room Kanin452 9/6/17

@Platypus, Thanks lad! --YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis 21:12, 22 May 2017 (UTC) // Reply was at 5:12 pm, Boston Time

@Platypus, I apologize for making my first entry here so sloppy. I occasionally write, but not all the time, resulting in a wobbly mess of a entry. With Sincerest Apologies, YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis // Reply was at 1:41 pm, Boston Time.

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my (Rogan-thumb) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --Rogan-thumb

@Platypus, really sorry and ashamed about my mistakes on editing your stories. I'll get right on reading the reccomendations you gave me. English is kind of my third language, but I promise it will get better. The story was so massive I didn't expect you minded if I filled up some of the blanks. If you believe my writting skills to be poor - as in, the situation I'm presenting is unappealing -, that I would also like to hear. -- AvengerOstrich

@Platypus Hi, thanks for your message. I am pretty particular about grammar myself, I have tried my best but I realise that I'm not perfect. I have enjoyed reading the story on the site, but frustrated that there were so many dead links. Do you get many contributors or have you written most of this yourself? Regards, GilboBaggins.

@Platypus Hey! Thanks for sending me a message and linking me the appropriate tutorials. I only started contributing to stories yesterday so I was a bit fuzzy on the details on what you need to do. As for the second comment regarding ripping out other people's stories, I just wanted to apologize for that. When you edit something the note below reads "Please note that all contributions to Create Your Own Story may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit it here.", so I thought it was alright. Clearly I just misunderstood. Thanks for clarifying that for me. P.S, is there a way to delete a option/category after you've made it? I wanted to change to advanced linking just in case but first, I need to delete the internal links I created otherwise there'll just be an internal link that nobody can reach. Thanks in advance. - RichterQ87 // Posted at 23:48 GMT, 25.04.2018

@Platypus Hey! I just had a grammar related question since you said you were something of a grammar Nazi and Googling for the word I'm searching for hasn't worked. What's the word for 'seeking out someone's better/good nature'? You know, like when someone is begging someone and they try to find the good part of them to guilt trip them. For some reason the word 'apply' comes to mind but that's not right. 'Apply to someone's good nature'. Nope. While not strictly grammar related, I can't think of anyone else to ask. Thanks in advance. - RichterQ87 // Posted at 02:21 GMT, 25.04.2018 Edit: I found out the word is 'appeal'. Thanks anyway.

@Platypus Sorry about that. I'm new to the site and will keep it in mind next time to write in the category. I just finished reading through the rules and tutorial now; thanks for letting me know.

Contents

A few requests

YO PLATYPUS WASSUP! So I need to know how you made the Contents box. Also, I need to know if we can make a new system page, like All Quizzes and Challenges, or some permission to put a quiz on the main page in it's appropriate section. The story is Zelda Quiz, which I have not yet finished, but need a spot to put it when I'm done. --Magikarp7297 03:07, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Problems with links

Hey Platypus. I'm having a problem with the links to other pages on my story 120 Minutes Remain. When I'm signed in, the main Category shows me the full 66 pages that I have already completed, but when I'm signed out it only shows the first 37 pages and no others. However, when I read through the story normally, the full 66 pages are present. I know that I haven't explained this very well, but if you could visit the Category: 120 Minutes Remain while signed out, you will see what I mean.
I tried to report this bug, but the page doesn't load when I do this, for whatever reason. If you could check it out yourself/ give me any tips on how to fix it, that would be much appreciated.
Thanks, Adam02oc 11:29, 19 November 2017 P.S Sorry if my grammer is a bit all over the place.

Fredhot16

Is there a way to change the name of a story without having to change all the categories, too?--Fredhot16 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

Is it O.K to delete stories that have a few pages and that nobody has worked on for what seems like forever? Or at least move it to the pit? Update: Can I have permission to move stories to the Pit? And how do I that, if you're willing to give me permission?--Fredhot16 15:14 (Louisiana Time), 20 May 2017

Hey, do you mind fixing the Main Page? --Fredhot16 18:49 (Louisiana Time), 24 May 2017

Hey, do you have any suggestions for where I should put a section where people can put plot suggestions for the "Dungeons and Dragons" Adult Story?--Fredhot16 12:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2017

