User talk:Jkeyes

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Revision as of 22:27, 25 September 2015

Please don't post in my stories unless you know how to punctuate. Please review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 21:30, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

You can't see the problems because I corrected them already. Here are some examples of poor punctuating:

You posted:

Hastily, you reply.

"Yeah, its me."

This should be:

Hastily, you reply, "Yeah, it's me."

You posted:

Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:

"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."

This should be:

Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond, "Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."

You posted:

"Alex, is that you?" The woman calls from within the bathroom.

This should be:

"Alex, is that you?" the woman calls from within the bathroom.

--Platypus 22:27, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

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 Please don't post in my stories unless you know how to punctuate.  Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:30, 25 September 2015 (UTC)
+You can't see the problems because I corrected them already.  Here are some examples of poor punctuating:
+You posted:
+''Hastily, you reply.
+''"Yeah, its me."''
+This should be:
+''Hastily, you reply, "Yeah, it's me."''
+You posted:
+''Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:
+''"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."''
+This should be:
+''Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond, "Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."''
+You posted:
+''"Alex, is that you?" The woman calls from within the bathroom.''
+This should be:
+''"Alex, is that you?" the woman calls from within the bathroom.''
+--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:27, 25 September 2015 (UTC)