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		<title>BadJake at 14:04, 21 July 2017</title>
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				<updated>2017-07-21T14:04:34Z</updated>
		
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.&amp;nbsp; Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.&amp;nbsp; You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.&amp;nbsp; Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.&amp;nbsp; You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Well that is disappointing. It seems that I need to brush up on my grammar. I will work on it before I post again. Cheers.&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review […'</title>
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				<updated>2017-07-21T11:22:52Z</updated>
		
		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;If you&amp;#39;re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review […&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation.  Try to avoid comma splicing sentences together.  You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:22, 21 July 2017 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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