Could you please fix the category errors on "Jojo's Choose Your Own Bizarre Adventure" in the Mature Story section?--Fredhot16 14:13 (Louisiana Time), 17 October 2017

Could you please fix Teejay's discussion page?--Fredhot16 14:00 (Louisiana Time), 30 November 2017

Moving project

Hi Platypus,

Would you be interested in moving the project to its own domain and server? It's become painfully clear EditThis is not capable of supporting the project's infrastructure and is hindering the continued growth of the project. I've noticed several issues which are causing problems for CYOS:

  • The throttling is disrupting both readers and writers from fully enjoying the stories.
  • Excessive abuse filters are causing administrative issues for you.
  • Lack of anti-abuse tools makes it extremely inefficient to counter abuse.
  • Extremely outdated MediaWiki installation which hasn't been updated in nearly 8 years.

We can fix all of the above problems and implement a mass undo feature, a mobile version of the website, and do much more to create a modern CYOS-type website once we move to a new domain and server. Since CYOS doesn't allow user to user emails, could you perhaps contact me at floatingspace@protonmail.com to discuss specifics? Thanks. Spider 21:47, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

Ya, it's just the actual lead administrator isn't reachable and appears to have abandoned the project years ago for you to run. There's really nothing stopping the members of the community from getting up and moving their stories and content to a new website that's actually managed and has the features CYOS needs. For example, I think an actual notification system (see the Echo extension available for MediaWiki) would be helpful for writers to keep track of new story developments. There are lots of useful features available to newer versions of MediaWiki. I think also thinking of a client-side story customization tool, which would allow readers to customize the names and other parameters of stories without changing the story for everyone else. In short, there's great potential in the project, but EditThis is hindering progress. Spider 16:27, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
So what's your verdict on moving? Individuals can of course move stories, but a mass organized effort would probably be better and help build an actual community on a new platform that's actually maintained. Spider 17:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime

Sorry Platypus, but I will let you deal with User talk:John Smith and his new SSR pages You must be mistaken and Rip open the Peace Corps girl's shirt. I thought about adding the category to those pages and sending him a warning, but since that is your story, I thought it would be better to just let you know and decide if you wanted to just fix them or delete them, and how you wanted to warn him. Anyways, just letting you know. Feel free to stop by my story and let me know what you think if you have the time ^.^ Working hard on it, but not sure if it is good to go into the details that I am. btw, the story is Masochist me. Well, the one I am working on currently. --Dirty Me 08:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have asked Teejay, but, he isn't really that strong in critiquing. I have been trying to write my Masochist me, and been hung up on my training. I am enjoying writing it alot, and trying to make sure that the reader actually understand sex, as opposed to some of the stuff that ends up in the stories on here. But, I was thinking. I am wondering, should I even bother writing this? I mean, the entire story, while it will have some vanilla sex in it, and might use a little of the current material I am writing as fodder, it is not really "the story". I realize that there are many stories here that have inconsistencies, and go off on some side thing that have nothing to do with the plot, but I am wondering if there is any use in all this research and writing. It helps, slightly, to highlight the main character, show the reader what she is like, what she is experiencing, and compares and contrasts some of the differences between her and a normal, vanilla woman, so I know it isn't completely pointless. I am also having fun researching the different steps in sex, and trying to teach the reader about human sexuality, but it is not an educational story either. Can you let me know your thoughts? Is my The teacher part of the story pointless, a waste of time, etc? Will readers even care about this part, since they are probably coming to the story to read about a woman being slapped and hit, tied and bound, tortured and humiliated? I mean, to me, this feels needed, just to get the users to think about the world she is living in, and about who she is herself. But, well, I am not the other readers on this site. Am I going to far, and should stick to simple, "I moaned as the paddle fell across my ass, red welt left behind. He grabbed my hair, forcing my head up from across his knee, and held my gaze to his. "Are you going to be good now, or do you need more?" I shot him my best defiant look. "Well, in that case," with that, he stopped talking, shoved me back over his knee and brought the belt down over and over and over again. My ass was on fire, which only make me wetter, and forced me to moan and scream, cry and kick harder. God, I was about to climax from the sheer sweetness of the pain, mind wrapped in a blissful haze."

