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Chelly6923 at 22:26, 15 June 2011

Chelly6923 — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 22:26:04 GMT

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-	As I was writing my homework down, the intercom came on. ''Mrs. Henter? Would you please send Johny Phillips to the office for just a moment?'' Mrs. ~~Heter~~ instructed me to get up. I didn't bring my things, ~~otherwise~~ I would've been told to.	+	As I was writing my homework down, the intercom came on. ''Mrs. Henter? Would you please send Johny Phillips to the office for just a moment?'' Mrs. Henter instructed me to get up. I didn't bring my things, because I would've been told to.

-	It was a big school, ~~Washington Middle. So~~ it was about a 5 minute walk from my classroom to the main office. All I could think ~~about~~ was "Dammit! They must've found Alex's crack. Shit, shit, shit shit". I wasn't as worried about what I would say to them as I was about what would happen to Alex. I knew that if he ''did'' get caught, I wouldn't see him for a LONG time.	+	Washington Middle was a big school, so it was about a 5 minute walk from my classroom to the main office. All I could think was "Dammit! They must've found Alex's crack. Shit, shit, shit shit". I wasn't as worried about what I would say to them as I was about what would happen to Alex. I knew that if he ''did'' get caught, I wouldn't see him for a LONG time.

-	See, Alex and me have been best friends since we were 5. He would always come over to my house on the weekends, so we could play. He was kind of a gangster himself, but he was smart. He knew I wasn't like that, and he respected that. He had my back many times. He was a tough kid. We started going to elementary school together, then middle school. And I assumed, next year, we'd be going to ~~highschool~~ together. We were gonna be lifelong friends, I always thought. I don't have any siblings, but I sure care for Alex enough that he could be one.	+	See, Alex and I have been best friends since we were 5. He would always come over to my house on the weekends, so we could play. He was kind of a gangster himself, but he was smart. He knew I wasn't like that, and he respected that. He had my back many times. He was a tough kid. We started going to elementary school together, then middle school. And I assumed, next year, we'd be going to high school together. We were gonna be lifelong friends, I always thought. I don't have any siblings, but I sure care for Alex enough that he could be one.



-	When I got to the office, my dad was waiting for me. "Hey Johny". "Hi dad" I said. I hugged him. I didn't care about what other people thought about me hugging him. As a young kid, I didn't realize what other people thought~~. As I got older I realized, and I no longer did it in public. But as you get even older you learn not to care. Besides, no one gives me shit about it~~.	+	When I got to the office, my dad was waiting for me. "Hey Johny". "Hi dad" I said. I hugged him. I didn't care about what other people thought about me hugging him. As a young kid, I didn't realize what other people thought.

	"What are you doing here?" I asked.		"What are you doing here?" I asked.

-	~~The lady at the desk said~~ "He's here because ~~he has~~ to show you something."	+	"I'm here because I have to show you something."

	"What is it?" I ask.		"What is it?" I ask.
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	"Why did you show me this?"		"Why did you show me this?"

-	"Because you have to know. I ~~as a father~~ can not hide anything from you, but now that you know, you have to promise me you won't tell."	+	"Because you have to know. I can not hide anything from you, but now that you know, you have to promise me you won't tell."

	"But dad I.."		"But dad I.."
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	He got in the car, closed the door, and started it. Before he could go, I knocked on the window and said "Hey dad". He rolled down the window, waiting for me to say something.		He got in the car, closed the door, and started it. Before he could go, I knocked on the window and said "Hey dad". He rolled down the window, waiting for me to say something.

-	"Why'd you do it?" ~~He said.~~	+	"Why'd you do it?"

	"Because he hurt your mother." He said. Then he drove off, down the street, leaving me.		"Because he hurt your mother." He said. Then he drove off, down the street, leaving me.

Platypus at 12:56, 19 October 2009

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Blablob at 13:29, 17 October 2009

Blablob — Sat, 17 Oct 2009 13:29:42 GMT

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-	When I got to the office, my dad was waiting for me. "Hey ~~Joseph~~". "Hi dad" I said. I hugged him. I didn't care about what other people thought about me hugging him. As a young kid, I didn't realize what other people thought. As I got older I realized, and I no longer did it in public. But as you get even older you learn not to care. Besides, no one gives me shit about it.	+	When I got to the office, my dad was waiting for me. "Hey Johny". "Hi dad" I said. I hugged him. I didn't care about what other people thought about me hugging him. As a young kid, I didn't realize what other people thought. As I got older I realized, and I no longer did it in public. But as you get even older you learn not to care. Besides, no one gives me shit about it.

