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- | + | Diner | |
- | * | + | *Ann nods at Ann-KF, indicating that she's feeling better. It's at this point she realizes she's scratched her own thighs. |
+ | *Lomgren takes Ann's paw in his hands. | ||
+ | *Rainbow-KF huddles into herself, feeling awful for causing all this. | ||
+ | *The pain brings Ann more back to her senses. She asks Ann-KF to help with the bleeding. | ||
+ | *Ann-KF summons a medkit and starts treating Ann's wounds. Rainbow-KF is now feeling really sorry for herself. | ||
+ | *Lomgren turns to Rainbow-KF and tries to comfort her. | ||
+ | *Rainbow-KF looks up, accidentally rubbing Lomgren with her eyelashes. | ||
+ | *Lomgren conceals his shudder of revulsion as best he can. | ||
+ | *Max, thinking Ann is scared of him, tries be apologize to her in broken Feline. | ||
+ | *In the kitchen, Grim stammers about the dog in the eating area and how she won't be going out with it there. | ||
+ | |||
+ | Lake | ||
+ | *Nonah swims up to Freek and asks if he really meant what he said. | ||
+ | *Freek snaps out of his revelry and asks Nonah she means. | ||
+ | *Nonah looks embarrassed and says the word he used mean something very specific in her language. | ||
+ | *Freek asks Nonah what it means in her language. | ||
+ | *Nonah, still blushing, explains that it is the greatest declaration of love that someone can make. | ||
+ | *Freek blushes and looks away, stammering that he didn't know. | ||
+ | *Freek apologizes to Nonah, still looking away. | ||
+ | *Nonah accepts Freek's apology. | ||
+ | |||
+ | Vor's Tower | ||
+ | *Lora notices Nonah and Freek and calls to them, asking Nonah who her friend is. | ||
+ | |||
+ | Lake | ||
+ | *Nonah hears Lora and suggests swimming over to her. | ||
+ | |||
+ | Sage's Tower | ||
+ | *When the music ends, Sage looks about the roof and thinks about putting some furniture up here. | ||
+ | *Inside, the kittens are still on a catnip high. | ||
Revision as of 13:20, 13 January 2010
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Pages 176 to 180
Page 176
Wiki Notes
- Rainbow-KF is the term given to Rose-KF while she's inflicted with a morphic condition. She currently has four-foot eyelashes, rainbow coloured fur, asymmetrical wings, spines on her arms, a rat-like tail and oddly patterned eyes. She also starts the page unconscious.
- Nonah is a Lake Dweller. Unfortunately, I can't find any details as to their nature, so ask AP if confused.
Diner
- Grim, referring to Rainbow-KF, says she has never seen anything like this before, even as an Author. She pokes Rainbow-KF in the right arm.
- Rainbow-KF didn't react, but is still breathing.
- Grim asks Ann to pass the vanillin.
- Ann clumsily gets to her feet and looks for the vanillin jar.
- Lomgren gets the vanillin jar for Ann.
- Grim waves the open vanillin jar under Rainbow-KF's nose.
- Rainbow-KF wakes with a cough.
- Grim asks if Rainbow-KF is OK.
- Rainbow-KF is confused and oblivious to her condition.
- Grim tells Rainbow-KF where she is.
- Rainbow-KF complains about a headache and requests a mirror, as she's noticed her elongated eyebrows.
- Grim agrees that Rainbow-KF needs to see herself.
- Rainbow-KF heads into the bathroom to use the mirror. As she does so, a crest of spines grows on her scalp.
- Kraggi and Grim follows Rainbow-KF into the bathroom.
Clothes Store
- Atescu and Patricia kiss for the first time.
Kraggi's House
- Ann-KF heads back towards town while Nonah heads towards the lake.
Lake
- Lora is playing music.
- Freek meets Nonah and says hi.
- Nonah sits down to listen to Lora's music, ignoring Freek's greeting.
- Freek is slightly insulted by Nonah ignoring him, so walks up to her and says hello louder.
