Erin, captive

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When you wake everything is dark around you.
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When you wake up everything is dark around you. You're completely naked, your body is cold and sore.
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You try to stand but your head hits the ceiling. You grope around to realize that you're in some sort of cage.
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You try to stand but your head hits something. You grope around to realize that you're in some sort of cage.
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You can hear someone crying a few inches away from your cage.
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You can hear someone silently crying a few yards away from you.  
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After all [[Erin: Walking down the memory lane|you've been through]] you're so afraid of what may come to happen.
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After all [[Erin, walking down the memory lane: A beautiful Saturday evening in the park|you've been through]], you're so afraid of what may come to happen.
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Do you try [[Erin: Fellow prisoners|to comfort the crying person]] or [[Erin:hope?|explore your cage for a weak spot and try to escape?]]
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Do you try [[Erin: Fellow prisoners|to comfort the crying person next to you]] or [[Erin: Where there's life, there's hope |explore your cage for a weak spot and try to escape?]]
[[Category: Vampire Weekend]]
[[Category: Vampire Weekend]]

Current revision as of 11:57, 19 June 2011

When you wake up everything is dark around you. You're completely naked, your body is cold and sore.

You try to stand but your head hits something. You grope around to realize that you're in some sort of cage.

You can hear someone silently crying a few yards away from you.

After all you've been through, you're so afraid of what may come to happen.

Do you try to comfort the crying person next to you or explore your cage for a weak spot and try to escape?

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