MFPC2 Chapter 001: Pages 0001 to 0025 - Revision history

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	*Av, Kari, Kay, Mandros, and Helseth discuss why fish should be cleaned before cooking begins.		*Av, Kari, Kay, Mandros, and Helseth discuss why fish should be cleaned before cooking begins.
	*MDM returns from the Forest hungry. He asks who DeGuy is and then starts making a venison steak for himself.		*MDM returns from the Forest hungry. He asks who DeGuy is and then starts making a venison steak for himself.
		+	*Av and Mandros tell MDM who DeGuy is and how he arrived.

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		+	*DeGuy turns it down.
		+	*Hinote explains why she wants him to be the visible leader.
		+	*DeGuy still wants to help.
		+	*Hinote agrees with DeGuy, but still doesn't want his help.
		+	*Av returns to camp, balancing the bags of food.
		+	*Kari and Kay decide to return to camp as well.
		+	*Mandros starts cooking a fish.
		+	*DeGuy notices the arrival of the foragers.
		+	*Mandros believes the island to be uninhabited.
		+	*Av, Kari, Kay, Mandros, and Helseth discuss why fish should be cleaned before cooking begins.
		+	*MDM returns from the Forest hungry. He asks who DeGuy is and then starts making a venison steak for himself.

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		+	*Kay remarks that it's another mouth to feed, and starts picking onions.
		+	*Mandros asks DeGuy to help them fish and to get rid of the leg.
		+	*DeGuy blows his plane up with his flare-leg.
		+	*Mandros is furious at DeGuy's action and hauls in his catch.
		+	*DeGuy looks for poisonous fish to trick his fellow castaways into eating.
		+	*Mandros returns to camp and invites DeGuy to come to the signal fire.
		+	*Av continues picking berries.
		+	*DeGuy gets a fish and continues making conversation with Mandros.
		+	*MDM hears the explosion from the Forest and shrugs.
		+	*DeGuy introduces himself.
		+	*Helseth threatens to eat DeGuy for blowing up the plane and scaring the fish away.
		+	*DeGuy doesn't take it seriously, and calls dibs on Mort's leg.
		+	*The injured guy sees a duffel bag offshore and goes to get it.
		+	*Atashi asks what's going on, having been away.
		+	*Oz helps out a bit. Kari asks who would like wild rabbit.
		+	*Who? makes Atashi dizzy by spinning him around.
		+	*Kool asks if anyone is getting the Lost vibe.
		+	*Kay replies that anyone who doesn't want to eat rabbit doesn't have to, and continues picking.
		+	*Av suggests rabbit stew in the event that pots have survived.
		+	*Kari captures several rabbits.
		+	*Hinote starts making shelters from her towels.
		+	*Mandros returns to the fire, deposits his fish, and puts on one of his amulets.
		+	*DeGuy asks who's going to take charge.
		+	*Loretta approves of the fish.
		+	*Hinote thanks DeGuy for volunteering himself.

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Mdm — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 18:35:17 GMT

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		+	*Mandros wonders why Kay has so many bandannas.
		+	*Kay ties her hair up in a red and black bandanna.
		+	*Mandros has Buck and Loretta salvage the plane.
		+	*Av asks what else is needed.
		+	*Kay suggests looking for food.
		+	*Mandros goes fishing.
		+	*Kay asks who'll go with her to find fruit.
		+	*Kari volunteers.
		+	*Loretta begins salvaging.
		+	*Av volunteers as well.
		+	*A plane appears to the south.
		+	*Kay starts off.
		+	*Mandros isn't having much luck.
		+	*Kari follows Kay.
		+	*Ba DeGuy orders Mortems to circle the island, only to find Mort's been eaten by a velociraptor.
		+	*Helseth goes spearfishing, but has no luck as his spear isn't sharpened.
		+	*Mandros starts to catch some fish and uses his shirt as a bag.
		+	*Av spots berry bushes.
		+	*Kari produces bags for the berries at Av's request.
		+	*The plane crashes. DeGuy wades to shore waving one of Mort's legs and asking if the group are cannibals.
		+	*Kari asks if anyone hears something.
		+	*Kay thinks that it is a howler monkey.
		+	*Av believes that it is another person crashing.
		+	*Kay is skeptical.
		+	*Av states that something hit the ocean.