Also, is what I am writing on the teacher page any good? Is it redundant? Too long? Does it captivate, or just bore? Is the writing style okay? --Dirty Me 07:44, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, finished changing the ages in Hot & Horny on the Jessica path. All her pages should show her as 21 now. I was going to start the Miranda path, and I changed a few of the ages, but not up for reading them, and stopped making the changes. Some of the story lines just sound too much like the 6 year old that it originally was, and I find it creepy. Guess I will let you or someone else change her stuff. Sadly, the Josh stuff with Jessica was okay, but I didn't like the part where she goes into her parents bedroom. Not really something I am interested in, not with the tone and way the writer made it. I sort of lost it when I saw the "I'm about to pop an egg". Stopped reading and just edited the age only. I mean, I have seen stupid lines, but really? wtf is that? Wish the writers could at least try to "imagine" what a real woman might say... I mean, "Cum inside my womb and impregnate me" is bad enough, but really, "I'm about to pop an egg" I think may be the single, stupidest thing I have ever heard. I think it may have done permanent brain damage... I already feel stupider for having read it... --Dirty Me 05:23, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

Sorry Platy, I will leave you to correct Special:Contributions/Mudcraft12's stuff. I don't have enough time to add the category to every page he created... --Dirty Me 05:21, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

A new spammer: Special:Contributions/Wannaparty006. Since I cannot block him/her/it/them/things, not much I can do. Same since I can't really delete pages either. --Dirty Me 07:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Simple Question

Hey, Platypus, I seem to be having a rather strange issue, and since you seem to get around in this site, figured I would ask you. I'm working on my story Fallout: New Vegas, and having a small issue with the category pages. More specifically, the page counter. On the "F" page, I tried to configure it like other stories to count the number of pages in the category "FNV". When I am logged out, the counter says one page. When I am logged in, it says the actual amount (still small, just starting), but I would like to figure out why this is and how to fix it. Anyways, whenever you get a chance if you could look at it or give me an answer it would be greatly appreciated.

Well, thank you anyways for the help, it would have bugged me for a while.

Hola i need help creating a story but i dont know how to make a you choose story plz help me-Elementor11234 p.s. sorry for editing out your stuff.

CREATING YOUR STORY

HELLO I NEED HELP ON CREATING MY OWN STORY WITHOUT JUST EDITING SOMEONE ELSES STORY NEED HELP IMMEDIATLY --Elementor11234 19:30, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

Wolfskin75

Thank you for the heads up. I thought I had done it right. I don't want to mess up anyone's story. I will read up before adding stuff.

Wolfskin75

ForgotPassword

I'm working on the pages I left as incomplete. I don't write often and, when I do, I'm battling a horde of technical issue with my computer, so I'm forced to leave the work unfinished until I'm back in the mood to write. I am, slowly, getting the pages done, so don't worry about it too much. Besides, I'm not the first person to leave pages unfinished. There's a few stories on here like that, just minus the [in progress] part I added... I just need some time to get around to writing pages again, so it won't be an issue for long. Honest. ForgotPassword

Thanks

I noticed you went through and reorganised my character pages. Thanks for that. I'd been putting off fixing that myself for a while. --Incubus 13:17, 3 August 2017 (UTC)

THIS is Very important,please help me with this

Ok so I'm making this story based on a book (warriors 'in to the wild' by Erin Hunter) And I was thinking about useing a prologue, It would look something like this

Prologue text



[[Category: WARRIORS Into the wild]]

Ok thanks 😀 :)

Alison

Hi,

I created a story titled A Story in the All Family-Friendly Stories section yesterday. There were only two stories, the other one was called pokemon 64 or something. Today, I went to All Family-friendly Stories again, and there were alot of stories, but I couldn't find mine. I ended up using the link in my user page. (I put a link to my story there.) What's going on?

Help please,

--Alison 00:52, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

Okay, so I put my story link in the All Family-Friendly Stories page, (in the correct format, so don't worry) but I still don't know what's happening with the two-stories thing. I would totally appreciate it if you told me what was happening.

--Alison 03:41, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

I really need help with the status indicator page in the tutorial. All that coding doesn't make sense. I've been trying to make a 'template' for my adventure stories and my user page, but it's so confusing. Can you help make one for me or explain to me please? Thanks.

