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		+	I see what you mean, thanks for clearing that up for me.--[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 22:36, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

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Please don't post in my stories unless you know how to punctuate. Please review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 21:30, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

You can't see the problems because I corrected them already. Here are some examples of poor punctuating:

You posted:

Hastily, you reply.

"Yeah, its me."

This should be:

Hastily, you reply, "Yeah, it's me."

You posted:

Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:

"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."

This should be:

Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond, "Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."

You posted:

"Alex, is that you?" The woman calls from within the bathroom.

This should be:

"Alex, is that you?" the woman calls from within the bathroom.

--Platypus 22:27, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

I see what you mean, thanks for clearing that up for me.--Jkeyes 22:36, 25 September 2015 (UTC)