SimLife/Male

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Revision as of 09:06, 22 September 2010

It's early morning in John's room, at least by his standards.

John wakes to his phone vibrating. Bzzzz... Bzzzz.

“urghh...” he groanes. Bzzzz... Bzzzz.

It feels too early to be awake. His mind still foggy from sleep, his body unwilling to move.

Bzzzz... Bzzzz... SMACK!

“Awe fuck not again,” he exclaimed.

His phone had fallen off his bedside table. John rolled over and reached down to grab his phone.

Upon examination he says to himself, “Shit it's broken. That's the second time this month. Now I don't even know who the fuck woke me up.”

He glances at the clock on the table only to see that it's only 6am.

“Man I don't have to be up for another hour,” he sighed.

John rolls back over into bed, trying to fall back to sleep.

What happens next?

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-It was early morning in John's room, at least by his standards.
+It's early morning in John's room, at least by his standards.
-A sudden noise woke him. <b>Bzzzz... Bzzzz.</b> His phone was vibrating.
+John wakes to his phone vibrating. <b>Bzzzz... Bzzzz.</b>
 “urghh...” he groanes. <b>Bzzzz... Bzzzz.</b>
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 <b>Bzzzz... Bzzzz... SMACK!</b>
-“Awe fuck not again.” he exclaims.
+“Awe fuck not again,” he exclaimed.
-His phone had fallen off his bedside table. John rolls over and reaches down to grab his phone.
+His phone had fallen off his bedside table. John rolled over and reached down to grab his phone.
-“Shit it's broken. That's the second time this month. Now I don't even know who the fuck woke me up.”
+Upon examination he says to himself, “Shit it's broken. That's the second time this month. Now I don't even know who the fuck woke me up.”
 He glances at the clock on the table only to see that it's only 6am.
-“Man I don't have to be up for another hour.” He sighed.
+“Man I don't have to be up for another hour,” he sighed.
 John rolls back over into bed, trying to fall back to sleep.