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Yo. Mind if I ask a question? Do you mind if I put in another choice in the page: "Dismiss the servant (kindly)?" The choice I'm talking about is about pulling a Arthas Menethil. Let me explain: in the WOW novel "Rise of the Lich King", Arthas Menethil is sent by his father to expect an orc containment camp that has also been turned into a gladiatorial camp by it's alcoholic lord, Aedalas Blackmoore. When Arthas is resting, a servant girl is sent in wearing revealing clothing to serve Arthas food and...other things. When Arthas realizes what she's supposed to do, he tries to send her back out of outrage but the servant girl insists on staying. Arthas notices that there are bruises on her (not because he undressed her, of course) so he has her stay over and eat the food she came with so she wouldn't get in trouble. Is that possible? Can the guy have somebody bring food for her and they can make a lot of noise without any sexual contact? I mean, Willow strikes me as incredibly pathetic and...well, it wouldn't hurt to have the protagonist have a choice that would make him more sympathetic. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:39, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana time)
Yo. Mind if I ask a question? Do you mind if I put in another choice in the page: "Dismiss the servant (kindly)?" The choice I'm talking about is about pulling a Arthas Menethil. Let me explain: in the WOW novel "Rise of the Lich King", Arthas Menethil is sent by his father to expect an orc containment camp that has also been turned into a gladiatorial camp by it's alcoholic lord, Aedalas Blackmoore. When Arthas is resting, a servant girl is sent in wearing revealing clothing to serve Arthas food and...other things. When Arthas realizes what she's supposed to do, he tries to send her back out of outrage but the servant girl insists on staying. Arthas notices that there are bruises on her (not because he undressed her, of course) so he has her stay over and eat the food she came with so she wouldn't get in trouble. Is that possible? Can the guy have somebody bring food for her and they can make a lot of noise without any sexual contact? I mean, Willow strikes me as incredibly pathetic and...well, it wouldn't hurt to have the protagonist have a choice that would make him more sympathetic. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:39, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana time)
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Also, mind if you or anyone else could alter the page "Punish her" for the red-haired woman so that, you know, the protagonist wasn't seeming as though he was or is going to enjoy raping her or having an entirely different punishment? Seriously, if your idea was to make her a Jerkass Woobie or The Woobie in general (look up TV Tropes), you've done it by vilifying the protagonist and making him seem a monster. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:14, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana time)
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Yeah, sorry for the mistake. But thanks.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:40, 21 March 2016 (Louisiana time)
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Please include the category even on incomplete pages.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:39, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Current revision as of 13:39, 8 April 2016

Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 01:13, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for pointing that out.

Arf, arf, bark bark. Am I doing it right? Speak on the user talk page? BTW, it is better to reply to someone else on their user talk page, not on your own. They will not see the "You have a new message" otherwise xD --Dirty Me 01:57, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

PanzerLord, instead of actually redirecting a page, you can just change the text in the link with [[Buy the blue haired girl?|Buy her?]]

The text after the | will be what is seen, and the text before the | will be the link itself. This makes it better than turning CYOS into a mass redirect. Please keep this in mind next time you want to change the displayed link. --Dirty Me 14:35, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey! Time for you to give me options at The Exhibitionist! It is a community driven story, so I need your help. Don't make me break out the whips... No worries, I am only soliciting for options, what you want to see my character do. I will do the hard work and write the story. Help me PanzerLord, you are my only hope. --Dirty Me 14:18, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Yo. Mind if I ask a question? Do you mind if I put in another choice in the page: "Dismiss the servant (kindly)?" The choice I'm talking about is about pulling a Arthas Menethil. Let me explain: in the WOW novel "Rise of the Lich King", Arthas Menethil is sent by his father to expect an orc containment camp that has also been turned into a gladiatorial camp by it's alcoholic lord, Aedalas Blackmoore. When Arthas is resting, a servant girl is sent in wearing revealing clothing to serve Arthas food and...other things. When Arthas realizes what she's supposed to do, he tries to send her back out of outrage but the servant girl insists on staying. Arthas notices that there are bruises on her (not because he undressed her, of course) so he has her stay over and eat the food she came with so she wouldn't get in trouble. Is that possible? Can the guy have somebody bring food for her and they can make a lot of noise without any sexual contact? I mean, Willow strikes me as incredibly pathetic and...well, it wouldn't hurt to have the protagonist have a choice that would make him more sympathetic. --Fredhot16 15:39, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana time)

Yeah, sorry for the mistake. But thanks.--Fredhot16 07:40, 21 March 2016 (Louisiana time)

Please include the category even on incomplete pages.--Platypus 13:39, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

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