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You ran down to the living room where was your wife.
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You ran down to the living room where your wife was.
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-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos to her.<br />
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-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos at her.<br />
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-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. Next sentence she said very slowly. - Did you dug in my things?<br />
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-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. She said the next sentence very slowly. - Did you dig through my things?<br />
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-Your purse drop down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />
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-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />
-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />
-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />
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-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Did you use it when you masturbate?
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-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?
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-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when was the last time you were a man.
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-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.
You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.
You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.
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Revision as of 06:44, 24 March 2014

You ran down to the living room where your wife was.

-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos at her.
-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. She said the next sentence very slowly. - Did you dig through my things?
-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.
-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.
-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate? -And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.

You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.

That's how it's all ended.

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