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			<title>Platypus at 16:23, 10 November 2012</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;'''Your Wonder Women''' would mean a collection of Wonder Women that you own. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:36, 4 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;'''Your Wonder Women''' would mean a collection of Wonder Women that you own. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:36, 4 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; If you don't understand grammar, then please do not post in Smutty Sex Romp. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:15, 10 November 2012 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; If you don't understand grammar, then please do not post in Smutty Sex Romp&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;. Also, any postings in my stories that fail to include apostrophes where needed will be deleted immediately. If you want to post poorly written, sloppy work in your own stories, fine.&amp;nbsp; But don't do in any of mine&lt;/ins&gt;.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:15, 10 November 2012 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 10 Nov 2012 16:23:08 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:Gochisox</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 16:15, 10 November 2012</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;'''Your Wonder Women''' would mean a collection of Wonder Women that you own. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:36, 4 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;'''Your Wonder Women''' would mean a collection of Wonder Women that you own. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:36, 4 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 10 Nov 2012 16:15:50 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:Gochisox</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 03:36, 4 October 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;For fuck's sake, proofread your work! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 23:33, 1 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;For fuck's sake, proofread your work! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 23:33, 1 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 04 Oct 2011 03:36:37 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:Gochisox</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Cannon at 23:33, 1 January 2011</title>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 01 Jan 2011 23:33:27 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Cannon</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:Gochisox</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Cannon:&amp;#32;Created page with '== Grammar ==  '''There''' - That location. (See: ''here'') '''They're''' - They are. (see: ''we're, you're'') '''Their''' - Third person plural posessive (see: ''our, your'')  '…'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;== Grammar ==  &amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39;There&amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39; - That location. (See: &amp;#39;&amp;#39;here&amp;#39;&amp;#39;) &amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39;They&amp;#39;re&amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39; - They are. (see: &amp;#39;&amp;#39;we&amp;#39;re, you&amp;#39;re&amp;#39;&amp;#39;) &amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39;Their&amp;#39;&amp;#39;&amp;#39; - Third person plural posessive (see: &amp;#39;&amp;#39;our, your&amp;#39;&amp;#39;)  &amp;#39;…&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
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For fuck's sake, proofread your work! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 23:33, 1 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 01 Jan 2011 23:33:00 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Cannon</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:Gochisox</comments>		</item>
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