East to the park, it's probably empty but you can see shelter there.

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Right now you want some time alone to think and the park is sure to be empty in a downpour while the trees will give you shelter. You run for the trees, but even at top speed you're still considerably soaked by the time you arrive. it doesn't take long beneath the trees for you to realize the error of your thinking. The trees might shelter you from the rain a little bit, but all that water just filters through the leaves and soaks you.
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Right now you want some time alone to think, and the park is sure to be empty in a downpour while the trees will give you shelter. You run for the trees, but even at top speed you're still considerably soaked by the time you arrive. It doesn't take long beneath the trees for you to realize the error of your thinking. The trees might shelter you from the rain a little bit, but all that water just filters through the leaves and soaks you.
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Realizing you need better shelter you run back out into the intensifying rain, looking for shelter. A bridge, a building, or even a wall.
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Realizing you need better protection, you run back out into the intensifying rain, searching for shelter. A bridge, a building, or even a wall would suffice.
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*[[At last you find a bridge on a muddy shore]]
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*[[At last, you find a bridge on a muddy shore]]
*[[A brick building seems to come out of nowhere and you realize it's a bathroom.]]
*[[A brick building seems to come out of nowhere and you realize it's a bathroom.]]
*[[Under the trees you find a sturdy cardboard box, only to realize it's already occupied.]]
*[[Under the trees you find a sturdy cardboard box, only to realize it's already occupied.]]
[[Category:Lost in the city]]
[[Category:Lost in the city]]

Current revision as of 16:11, 14 June 2012

Right now you want some time alone to think, and the park is sure to be empty in a downpour while the trees will give you shelter. You run for the trees, but even at top speed you're still considerably soaked by the time you arrive. It doesn't take long beneath the trees for you to realize the error of your thinking. The trees might shelter you from the rain a little bit, but all that water just filters through the leaves and soaks you.

Realizing you need better protection, you run back out into the intensifying rain, searching for shelter. A bridge, a building, or even a wall would suffice.

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