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		+	*MDM sees Buck, blinks, and lays down in the sand, completely unfazed.
		+	*Kay calls Buck creepy, then proposes building a raft.
		+	*Av asks who can fly.
		+	*MDM sticks his arm in the air in response.
		+	*Kari proposes working in relays.
		+	*Hinote offers to man the raft.
		+	*Loretta offers to find corn for Hinote.
		+	*Kay notes that they don't know which direction to go in.
		+	*Av suggests going back the way they came.
		+	*The sleepy guy decides to be sarcastic.
		+	*Hinote is obliviously trying to make her mind up.
		+	*Mandros lays down the problems with their plan and asks who'll go stand watch.
		+	*Av volunteers to stand watch.
		+	*MDM volunteers as well.
		+	*Kay sits in one of the seats Buck brought from the plane.
		+	*Mandros asks who'll make a shelter.
		+	*Kari suggests using parts of the plane.
		+	*Kay suggests branches.
		+	*Av suggests a cave.
		+	*Hinote produces a number of towels from her trenchcoat.
		+	*Av notes that that's a lot of towels.
		+	*Hinote reveals why she has so many towels.
		+	*Av and Kari agree with Hinote.
		+	*Kay offers her bandannas.

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		+	*Kool reveals he was going to visit relatives, and advises against walking on water.
		+	*MDM ambushes the Following Plant that was after Kay, and brings it back to camp.
		+	*Kari notes MDM's return, stating she was en route to a software conference.
		+	*Loretta asks if the Following Plant wants a snack or a beverage.
		+	*Cameo starts to share that she was headed to a comic convention, and is cut off by MDM's reappearance.
		+	*The now plane part-free guy joins the others at the fire.
		+	*Kay is startled by the Following Plant.
		+	*Hinote is worried that the Plant isn't fully dead.
		+	*The businessman is now dressed as a conquistador, having wandered through a time portal at the base of a mountain.
		+	*Kari calls out to him.
		+	*Helseth is shocked by the sight of the plant.
		+	*MDM reveals what the plant is, and states that it was better than fighting a triffid.
		+	*Av observes that killer plants would be worse than stalker plants.
		+	*Kay declares that any ambulatory plants are way beyond her capabilities.
		+	*Cameo is annoyed by Kay's attitude.
		+	*Mandros defends Kay from Cameo and returns to his necromancy.
		+	*Kay, Kari, and Av agree with Mandros.
		+	*Cameo becomes frustrated.
		+	*The injured guy starts to fall asleep.
		+	*Hinote admires her pet towel.
		+	*Mandros introduces Buck, a shambling creature made from the bones of the deer MDM killed.
		+	*Av lays down their options.

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		+	*Cameo lands and hopes her luggage isn't destroyed.
		+	*The injured guy asks for help removing the piece of plane.
		+	*Kay goes to help get firewood.
		+	*Mandros asks MDM for the bones of the deer when he's done.
		+	*Cameo tries tugging the piece of plane out of the guy.
		+	*Kay wanders into the forest for wood.
		+	*A Following Plant starts stalking Kay.
		+	*Cameo is successful in removing the piece of plane from the guy.
		+	*Helseth goes to help get wood as well, hoping to see a Following Plant.
		+	*The new guy offers to stop the bleeding.
		+	*Kay notices the presence of the Following Plant and threatens to burn the forest down.
		+	*Kari messes with her clothes a bit to suit her new form.
		+	*MDM agrees, thinking Mandros is a biologist. He charges into the forest to rescue Kay.
		+	*TRG finds a small pond and drinks from it.
		+	*Loretta returns with wood.
		+	*Mandros is confused by MDM's statement and warns that what he's going to do ain't pretty.
		+	*Kari starts a fire with Loretta's gathered wood.
		+	*Kay takes her wood back.
		+	*The new guy is thrilled by Kari's talents.
		+	*Hinote asks what's going on.
		+	*Av tries to make a joke.
		+	*Hinote reveals that she was en route to a martial arts school.
		+	*Mandros abandons his bones and reveals why he was on the plane.
		+	*Kay returns and tells everyone she was just trying to escape.
		+	*Kari asks from what.

