User talk:NeilPower
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One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT) | One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT) | ||
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Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --Platypus 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)
Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --Platypus 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)
One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --Platypus 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT)
Try to keep your tenses straight. And try to punctuate your dialogue properly. --Platypus 17:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
