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“You think your unfaithful father is so great?! Sleeping around with other women and wasting our money on them?!” angrily she stormed out of the room, and then she left. | “You think your unfaithful father is so great?! Sleeping around with other women and wasting our money on them?!” angrily she stormed out of the room, and then she left. | ||
| - | I instantly regretted my choice, but there was nothing I could do, if only I could go back, if only I could change the past. | + | I instantly regretted my choice, but there was nothing I could do, if only I could go back, if only I could change the past. My vision blurred. |
It was the first time in my life I wept. | It was the first time in my life I wept. | ||
| - | + | I didn't make a sound, and I didn't hold it back. In my whole life my eyes were like a damn, breaking apart when I couldn't bear the pain, but now it was like a river. | |
| - | "Don’t go with her, you know who loves you | + | Why, Why, WHY? |
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| + | Dad tried to help, | ||
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| + | "Don’t go with her, you know who loves you more “Be glad that you are away from that woman" | ||
but he just made it worse. | but he just made it worse. | ||
Revision as of 01:39, 27 April 2012
“Good kid! You have my eyes and my smarts you know who to love more.” Mom on the other hand was furious “You think your unfaithful father is so great?! Sleeping around with other women and wasting our money on them?!” angrily she stormed out of the room, and then she left.
I instantly regretted my choice, but there was nothing I could do, if only I could go back, if only I could change the past. My vision blurred.
It was the first time in my life I wept.
I didn't make a sound, and I didn't hold it back. In my whole life my eyes were like a damn, breaking apart when I couldn't bear the pain, but now it was like a river.
Why, Why, WHY?
Dad tried to help,
"Don’t go with her, you know who loves you more “Be glad that you are away from that woman"
but he just made it worse.
Then I heard the car. Maybe if I run out now, maybe I can still change my mind.