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		+	*TRG asks if anyone is hideously disfigured.
		+	*Helseth makes an awkward landing.
		+	*MDM returns from his hunting trip with several deer, asking who wants to help him cook.
		+	*Kari offers to help.
		+	*Kay freaks out at the sight of the deer.
		+	*The new guy asks why Kay doesn't like venison.
		+	*Kay mentions a bad experience with a dead deer in her youth.
		+	*A man comes out of the jungle.
		+	*Mandros defends Kay.
		+	*Loretta offers her assistance as well.
		+	*Kari notes the jungle man.
		+	*The new guy and Chair Lady offer their own theories.
		+	*Kari is annoyed at El Cheapo's sleaziness.
		+	*Kay wishes she'd left on foot.
		+	*The jungle guy warns of following plants.
		+	*MDM laughs at the mention of following plants, stating he's already bested one. He starts butchering the deer and orders Loretta to tell someone to get a fire started.
		+	*Kari offers to start the fire.
		+	*Mandros tells Kay to relax.
		+	*Loretta goes to gather firewood.
		+	*Kool lands, and walks to the beach, having landed a distance from the island.
		+	*Kay mutters about her stupid actions.
		+	*Mandros again offers to defend Kay.

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		+	*Loretta lands in the water just off the beach, unmoving.
		+	*Mandros retrieves Loretta, ready to reanimate her.
		+	*Loretta is revealed to be unconscious.
		+	*The catgirl agrees with Mandros.
		+	*Mandros is upset to find Loretta isn't dead, and brings her back anyway.
		+	*Kari is pleased and takes her shoes off.
		+	*The other catgirl stumbles out of the wreckage.
		+	*Kari tells the other catgirl what happened.
		+	*The other catgirl is not convinced and heads into the forest to investigate.
		+	*The guy in khaki is not thrilled about the crash.
		+	*Kari comments that part of the plane is in him.
		+	*MDM wakes up to find Kari standing over him, gets his gear, and heads off along the beach.
		+	*Chair lady makes her way out of the wreckage.
		+	*Loretta wakes up and starts to salvage stuff from the plane.
		+	*The injured man blinks, then complains about the loss of his shirt.
		+	*MDM goes hunting in the forest.
		+	*TRG lands on the other side of the plane and asks who's still alive.
		+	*The injured guy yells back that they're all dead.
		+	*TRG asks if he can eat them.
		+	*Loretta replies with pleasure that he can.
		+	*The injured guy removes the shard of plane.
		+	*Another guy comes out of the wreckage.

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		+	*An island comes into view.
		+	*Kool floats over to the island and falls away from the plane.
		+	*A guy in first class wearing khakis remarks he needs more whiskey.
		+	*Loretta and the refreshments cart are in freefall.
		+	*The sleeping catgirl is in for a rough awakening.
		+	*TRG tries to cast a float spell with his Ram Staff.
		+	*The blond girl grows a pair of wings and flies to safety with them.
		+	*A woman in a trenchcoat sits in one of the remaining seats, reading in peace.
		+	*The man in the suit refuses to let go of his peanuts.
		+	*Kay grabs Mandros as they enter freefall.
		+	*MDM is falling headfirst and his jetpack kicks in.
		+	*Mandros agrees that going splat isn't good.
		+	*Kay glides towards the island.
		+	*Mandros asks if Kay 'comes here often'.
		+	*Suit man and the suitcase that knocks him loose from the plane enter freefall.
		+	*Kay decides not to fly with El Cheapo again.
		+	*Mandros asks where Kay was headed.
		+	*The chair lady lands on the beach comfortably and dons a bikini.
		+	*The plane wreckage falls on the chair lady and a massive parachute deploys shortly afterwards.
		+	*MDM lands safely a hundred yards down the beach from the plane, and is knocked unconscious by his falling gear.
		+	*Kay responds nervously and drops Mandros the few remaining feet to the beach.
		+	*The TF'ed catgirl lands near the group and asks if they're all right.
		+	*Mandros responds positively.

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