- Nonah is startled and apologizes for being distracted by the music.
- Freek and Nonah introduce themselves and shake hands.
- Freek explains that Freek is just what he calls himself, as his real name is hard to pronounce.
- Nonah says that means they have something in common, then says she was about to go for a swim.
- Freek asks to Nonah while swimming.
- Nonah says not at all, undresses, and dives in.
- Freek is stunned for a bit, then also undresses and joins Nonah in the water.
- Nonah surfaces from her dive, in her true form.
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Vor's Tower
- Lora stops playing her flute to eat some guacamole.
- Lora heads inside the tower. She returns a few minutes later with a pitcher of iced water, a glass and her saxophone. She starts playing the new instrument.
Lake
- Freek is stunned by Nonah's transformation.
- Nonah has yet to realise she has changed, so expresses confusion at Freek's reaction.
- Freek explains that he thought Nonah kind, ie, Lake-Dwellers, were extinct, and is honoured by meeting her.
- Nonah screeches as she realises she's accidentally revealed her true nature.
- Freek assures Nonah that he'll keep her secret.
- Nonah demands a reason why she shouldn't kill Freek to make sure he doesn't talk. However, she knows full well that no one can die in Mossy Knoll.
- Freek says he was adopted by a people called the Vl, who also have to hide their true nature, so understands Nonah's situtaion.
- Nonah is convinced and asks Freek his real name.
- Freek says it's Xxr.
- Nonah tries to pronounce it, but can't get it quite right.
- Freek tells Nonah about his past.
Diner: Bathroom
- Kraggi is making "Ick" sounds and shaking his head over Rainbow-KF.
- Grim says that she's seen a lot of things more disgusting than Rainbow-KF.
- Rainbow-KF tries to remember the last thing she can remember, realising it was eating a sandwich.
Diner: Kitchen
- Lomgren takes Ann's hands and asks her if she's going to be OK.
- Ann squeezes Lomgren's hands slightly as tears start to form from the shock. She asks if all this is a nightmare.
- Lomgren cradles Ann in his arms and begins to rock her gently.
- Rainbow-KF returns from the bathroom, followed by Kraggi and Grim, and apologizes for her behaviour when she "wasn't herself." She also says she now know what caused her condition.
- Xiao has been watching all this quietly and in shock. He now thinks to himself that he's not being paid enough for all this weirdness.
- Kraggi offers to use his CMD to revert Rainbow-KF to normal.
Clothing Store
- Chuck wakes to see Atescu and Patricia kissing. He is pleased by this development.
Sage's Tower
- Sage lies some ground-rules for the kittens staying with him. He then heads to the roof and surveys the town, wondering about the feelings of pure confusion he's getting from it.
- The kittens decide to get high on catnip when Sage leaves.
- Sage decides to not intervene unless he senses actual danger, Instead, he simply listens to Lora's music.
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Diner
- Ann, still badly shaken, demands an explanation from someone, anyone.
- Rainbow-KF says her metamorphism is the result of an expired transformation mix. She also asks Kraggi how the CMD can help, as it's temporary.
- Kraggi replies that any form is better than Rainbow-KF's current one and she should get out of it as quickly as possible.
- Lomgren works out that Rainbow-KF is talking about the sandwich she had earlier.
- Kraggi wonders out loud why anyone would make such a sandwich.
- Rainbow-KF replies by saying that the sandwich was years past its use by date.
- Ann sighs in relief that this isn't caused by the Waste's and changes the subject by asking Kraggu what Grim meant by her being Ann's mother in law.
- Kraggi is surprised that Skippy hasn't already told Ann that Kraggi and Grim are engaged.
- Lomgren realises that Ann is still topless. He blushes and offers her his shirt.
- Rainbow-KF tries to summon some clothes for Ann, but for some reason this fails.
- Ann tells Kraggi that she's been at the Diner all day. She also covers her breasts with her arms.
