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Some basic proofreading done, up to the line "So, does your father ever come with you?" Several lines were missing " ` " to start and were therefore skipped by the interpreter. That has been fixed.
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Some basic proofreading done, up to the line "So, does your father ever come with you?" Several lines were missing " ` " at the start and were therefore skipped by the interpreter. That has been fixed.
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Formatting is slightly different. I added a blank line between every line that finished with " \\ " and its proceeding line, up to the same point mentioned above.
Formatting is slightly different. I added a blank line between every line that finished with " \\ " and its proceeding line, up to the same point mentioned above.
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Removed the ";---" that I came across, although it would probably be useful to reinsert them for marking the start/end of scenes from the storyboard.
Removed the ";---" that I came across, although it would probably be useful to reinsert them for marking the start/end of scenes from the storyboard.
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Except for the " delay " command for the /jp/ project screen, all " delay " commands in the story were changed to " !d ". The " delay " command caused ONScripter to crash (for some computers) when trying to skip text.
Except for the " delay " command for the /jp/ project screen, all " delay " commands in the story were changed to " !d ". The " delay " command caused ONScripter to crash (for some computers) when trying to skip text.
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All " mp3loop " commands have been 'erased' by inserting the comment command " ; " in front of them. For now, ONScripter no longer freezes, but there's no music either. Not much can be done about this until there is a method to playing non-mp3 music found.
All " mp3loop " commands have been 'erased' by inserting the comment command " ; " in front of them. For now, ONScripter no longer freezes, but there's no music either. Not much can be done about this until there is a method to playing non-mp3 music found.
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A few extra comments here and there.
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A few extra comments here and there.<br>
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In the scene in which Mark talks to Julie about his wife, there is the interesting idea of quickly cycling a series of backgrounds called static1.png, static2.png, etc. Unfortunately, the text box briefly pops up between each background change, so the previous text flashes on screen. I doubt that effect was intentional. Perhaps the code for that should be changed?
In the scene in which Mark talks to Julie about his wife, there is the interesting idea of quickly cycling a series of backgrounds called static1.png, static2.png, etc. Unfortunately, the text box briefly pops up between each background change, so the previous text flashes on screen. I doubt that effect was intentional. Perhaps the code for that should be changed?
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PS: Removed the line: ";Sets the speed to the default (6), declared above". Why didn't anyone tell me that line showed up on the screen when running ONScripter?
 
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!sd ;Sets the speed to the default (6), declared above

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