--Alison 07:40, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

THE PROBLEM OF MAGIKARP7297

Hey, Platypus, I figured it out. I'm gonna be known as The Guy Who Really Screwed Up, but at the same time, be the guy who's tries to fix it. (crossing my fingers I don't screw it up more, replacing the stories one by one, sadly.) I'm gonna leave a message to tell everyone to tell me the titles of PG-13 stories they have seen, as well as the Family-Friendly ones. (Was taking a stab at those, but... meh. So unless someone adopts my Mario 64 story or whatever the hell i named it within the next week, then move it to the fucking Pit please.) But anyways, I'm gonna fix my problem. MAGIKARP7297. P.S. the message will be in Idea Pitches so dont freak out.

GlitterSticky

Yeah hey idk you seem like the person to ask about this, because I haven't seen anything on the google group or on editthis.info proper I'd like to ask... What happened? Do you know? The site was just completely down the past few days, I was starting to think the owner dropped it or it got taken down for something, I was getting ready to go looking for another site when I saw it was back up today. I guess it's none of my business really I'm just confused and curious as to what went wrong? -GlitterSticky

Ah, right, thanks anyway! -GlitterSticky

ragnax

sorry bro I try to write as best I can. the fact is that I do not speak English I am Latin American and I speak English neutral helped me with Google at least I'm pretty creative and evil with my victims

part2 categorize you mean to say what kind of history it is.

I am watching the tutorial but I find it cumbersome I hope to do it well and I modify the others that are bad

Unblock request

Hello. I would like to have my GreatGrapes4330 account unblocked; I was only 10 years old at the time I was on that account and I am sorry for what I did. I now know to handle things differently with an administrator on a wiki and not to vandalize a profile. I could try to log on that account if it is unblocked; if not, I shall continue to use this one. Thank you for reading this. Newman2 15:16, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Daughter's Raise violates Wiki Rules.

Daughter's Raise is a story that just by the first page alone is clearly demonstrating Pedophilia, which is against CYOS policy. The main character is grooming his 10 year old daughter for incest. --Durzan 14:48, 6 April 2018 (UTC)




--Clementine on her own story-- Hi i wanted to ask, will somebody continue writing Clementine on her own story ?

Subcategories Help

Hey Platypus

Wanted to know, how do I get into Subcategories, to wright my own story?

Thanks

P.S. I didn't know I had removed those other story's and I am sorry about that.

Hey, Platypus

Alright, if you decide to say no, I understand, I screwed up a lot, and besides, you're pretty busy all the time. Anyways, so, I would be honoured if you could contribute to my story School Wars. Just fool around, I currently have only 3 pages, but let me know what you think. Also, may I perhaps just say that I would like it if I could learn how to make it so others cannot type on certain parts of my stories, like templates, or my User Page? That would help alot. Really sorry about all the time I jacked up.

Hey, buddy, I'm back! Look, as you're probably figuring out, I only reply to bug you when I need to tell you something. So, there is a user named goku black (I did that grammer correctly, BTW!) and they are horrible at spelling and grammer. My recommendation is to let me know what they did. I'll reprimand them IRL. Also, if I can't change the thing even, never mind the 'you shall not edit' thing. --Magikarp7297 07:22, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

How to add a story?

Hello Platipus (great name byvthe way), I was wondering how to start my own story. I know hpw to contribute to already existing stories, but makeing my own would be brilliant. Please let me know where and how I can do so (caPachera's down).

Yo! I can teach the newbies to NOT screw up!

That's right, I'll help them NOT be like me! If you find any newbies who need some real help, pawn them off on me. I will mentor them, give them rough training, then let them experience the real world of... actually making stories public. But really, I can help with it. Also, I will eventually get to fixing the All PG-13 Stories list. Maybe. --Magikarp7297 07:17, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Comments/Requests by Magikarp7297

I was wondering... could we perhaps add a "help wanted" section? Becuase I would like to have people help me, and I feel like that's waht Idea Pitches is turning into anyways (and maybe I helped a little with that). Anyways, it would be helpful.