- Death's staff suddenly appears in Rainbow-KF's paw. She uses it to magically repair her dress.
Ann's House
- Skippy is banging his head on the front door, screeching to be let in.
- A sleepy Rose answers the door, hugging Skippy when she the monkey.
- Skippy gives Rose the news about Kraggi and Grim, then asks where Ann is.
- Rose is surprised by this, but invites Skippy in so she can get dressed properly. They talk while she does this.
Deathmanse
- A robe suddenly appears on Ann-KF, to his confusion.
- Ann-KF realises that Rose-KF was trying to summon the robe and the mistake is because they both hold the office of Death, which confuses their powers.
- Ann-KF tries to summon her staff, so she can try to fix the problem
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TF Shop
- Xaych drags Keb out of the shop by his feet. As she drags him towards Bob's Truck, an argument ensues.
Diner
- Grim takes Kraggi's hand and says he should tell Ann himself. She then turns to Rainbow-KF and starts asking questions about her condition.
- Kraggi tells Ann that he's engaged to Grim, in a very excited fashion.
- While Rainbow-KF is thinking about Grim's question, Grim turns to Xiao and says if he's still hungry he can talk to Kraggi. She then turns back to Rainbow-KF.
- Ann uses her own magic to summon her Frisky Kitty t-shirt. She then congratulates Kraggi, sounding less shaken now.
- Rainbow-KF answers Grim's questions, then her stomach grows.
- Grim offers to cook something for Rainbow-KF.
- Kraggi offers to help Grim cook, which Grim accepts.
- Rainbow-KF, drooling from hunger, accepts.
- Kraggi and Grim start to cook.
Ann's House
- Rose tells Skippy that Kraggi is probably at the Diner.
- Skippy waves goodbye, then runs off to the Diner.
Clothing Store
- While Atescu and Patricia are still embracing, Terra sidles up to Chuck. They quietly congratulate each other on getting Atescu someone.
- Terra suggests they leave, leaving Atescu and Pat alone.
- Terra and Chuck leave and start looking for Ann.
Deathmanse
- Ann-KF leaves.
Lake
- Nonah asks why did Freek grow up in a human-based society.
- Freek says he though he was human for the until he was twenty. And after that he found humans and their culture fascinating.
- Nonah says she thinks humans are generally thoughtless and destructive creatures.
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Town Square
- On the way to Ann's House, Chuck asks Terra about when she was exiled.
- Terra says she exiled herself when a disagreement with Chuck's great Great-Aunt Aura turned violent.
- Chuck is awed after hearing the story.
Ann's House
- Outside, Chuck points out their destination to Terra.
- Chuck yells for Ann.
- Rose, who has just finished getting dressed, answers the door, greeting Chuck and his friend.
- Chuck introduces Terra as his Great-Aunt, the Exiled Duchess.
Lake
- Freek tells Nonah that he an Authorial Demi-Deity, shocking her into silence.
- Freek goes on, explaining a little about his nature and powers.
- Nonah is still shock at meeting a divine being and says as much.
- Freek reminds Nonah that he's effectively human here.
- Nonah asks how the previously mentioned Vlyntyr relate to Freek, who answers in some detail.
Diner
- Grim asks if anyone else is hungry and Lomgren accept for both himself and Ann.
- Grim asks what kind of fish would everyone like and gets three orders for salmon.
- Outside, Ann-KF is approaching.
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Page 181
Wiki Note
- First appearance of Max, James' dog. He a pit bull terrier.
Ann's House
- Rose greets Terra and asks what should she call her.
- Terra replies she prefers Terra, then asks Rose if she this "Ann" that Chuck has been talking about.
- Rose says in a way she is, as she's "the other Ann."
- Chuck is a little distressed, so Rose changes the subject by asking what she can do for them.
- Terra says they came looking for directions about town.
Diner
- Lomgren takes Ann into the dining area.
- Skippy arrives and re-merges with Kraggi, surprising Lomgren.
- Grim is surprised, but simply continues cooking.
