User talk:LeonBlaze

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Current revision as of 04:58, 22 May 2020

Sorry!

I am so sorry! I put my message on your user page instead of your talk page. Still figuring out my way around I guess. I've blanked out your user page and moved the message here. I didn't mean to deface your user page!

--Pickles 18:06, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

Howdy!

I checked out your Mormon Missionaries Gone Wild story, and I think it's a great idea. Never would have made the connection between Mormons and gay sex myself. How did you come up with this? Can't wait to see what you do with it!

P.S. Is it okay if I fix capitalization/punctuation errors in your story? I won't touch it if you ask me not to, but sometimes it's nice to have someone else proofread. Also, would you like to capitalize your story title? I can ask Platypus to change it to 'Mormon Missionaries Gone Wild', if you'd like.

Welcome to the site!--Pickles 04:37, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks

It's ok, I'm figuring things out too.

It would be nice if you fixed some of the spelling errors I miss for MMGW. Peer reviews and stuff. Also the idea isn't totally mine. There is a surprising amount of porn like this online. Even an entire website called Mormonboyz.com dedicated to Missionary porn.

Well I'm clearly out of the loop. I never would've suspected missionary porn was so popular.

Also, I just had a look at the new pages you've added. I changed everything to present tense, so I hope that's alright. As a side note, I like the characters so far. Elder Blats is cute, if a bit conventional, and I like the dynamic between him and Elder Pala.

I can tell that this story will be difficult to complete, just from the diversity you offer in the character appearances. You might want to choose just a few character builds to start out, since you can always add more later.

I'll keep an eye out for any updates! --Pickles 23:58, 21 May 2020 (UTC)