Also, please, next time you head to my Talk page, add a subject like I have, such as "Comments by Platypus" or "Regarding Help Page." This will essentially make it less difficult to navigate, and it makes things nice and neat!--Magikarp7297 09:16, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Okay, so now that I have the needed permission (thanks my sysop friend!), I need to solve a minor problem: where to put the damn thing. Should it be where the link to Idea Pitches is? A new section, like the To Do List and "Got an idea for a Story?" things are? Or somewhere near the two review links? In the meantime, I'll work on it, just not mainstream. So you won't see any links to it yet, but rather you must type the whole link out. But you are here, so just erase User_Talk:Platypus and replace it with Help_Wanted and there you go.--Magikarp7297 11:55, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

So, I can't put Help Wanted into the Main Page without fucking up some code... and I honestly don't know how I'm doing that by adding a simple link through copy and paste. Could you add it? I tried to add it under the Idea Pitches link, but when I previewed, it fucked up the code. So, I had to cancel it. --Magikarp7297 16:50, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Okay, Platypus, I solved my fucking problem. All I had to do was go into the entire fucking editing page for the Main Page. Thank you for giving me permission to add the damn Help Wanted section. If you ever request assistance with a story, then I will help you. I'm being fucking honest here. --Magikarp7297 04:27, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Well, you made a link to it, and so I erased it's duplicate. That's all for now. --Magikarp7297 15:48, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Holy shit. I check my watchlist after coming back from Tahoe, and see that there was some vandalism on the Main Page! Did you block their account? --Magikarp7297 23:36, 30 June 2018 (UTC)

I have attempted to add a link like there is to an index of characters you can possess in Rampage, yet for the items in my story The Library's Secret (I am still working on it, just a few pages in, it's Family-Friendly... It's going to be pretty good). I am unable to add a link like in Rampage. The wiki thinks it's an "external link" and that I'm a spammer. Could you please help me?

Speaking of spam, I Googled Fermiit Fertility... it's a legit thing, with a website and everything. So not only was Fermiit a vandal, but also a spammer!--Magikarp7297 06:32, 1 July 2018 (UTC)

Well, I did type out the whole link, using this: [http://www.example.com link title]. I had to erase it because the wiki thought I might be a spammer. However, there is a link like the one I wanted to make in the story Rampage, on the very first page. It leads to a category of characters that, as a bodiless spirit, you are able to possess thrpugh an internal link. What I typed is this: [http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/The_Library%27s_Secret_Items The Library's Secret Items index]. Please advise. --Magikarp7297 16:12, 1 July 2018 (UTC)

So, Platypus, mostly out of curiosity, how many sysops are there? And how did you become one? --Magikarp7297 07:54, 2 July 2018 (UTC)

Interesting. What weapon did you use? Sword? Spear? Or perhaps a crossbow? XD

Jokes aside, you say you're the only active sysop. What will happen when you drop out of the site, through death, willing drop out, or other means (such as blindness)? Will RobKohr go on as the only one with authority, or will he promote certain users to sysops again? --Magikarp7297 05:40, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

Hmm. Ban-hammer? I would've gone for the sword. Anyways, I have unofficially deleted every page in Duaghter's Raise. It's still a blue link, but now it says on every page it existed on, "This page has been deleted for underage sex, which is against wiki rules. Write over this message to make a new page." Very nice of me, I know. Just send me €100,000,000 for my services. Just kidding! (Although it would be nice, all I have to do is change it into U.S. Dollars and I'll have a crap ton of cash...)

If you ever need help, let me know... I can take over the best I can for you if needed. Or help a story (I have heard rumors you have Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp under your command). However, if you can recommend an active user to contribute to my mature story RAGE, I would love it. Thanks! --Magikarp7297 06:50, 4 July 2018 (UTC)

Yo, Platypus, did you know about Bunni? They are also an admin, by RobKohr's decree!

And, my sysop buddy, you are a genius! You posted on my talk page:

"Questions about who would succeed me when I leave the site (I’m not immortal)"

Those last 3 words there - it inspired the story Immortality, where I includeed a link on the 2nd page that led to another story, where I found the story Crusader, sparking the idea for Templar. I thank you so much! --Magikarp7297 19:18, 5 July 2018 (UTC)

Tonight I posted, underneath the subject "Voicing my Concerns:"

We are all gonna be wrecked if a large group of vandals attack, dealing widespread damage to all our pages. We have over 100,000 articles, which means lots of prey to vandals. The can plague us with bad grammer, blanking our hard-worked stories, shredding user pages, and most of all, ruining things before the only active sysop comes on to discover that about 1,000 pages have been ruined. As he tries to duct tape them back together while swinging his ban-hammer at the vandals to perma-block them, we are left with everything ruined.

