Shinshira

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Upon touching the radiating name you seem to have been transferred to some type of carriage , in front of you sits a women , her beautiful ivory haired stretches far , nearly touching the floor. Looking over her more clearly you notice that she is wearing a golden suit of armour that is masterfully made for her alone , as any other being would not be able to fit its form.  
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Upon touching the radiating name, you seem to have been transferred to some type of carriage. In front of you sits a woman, her beautiful ivory hair stretches far, nearly touching the floor. Looking over her more clearly, you notice that she is wearing a golden suit of armour that is masterfully made for her and her alone, as any other being would not be able to fit its form.  
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She smiles then speaks "so your one of those travelers I heard so much about "
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She smiles then speaks "so you're one of those travelers I've heard so much about "
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Her predator eyes pierce straight through you  
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Her predator eyes pierce straight through you
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She talks once again this time in a mocking tone "you think that I the mighty shinshira would be fooled by illuisary Magic , poor child..." Her voices changes to a more sypethetic one "though I won't hold it against you child , after all curiosity is what makes up your race "she smiles again and tilt her head " so you can stay and observe little one "
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She talks once again this time in a mocking tone "you think that I the mighty shinshira would be fooled by illuisary Magic , poor child..." Her voice changes to a more sympathetic tone "though I won't hold it against you child. After all, curiosity is the fundamental trait that makes up your race". She smiles again and tilts her head, "so you can stay and observe little one".
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Shinshira then looks at the carriage door , it swings upon open slowly.  
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Shinshira then looks at the carriage door; it swings upon open slowly.  
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Now stepping inside the carriage is a man adorne in golden armour , upon his pauldrones rested beautifully carved Eagles, over his chest plate layer a simple white tabard with a two headed eagle design in the middle, his hair seemed to be brittle and white from old age but upon his face lay the warmth and enthusiasm of a young man.
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Now stepping inside the carriage is a man adorn in golden armour, upon his pauldrons rests beautifully carved Eagles, over his chest plate lays a simple white tabard with a two headed eagle design in the middle, his hair seemed to be brittle and white from old age but upon his face lay the warmth and enthusiasm of a young man.
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Shinshira speaks confidently and warmly "it's nice to meet to high king Flouriff "  
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Shinshira speaks confidently and warmly "it's nice to meet you, High King Flouriff "  
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The high king bows his head respectfully then speaks in a voice that could make s warrior drop his sword in awe " likewise great white dragon shinshira of atosh's kingdom "
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The High King bows his head respectfully then speaks in a voice that could make the most pugnacious warrior drop his sword in awe " likewise great white dragon shinshira of atosh's kingdom "

Current revision as of 14:26, 24 January 2017

Upon touching the radiating name, you seem to have been transferred to some type of carriage. In front of you sits a woman, her beautiful ivory hair stretches far, nearly touching the floor. Looking over her more clearly, you notice that she is wearing a golden suit of armour that is masterfully made for her and her alone, as any other being would not be able to fit its form.

She smiles then speaks "so you're one of those travelers I've heard so much about " Her predator eyes pierce straight through you. She talks once again this time in a mocking tone "you think that I the mighty shinshira would be fooled by illuisary Magic , poor child..." Her voice changes to a more sympathetic tone "though I won't hold it against you child. After all, curiosity is the fundamental trait that makes up your race". She smiles again and tilts her head, "so you can stay and observe little one".

Shinshira then looks at the carriage door; it swings upon open slowly. Now stepping inside the carriage is a man adorn in golden armour, upon his pauldrons rests beautifully carved Eagles, over his chest plate lays a simple white tabard with a two headed eagle design in the middle, his hair seemed to be brittle and white from old age but upon his face lay the warmth and enthusiasm of a young man.

Shinshira speaks confidently and warmly "it's nice to meet you, High King Flouriff " The High King bows his head respectfully then speaks in a voice that could make the most pugnacious warrior drop his sword in awe " likewise great white dragon shinshira of atosh's kingdom "

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