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| - | Hey I´d just like to say that I enjoy your stories and all but I was just wondering why haven´t you posted it on the main page yet?
| + | Hello everyone! Work is still in progress on the VRX 9000. |
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| - | I'd like to get a lot more done before I do that. But thanks for the compliment!
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| - | I was just checking the 'Recent Changes' page. For the past few days, I've noticed that you've been writing many pages. I also noticed that the sizes of those pages were HUGE! At least double the length of my own story, [[Remember]]. I'd like to say, great job! I haven't fully read through the story(only the Naruto arena), but based on what I've seen, the story has a great concept, and plenty of reading time for those who have a lot of times on there hands.
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| - | Keep up the good work! Once you've finished writing The Grand Arena, I suggest the next story you write not include sex. Since stories that have explicit content such as that never get featured, and I'd like to make your next story featured. Anyway, good luck. I also suggest you put this on the main page already! So that everyone can see this!
| + | -Reworked and Edited all Winter/Spring Cabin Stories (Fall 2022) |
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| - | Oh! And for the Grand Arena, I suggest you put a 'Go Back' or an 'Next Round' option on your page so that the reader can quickly go back. I know it's stupid since that you can easily just press the back button, but, it makes the story feel more polished. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 09:28, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
| + | -Finished Pixie's Blackmail Punishment to 5 Choices (Winter 2022) |
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| - | Thanks everyone for putting forth your comments for my stories! It really inspires me to keep writing. I plan on continuing putting up updates as I can find the time. I also plan on a big session after i've completed a little more on the Crimson Arena of going back and editing everything to make it look nicer, correct spelling and grammer mistakes (which I know are everywhere), and in general make it easier to read. As I work on my writing in this fashion i'll likely be putting out another story, this one not containing adult content.
| + | -Finishing Kinsey's VR Carnival Adventure to 5 Choices (Winter 2023) |
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| - | As a final note, please continue giving me feedback as much as possible! And suggestions would be great as i'd love to improve my work in any way possible.
| + | '''Working on Next:''' |
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| - | == Image linking ==
| + | -Finishing Kinsey's VR Carnival Adventure to 5 Choices |
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| - | Did you ever get an answer on the image linking error you posted a while back?
| + | -Create Lady Luck Ultimate Series |
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| - | --[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 16:18, 8 February 2014 (UTC) | + | -Strongly Edit all Lady Luck Modules |
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| - | == Dirty Me ==
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| - | Hello Narutostory. I just wanted to mention, your level up fighter story is not placed in any indexs. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:37, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
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| - | == You've got a lot on the backburner! ==
| + | You are welcome to edit for spelling or grammar. |
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| - | I was looking at the site's ''Recent Changes'' and decided (after seeing the massive ''15,254'' addition!) to check out your contributions. I'm interested in playing through some of your VRX 9000 games, and I wanted to ask for permission to add some minor edits. If I see a spelling, punctuation, or grammar error I can hardly help myself. I'm contacting you here because I'm a noob and don't know where to find your tags (not sure if your games are private, public, or contact before editing).
| + | Let me know your favorites so I know what to write more of. |
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| - | On another note, I'm wowed by your creativity on these works. Most of them are only budding concepts right now. But it seems like you could do a lot with them, given enough time. You've made some very impressive games Narutostory!
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| - | --[[User:Pickles|Pickles]] 00:57, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
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| - | Thanks for the compliments Pickles! I appreciate them. As I haven't released any of this to the public I don't have any tags. It's just for me, but I'm fine with anyone who stumbles across it playing the games or reading the stories. I am perfectly fine with you fixing grammar/spelling/etc. I plan on going back and editing everything myself once I've reached a certain point with each story but right now I'm just filling in the meat and refining it later.
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| - | You are also welcome to add pages to anything past five options deep. For example in the "Elvish Temple Adventure" no matter what options you choose you should be able to go five choices out. You are welcome to continue the story when the options has six numbers in the next choice as well as anything past that. As getting just five options out in any story takes a long time I don't expect to get further than that with any of my games anytime soon.
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