Ask at somebody's house for a bed

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"Hello, how may I-"
"Hello, how may I-"
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A girl answered. She is wearing revealing short shorts and a tight shirt, she isn't wearing a bra since you can see her nipples through the tight shirt.
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A girl answers. She is wearing revealing short shorts and a tight shirt, she isn't wearing a bra since you can see her nipples through the tight shirt.
"I was just looking for a place to stay."
"I was just looking for a place to stay."
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You walk into the house and go into the living room. You both sit down and watch some TV together.
You walk into the house and go into the living room. You both sit down and watch some TV together.
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"Nice house."You say."Does anyone live with you?"
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"Nice house," you say. "Does anyone live with you?"
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"Oh, not anymore."She replies."I live by myself with my pet fish, Fishy."
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"Oh, not anymore," she replies. "I live by myself with my pet fish, Fishy."
She points to a fish tank, showing a fat goldfish swimming around.
She points to a fish tank, showing a fat goldfish swimming around.
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"Cool! Whats your name?"
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"Cool! What's your name?"
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"Tania. Tania Soveren."She replies hapilly."Oh! I need to show you your room."
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"Tania. Tania Soveren," she replies happily. "Oh! I need to show you your room."
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You both go up the stairs into a large room with a Queen sized bed.
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You both go up the stairs into a large room with a Queen-sized bed.
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"Is this where I am sleeping?"You ask enthusiastically.
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"Is this where I am sleeping?" you ask enthusiastically.
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"Yup."She replies."But its my room as well, we'll be sharing the bed."
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"Yup," she replies. "But it's my room as well.  We'll be sharing the bed."
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"Really?"You look down the hallway to find another 2 doors."What about those two doors?"
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"Really?" You look down the hallway to find another 2 doors. "What about those two doors?"
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"Thats my bathroom and my other room."
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"That's my bathroom and my other room."
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"Why don't you let me sleep in that room"You look suprised.
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"Why don't you let me sleep in that room?" You look suprised.
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"You can go down there if you want. I just like company, thats all."
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"You can go down there if you want. I just like company, that's all."
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Revision as of 05:56, 9 May 2009

You knock on somebodies house.

"Hello, how may I-"

A girl answers. She is wearing revealing short shorts and a tight shirt, she isn't wearing a bra since you can see her nipples through the tight shirt.

"I was just looking for a place to stay."

"Oh, you were? Come in!"

You walk into the house and go into the living room. You both sit down and watch some TV together.

"Nice house," you say. "Does anyone live with you?"

"Oh, not anymore," she replies. "I live by myself with my pet fish, Fishy."

She points to a fish tank, showing a fat goldfish swimming around.

"Cool! What's your name?"

"Tania. Tania Soveren," she replies happily. "Oh! I need to show you your room."

You both go up the stairs into a large room with a Queen-sized bed.

"Is this where I am sleeping?" you ask enthusiastically.

"Yup," she replies. "But it's my room as well. We'll be sharing the bed."

"Really?" You look down the hallway to find another 2 doors. "What about those two doors?"

"That's my bathroom and my other room."

"Why don't you let me sleep in that room?" You look suprised.

"You can go down there if you want. I just like company, that's all."

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