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			<title>DIn0clies at 19:16, 17 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;While I appreciate that my story has inspired you to write, if you can't handle basic grammar, then I have to ask you to write your story, or post in stories by people who don't have the high standards that I have. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:12, 17 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;While I appreciate that my story has inspired you to write, if you can't handle basic grammar, then I have to ask you to write your story, or post in stories by people who don't have the high standards that I have. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:12, 17 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 17 May 2019 19:16:46 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>DIn0clies</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 19:12, 17 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:37, 17 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:37, 17 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 17 May 2019 19:12:26 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 12:37, 17 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I’ll check it out. Thanks. [[User:DIn0clies|DIn0clies]] 15 May, 2019&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I’ll check it out. Thanks. [[User:DIn0clies|DIn0clies]] 15 May, 2019&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Your = belonging to you (Your penis, your pussy)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Then = happening afterwards (I want to do this first and then do that)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 17 May 2019 12:37:28 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>DIn0clies at 20:38, 15 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:15, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:15, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2019 20:38:05 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>DIn0clies</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 19:15, 15 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Also, your writing will need to be edited to up the ages of the characters.&amp;nbsp; Underage sex is strictly forbidden on this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Also, your writing will need to be edited to up the ages of the characters.&amp;nbsp; Underage sex is strictly forbidden on this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;:Hello, Platypus. I was unaware that you had that requirement with your stories and wanted to make sure you know I wasn’t just being a troll. I would also like to apologize for any poor grammar, puncution, and underage sex. With that specifically, I simply was taking an uncreated page and running with it: it didn’t occur to me that that rule maybe the reason it was not being made and I completely forgot. Again, I’m sorry and hopefully this is accepted. --[[User:DIn0clies|DIn0clies]] 15 May, 2019&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;:Hello, Platypus. I was unaware that you had that requirement with your stories and wanted to make sure you know I wasn’t just being a troll. I would also like to apologize for any poor grammar, puncution, and underage sex. With that specifically, I simply was taking an uncreated page and running with it: it didn’t occur to me that that rule maybe the reason it was not being made and I completely forgot. Again, I’m sorry and hopefully this is accepted. --[[User:DIn0clies|DIn0clies]] 15 May, 2019&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2019 19:15:31 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>DIn0clies at 15:25, 15 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Also, your writing will need to be edited to up the ages of the characters.&amp;nbsp; Underage sex is strictly forbidden on this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Also, your writing will need to be edited to up the ages of the characters.&amp;nbsp; Underage sex is strictly forbidden on this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;:Hello, Platypus. I was unaware that you had that requirement with your stories and wanted to make sure you know I wasn’t just being a troll. I would also like to apologize for any poor grammar, puncution, and underage sex. With that specifically, I simply was taking an uncreated page and running with it: it didn’t occur to me that that rule maybe the reason it was not being made and I completely forgot. Again, I’m sorry and hopefully this is accepted. --[[User:DIn0clies|DIn0clies]] 15 May, 2019&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2019 15:25:36 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>DIn0clies</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 12:23, 15 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;In my stories, all choices MUST be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Since your character cannot pass out and choose where to wake up, those choices are not valid.&amp;nbsp; --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:41, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;In my stories, all choices MUST be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Since your character cannot pass out and choose where to wake up, those choices are not valid.&amp;nbsp; --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:41, 15 May 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2019 12:23:21 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 11:41, 15 May 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:25, 10 March 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:25, 10 March 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2019 11:41:44 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:DIn0clies</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with '{{warn1}}--~~~~'</title>
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:25, 10 March 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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