Also, think about how much damage they can do to us that we won't know about. They might have underage sex stories that we can't reach because they aren't listed, or maybe have ruined hundreds of stories that people don't read. Thus, it will take forever to repair the damage. If vandals attack us, we have one active sysop, a sysadmin that is difficult to contact, and a sysadmin that likes to not log in! We are sitting here as prey. PREY!! We need more sysops/sysadmins!

This was put on the main page's talk. There were a couple of sentences at the end cut out, but overall, that's what it was. And I mean every bit of it. I'm sending it to Bunni. --Magikarp7297 06:21, 6 July 2018 (UTC)

Is the "featured stories" thing still running? Because if not, I guess I could maybe start a new one. Also, I'm a /\/ / /\/ _/ /\. --Magikarp7297 06:21, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

Hey, Platypus. Could you perhaps delete this template:

Template: PkMn Status

I changed the link to PkMn Red, as I'll likely use the color scheme and such in another story. Also, I found out a solution to my external linking problem: I used the redirect syntax. You can see it in action by clicking The Library's Secret Item Index. It will redirect you to the Category.

Also, If you can tell me where to put my Featured Stories section, that would be great. --Magikarp7297 05:30, 9 July 2018 (UTC)

Platypus, I know you're thinking, What do you want, Magikarp7297? Well, the answer is: inspiration. As you may have found out, I write a dozen or two stories at once. My latest is called Going to School. I need inspiration for where the character should go (via walking, bicycle, or the bus) and what should happen. Anything in the Family-Friendly range should work. Finding a group of bikers that are actually trolls in disguise? That can work. Riding a rainbow to find a leprechaun, leading to you fighting it? It works. Getting raped by a homosexual fiery bird? Fuck no (that there 6 year old would be scarred for life!). Cussing at a rock? Probably wouldn't work. Also, keep in mind that the main ending will be where you finally arrive at school. Or maybe if you end up skipping school (like robbing a goblin of it's gold and losing it when you get back to the house). --Magikarp7297 06:32, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

Daughter's Raise

The story Daughter's Raise is violating the wiki rules. It's been a month since you warned Freespeech, and the story has not been changed from underage sex to an understandable story. You can delete it yourself, or let me see if I can handle things... I have a way of getting attention. Don't forget to miss my other message I posted tonight. The reason I posted this as well is because I just remembered the story, and decided to see if it was still running.--Magikarp7297 08:31, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

Reply to Blocking

In regards to the blocking of DeleterACC17, I had lost the password for the account I contributed with (due to it being 3+ years old) but I really wanted to remove the pages content (quite badly honestly). I was planning on doing it manually but it seems that won’t be possible. If there was any way to delete all three of these accounts and all contributions that would be honestly quite a relief. I detached the story from the story list years ago and was gradually deleting content until for some reason I stopped.

Thanks in Advance.

Chooseyourstory.com (This is not spam!)

So, I recently joined another site called chooseyourstory.com and I'm writing a story on it, so I may not be as active as before. Just letting you know, I will still check in every now and then. --Magikarp7297 07:57, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

Sub-Category Pages

I need some help with the sub-category pages in my story, Your Story, Your Adventure. I'm trying to make a sub-category for the characters in my story. I tried reading the Tutorial but it doesn't make sense (to me, anyways). Please help and thank you in advance.--R 05:31, 16 July 2018 (UTC)

Thanks so much. I think I've figured it out now.--R 10:04, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

I'm being useful!

I added a new page to the Grammatical Tips - Capitalization in a Title. I hope you keep it, as it seems very useful to me. --Magikarp7297 05:20, 8 August 2018 (UTC)

Stop me from ripping someone's throat out

Please stop me, Platypus. On that other site, an admin who goes by the name of EndMaster dared to call me some degenerate who has "friends" on 4chan, whatever that is. And he said my mother's a whore who fucks mexicans. How dare he! I hate the mexicans because they ruined my life! God, I wish I could kill the bastard.

But there's more important matters: CYOS. Has there been any news worth sharing? I'm asking because of one matter: reviving the site. --Magikarp7297 06:08, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

I'm smiling right now. It's kind of humorous, how I'm the guy who makes very good points about subjects that concern him, and you are the authority.