- Kraggi says the food is nearly ready.
- Ann suggests to sit with Rainbow-KF, which Lomgren reluctantly agrees.
- Eric arrives and smells the fish cooking, he asks if he can have some. Grim say yes.
- Eric suddenly leaves.
- Eric returns 10 minutes later with a pit bull terrier following.
- Grim exits the kitchen with the dinners and immediately starts back away in terror from the dog.
Lake
- Nonah is intrigued by Freek's people.
- While talking, Freek accidentally says "I cannot live without you" in Aquan.
- Nonah dives under the water to hide her blush, shock by Freek's sudden affection.
- Freek, lost in thought, doesn't notice.
Eshli's Shrine
- Eshli has been hand at work building the place. Now, hungry, she heads towards the diner.
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Vor's Tower
- Lora reaches The Zone with her saxophone playing. her music become so beautiful that various small magical activities happen as a result.
Lake
- Nonah resurfaces to listen to the music.
Diner
- Eric asks Grim what's the matter.
- In the kitchen, Kraggi asks Grim why she come back with the food.
- Ann-KF turns up and is shock by Rainbow-KF.
- Ann beckons Ann-KF over.
- Ann-KF chastises Rainbow-KF for carelessness, then sits between her and Ann.
- Lomgren asks Ann-KF if she can cure Rainbow-KF.
- Ann-KF suggests another transformation sandwich.
- Rainbow-KF uses her antennae eyebrows to stroke Ann's face, seriously freaking her out.
- Rainbow-KF apologizes to Ann and backs off.
- Lomgren chastises Rainbow-KF for scaring Ann.
- Ann-KF checks Ann's breathing.
- Ann slowly recovers, but tears her trousers as her claws retract.
- Max the dog and Eric converse in canine.
- Ann-KF was going to ask Ann if she okay, but realized it was a stupid question halfway through.
- Ann remains frozen, then suddenly looks at Ann-KF, only moving her eyes.
- Rainbow-KF looks uncertain. Ann-KF tries waving her tail in front of Ann's face.
- Slowly, Ann seems to come back to her senses.
- Ann-KF asks Ann if she's recovered while Rainbow-KF wishes she could just curl up in a ball.
Ann's House
- Rose suggests Terra and Chuck talk to Ann, who's should be at the Diner.
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Diner
- Ann nods at Ann-KF, indicating that she's feeling better. It's at this point she realizes she's scratched her own thighs.
- Lomgren takes Ann's paw in his hands.
- Rainbow-KF huddles into herself, feeling awful for causing all this.
- The pain brings Ann more back to her senses. She asks Ann-KF to help with the bleeding.
- Ann-KF summons a medkit and starts treating Ann's wounds. Rainbow-KF is now feeling really sorry for herself.
- Lomgren turns to Rainbow-KF and tries to comfort her.
- Rainbow-KF looks up, accidentally rubbing Lomgren with her eyelashes.
- Lomgren conceals his shudder of revulsion as best he can.
- Max, thinking Ann is scared of him, tries be apologize to her in broken Feline.
- In the kitchen, Grim stammers about the dog in the eating area and how she won't be going out with it there.
Lake
- Nonah swims up to Freek and asks if he really meant what he said.
- Freek snaps out of his revelry and asks Nonah she means.
- Nonah looks embarrassed and says the word he used mean something very specific in her language.
- Freek asks Nonah what it means in her language.
- Nonah, still blushing, explains that it is the greatest declaration of love that someone can make.
- Freek blushes and looks away, stammering that he didn't know.
- Freek apologizes to Nonah, still looking away.
- Nonah accepts Freek's apology.
Vor's Tower
- Lora notices Nonah and Freek and calls to them, asking Nonah who her friend is.
Lake
- Nonah hears Lora and suggests swimming over to her.
Sage's Tower
- When the music ends, Sage looks about the roof and thinks about putting some furniture up here.
- Inside, the kittens are still on a catnip high.
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