Journey/Chapter0

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"Todays the day, pops" I say to my father
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"Today is the day, pops" I say to my father
"Please reconsider son, the world outside town is extremely dangerous" mutters my father as he hammers a chunk of metal
"Please reconsider son, the world outside town is extremely dangerous" mutters my father as he hammers a chunk of metal
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"It's ok, I'll be fine... besides I'll have the best sword in the world protecting me" I say with my childish grin
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"It's ok, I will be fine... besides I will have the best sword in the world protecting me" I say with my childish grin
"Son, swords are only as good as its wielder" says my father
"Son, swords are only as good as its wielder" says my father
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"Don't worry about me, I'm strong now I can protect myself" I say in a slightly more serious tone
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"Don't worry about me, I am strong now I can protect myself" I say in a slightly more serious tone
"I know you are... come here" says my father pulling out a small bag
"I know you are... come here" says my father pulling out a small bag
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"Its a early birthday present"
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"It is an early birthday present"
I take the bag and have a look inside, there was few things like empty jars, a few gold coins and a belt made from weaved pieces of iron string
I take the bag and have a look inside, there was few things like empty jars, a few gold coins and a belt made from weaved pieces of iron string

Current revision as of 12:28, 18 October 2011

Welcome to Journey: Chapter 0 the prolgue to the actual journey, the story will set the mood and flesh out the characters for the actual start of the epic journey.


"Today is the day, pops" I say to my father

"Please reconsider son, the world outside town is extremely dangerous" mutters my father as he hammers a chunk of metal

"It's ok, I will be fine... besides I will have the best sword in the world protecting me" I say with my childish grin

"Son, swords are only as good as its wielder" says my father

"Don't worry about me, I am strong now I can protect myself" I say in a slightly more serious tone

"I know you are... come here" says my father pulling out a small bag

"It is an early birthday present"

I take the bag and have a look inside, there was few things like empty jars, a few gold coins and a belt made from weaved pieces of iron string

I took the belt out and put it on

"Thanks pops..." I said

"Before you leave son... please visit your mother in town" he said moving back to hammering

"Of course" I say as I leave the workshop

My father is a blacksmith and my mother sells the good in the marketplace

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