So, anyways, I just messaged *Milk Tea* and posted some stuff to him in the general discussion. I suppose that's all.

Today Mr. Dick Admin made two posts about me in the forums, and on a thread that seemed good to me! It was entitled "The World's Future - Dystopia or Utopia?" He really is a dick. EndMaster is like the jackass, while Mizal is the person who actually likes me. He said:

The whole fucking world can burn as long as it means fucktards like you are burning with it.

And honestly, I hope you fucking live through the initial blasts. And no you won’t be some post apocalyptic badass, you’ll be the same dumb ass pathetic fuck you are now.

At best, the only reason you’ll last for any length of time is because you’ll still have enough blubber on you to not starve right away and you’ll be so fucking desperate you’ll have no problems debasing yourself in order to get some water which will only be enough to wash the salty taste out of your mouth after blowing whatever local warlord decided you were entertaining enough to not kill and eat right away.

Which is what might happen to you anyway after they’re done fucking every hole you have and a few that they creatively made themselves.

Better yet, they just eventually get bored and leave you to waste away in some shithole ransacked ruin so you can experience the agonizing slow death of your fucking body which will now be fucking rotting from five forms of cancer brought on by the nukes and toxic fucking waste while you’re as you desperately scrounge around for a can of expired tuna.

Eventually you won’t have the strength to carry on, puking and shitting blood every five minutes. You’ll ultimately die as you lived: Usless, hopeless, and alone.

That will be the story of you and it will be fucking hilarious.

My only wish would be is I could be there to see the agonized look on your face so I could have my dog piss in it before your last pleading gasp as the light slowly went out of your eyes.

How dare he bring up cancer? My aunt has breast cancer! That MOTHERFUCKING PIECE OF MEXICAN TRASH!!

And then he had the nerve to post:

Actually he's the new "Endeavor" until further notice.

Personally, I would have just banned him for being another fucktard, but Mizal wants him around for entertainment, so I'm using him as a punching bag since that's about the only thing this shithead is good for anyway.

Now I want to kill him.

From what I can tell, he does. So I challenged him to come to our domain, saying that he wouldn't want to because he wouldn't last a month.

He called the site NAMBLA, which is some pro-pedo thing! He has gone from insulting me, to my family, to CYOS! I'm furious!

Also, may I quote you? --Magikarp7297 19:05, 13 August 2018 (UTC)



>"I hope that admin puts as much effort into writing stories as he puts into writing insults." Well yes, Endmaster actually has written several fantasy epics. Rogues is the newest, clocking in at over half a million words. Eternal is an older work that's even larger and a lot of people's favorite, and Ground Zero is a fun post apocalyptic story that I've always been a fan of. I'd recommend any fan of CYOAs have a rummage through the featured games list on chooseyourstory.com, a lot of his stuff is on it.

Anyhow I banned Magickarp today since he seemed pretty determined to ignore all advice and we were getting a lot of complaints about him. Decided to come over here for a quick glance around since he linked the place and threatened to sic you on End or whatever. Although I probably wouldn't have waited so long if I'd read his ranting about Mexicans beforehand to be honest, lol. --Mizal, half Mexican piece of shit

Thanks...

I have lost the war and have neen banned for apparently all of eternity. If only I read someone's post sooner...

Oh well, thanks for your support, Platypus. --Magikarp7297 05:17, 14 August 2018 (UTC)

Um, it's a long story and I'd rather not go into details. Basically, is started as a grudge and eventually evolved. Since then I have just given up on my stupid hatred on Mexicans. Except for the piece of shit Mexicans, but then again, any jackass deserves to be treated badly. --Magikarp7297 04:58, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

Mind of a User: What's in YOUR mind?

So, I have an idea that I'm writing. It's basically just going to be what happens in your mind. Try to be as detailed as possible. I think that with you, people would get a good sense of what responsible things happen with you, and have a true understanding about us. It's better than only me writing one, in which casesome people might think that everyone on the site is somewhere ranging from some weird guy who lives in a closet to the next Adolf Hitler. Or something like that, I don't know. I have a weird, dark, and twisted mind sometimes. --Magikarp7297 05:12, 6 September 2018 (UTC)

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