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			<title>BadJake at 14:04, 21 July 2017</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.&amp;nbsp; Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.&amp;nbsp; You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.&amp;nbsp; Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.&amp;nbsp; You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jul 2017 14:04:34 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>BadJake</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:BadJake</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review […'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;If you&amp;#39;re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review […&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jul 2017 11:22:52 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/User_talk:BadJake</comments>		</item>
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