	"What are you doing here?" I asked.		"What are you doing here?" I asked.

Blablob at 13:21, 17 October 2009

Blablob — Sat, 17 Oct 2009 13:21:37 GMT

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-	As I was writing my homework down, the intercom came on. ''Mrs. Henter? Would you please ~~sned~~ Johny Phillips to the office for just a moment?'' Mrs. Heter instructed me to get up. I didn't bring my things, otherwise I would've been told to.	+	As I was writing my homework down, the intercom came on. ''Mrs. Henter? Would you please send Johny Phillips to the office for just a moment?'' Mrs. Heter instructed me to get up. I didn't bring my things, otherwise I would've been told to.

	It was a big school, Washington Middle. So it was about a 5 minute walk from my classroom to the main office. All I could think about was "Dammit! They must've found Alex's crack. Shit, shit, shit shit". I wasn't as worried about what I would say to them as I was about what would happen to Alex. I knew that if he ''did'' get caught, I wouldn't see him for a LONG time.		It was a big school, Washington Middle. So it was about a 5 minute walk from my classroom to the main office. All I could think about was "Dammit! They must've found Alex's crack. Shit, shit, shit shit". I wasn't as worried about what I would say to them as I was about what would happen to Alex. I knew that if he ''did'' get caught, I wouldn't see him for a LONG time.

Blablob at 13:21, 17 October 2009

Blablob — Sat, 17 Oct 2009 13:21:14 GMT

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As I was writing my homework down, the intercom came on. ''Mrs. Henter? Would you please sned Johny Phillips to the office for just a moment?'' Mrs. Heter instructed me to get up. I didn't bring my things, otherwise I would've been told to.

It was a big school, Washington Middle. So it was about a 5 minute walk from my classroom to the main office. All I could think about was "Dammit! They must've found Alex's crack. Shit, shit, shit shit". I wasn't as worried about what I would say to them as I was about what would happen to Alex. I knew that if he ''did'' get caught, I wouldn't see him for a LONG time.

See, Alex and me have been best friends since we were 5. He would always come over to my house on the weekends, so we could play. He was kind of a gangster himself, but he was smart. He knew I wasn't like that, and he respected that. He had my back many times. He was a tough kid. We started going to elementary school together, then middle school. And I assumed, next year, we'd be going to highschool together. We were gonna be lifelong friends, I always thought. I don't have any siblings, but I sure care for Alex enough that he could be one.

When I got to the office, my dad was waiting for me. "Hey Joseph". "Hi dad" I said. I hugged him. I didn't care about what other people thought about me hugging him. As a young kid, I didn't realize what other people thought. As I got older I realized, and I no longer did it in public. But as you get even older you learn not to care. Besides, no one gives me shit about it.

"What are you doing here?" I asked.

The lady at the desk said "He's here because he has to show you something."

"What is it?" I ask.

"Come here, and I'll show you." He walked me outside. Apperently this was okay, since he was my father. He took me into the car, where I saw one thing I hoped I would never see.

It was a dead guy.

"Wha.....what is that?"

"That was our neighbor, David".

I remembered now. David. My dad and him always hated eachother. I don't know why. They just never got along well. They'd been in plenty of fights, physical and emotional. But I just never assumed it would come to....this.

"Why did you show me this?"

"Because you have to know. I as a father can not hide anything from you, but now that you know, you have to promise me you won't tell."

"But dad I.."

"DON'T TALK BACK, JUST DO WHAT YOU'RE TOLD!"

I wanted to ask him why he did this. As a father, he always told me something he wanted to hide, but couldn't. Everything. Even the things I didn't want to hear.

"I....I promise." I said.

"Good. I'm gonna go get rid of this body. Just go back to your class."

He got in the car, closed the door, and started it. Before he could go, I knocked on the window and said "Hey dad". He rolled down the window, waiting for me to say something.

"Why'd you do it?" He said.

"Because he hurt your mother." He said. Then he drove off, down the street, leaving me.

''To be continued...''

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