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Sleepyorigami: Page 75

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 21:17:45 GMT

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-	~~Location~~	+
-	*~~Event~~	+	Author Brother's House
		+	*Grim was on a different plane back then having a demi-deity child with a mortal.
		+	*Freek saw the Great Fall and says it pales in comparison to the World's End War in a universe where Ann lives to old age of 70 and Kraggi keeps his current levels of Sanity.
		+	*Ann has a daughter in this world who also survives.
		+	*Grim and Kraggi cuddle to fight off the depressive nature of this conversation talk.
		+	*Elshi tells the story of how she discovered Auntie Grim was female earlier. (Back on page 57)
		+	*Kraggi asks if Grim often brings home "strange women" as Elshi terms it.
		+	*Elshi confirms this then mentions Freek's off-planet lair much to his displeasure.
		+	*Kraggi guesses that he falls into the category of "strange women" even though he is currently male.
		+	Sage's Office
		+	*Nosaj tells more of his dream and the Phoenix Blade's life force capabilities to kill even immortals.
		+	*The rest of this page is an OOC debate about the nature of this dream.

Sleepyorigami: Pae 74

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 21:05:41 GMT

Pae 74

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		+	*Apparent Ages (in years): Ann 27, Kraggi 25 (really 200+), Atescu 28 (ageless), Grim 27 (ageless), Freek 24 (ageless).
		+	*Grim's last name is revealed to be Tolyen.
		+	Author brother's House
		+	*Kraggi looks up the word Freek suggested and laughs heartily.
		+	*Kraggi came to Mossy Knoll following Ann. "Don't tell her." he asks them.
		+	*Atescu tells Kraggi that an "Ann" is the best type of relationship in the book.
		+	*Kraggi corrects Atescu saying Ann is his 27 year old daughter.
		+	*Freek now defines Kraggi as a kiyut for how he doesn't look old enough to be Ann's father through the use of magic.
		+	*Grim and Elshi finish cooking and announce dinner to the others.
		+	*Kraggi rushes to dinner.
		+	*Freek tells Grim her "Teyran is a Kiyut".
		+	*Grim tells Freek to stop using the Compendium like that. She has cooked pasta just as she had told Kraggi she would earlier in the park.
		+	*Elshi brings a pitcher of water.
		+	*Kraggi eats and asks what Freek is calling him.
		+	*Freek explains and Grim responds to Kraggi's compliments.
		+	*Kraggi wonders if such a specific word as Teyran can be in common use.
		+	*Freek tells of Teyran II.
		+	*Grim is angry at Freek for having submitted her name to the Compendium.
		+	*Kraggi tells them he is 200+ years old then asks how old the Author Brothers are.
		+	*They are technically ageless, but decided on the following ages: Atescu 28, Grim 27, Freek 24.
		+	*Kraggi asks if they ever saw the Great Fall.
		+	Sage's Office
		+	*Nosaj's vision was of Lomgren being possessed by magic weapons (pistol and rapier) and then having killed most of the town.
		+	*Sage asks if Nosaj has ever heard the name Lomgren before. Nosaj has not.
		+	*Sage doesn't believe the vision to be a prophecy, but he deems that Nosaj has some psychic abilities and paranoia.
		+	*Sage prescribes a liquid medicine.
		+	*Nosaj thanks Dr. Sage.
		+	*Sage says Nosaj's experience is normal for developing psychics. Details learned subconsciously mix with dreams and such.
		+	*The medicine is a low strength sedative to help Nosaj stay calm and sleep better at night.

Sleepyorigami: Page 73

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 20:31:54 GMT

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	*Atescu asks if a Gzargl is like and informal Nir to which Freek says it is different.		*Atescu asks if a Gzargl is like and informal Nir to which Freek says it is different.
	*He then decides to submit the word Gzargl to the Compendium of Sentient Relationships.		*He then decides to submit the word Gzargl to the Compendium of Sentient Relationships.
-	*Eric the Cleric and James, God of Awesome send Kraggi a note via speed demon traveling windlessly at Mach 2. The note reveals the existence of Bob.	+	*Eric the Cleric and James, God of Awesome send Kraggi a note via Kitty (a speed demon) traveling windlessly at Mach 2. The note reveals the existence of Bob.


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-	~~Location~~	+
-	*~~Event~~	+	Wikinotes
		+	*JJA's lab is 200x200x200 feet in dimension.
		+	*New character: Nosaj. (Jason backwards. Pronounced No Sage perhaps?)
		+	JJA's House
		+	*JJA Greets Bob (and autos Bob's introduction as Bob).
		+	*Bob is taken aback by being noticed.
		+	*Bob asks JJA for mining equipment.
		+	*JJA says he has the giant drill used to dig out his lab. "Why?"
		+	*Bob asks to borrow it so his friend can setup a house of some kind.
		+	*JJA agrees and then asks if Bob would care to come inside.
		+	*Krid leaves and goes looking for the local zoning board.
		+	Sage's Office
		+	*Sage wakes up from his dream yelling about a "bad monkey".
		+	*He starts to read a book on dream analysis.
		+	*Diana (from the Clinc's front desk) enters and tells Sage he has a patient waiting outside.
		+	*Sage has Diana send the patient in. He puts away his book wondering what it meant by "mental breakdown looming."
		+	*A creepy man dressed in Black with matching top hat wishes to tell Sage of his "visions".
		+	*Sage asks for the man's name. It is Nosaj.
		+	*Sage asks about the visions.
		+	*Nosaj tells of a hallway with a pile of bodies one of which is Sage.
		+	*Sage "scribbles" ( :P ) some notes and asks if the bodies were dead.
		+	Author Brother's House
		+	*Kraggi calls them all crazy though not as much as himself.
		+	*Freek says they are not crazy; rather, they are knowledgeable of the Compendium.
		+	*Kraggi asks about the Compendium.
		+	*Freek hands him an electronic copy of the Compendium on a PDA type device.
		+	*A print copy is available in the Grand Library.
		+	*Kraggi giggles as he looks up bad words. He asks how they heard of Mossy Knoll.
		+	*Freek encourages Kraggi to look up Tyungoyu, the most impolite relationship reference in the Multiverse.
		+	*The Author Brothers came to Mossy Knoll after listening to their Multiversic wave radio.

Sleepyorigami: formatting

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 19:23:56 GMT

formatting

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Sleepyorigami: pages 71 and 72

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 19:22:47 GMT

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	*KF spends the next hour attempting to leave Ann's head without success.		*KF spends the next hour attempting to leave Ann's head without success.
	*He becomes aware of Ann's (:rootbeer:?) worthy dream.		*He becomes aware of Ann's (:rootbeer:?) worthy dream.
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	*Rose and Ann-KF exchange glances. "But I'm a girl," Ann-KF responds.		*Rose and Ann-KF exchange glances. "But I'm a girl," Ann-KF responds.
	*KF: "Chitter-mrr!"		*KF: "Chitter-mrr!"
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	*Grim calls Kraggi a tease then whispers "after dinner".		*Grim calls Kraggi a tease then whispers "after dinner".
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	*Eric makes him a Bloody Mary (sans virgin blood) and asks Rocky about his troubles.		*Eric makes him a Bloody Mary (sans virgin blood) and asks Rocky about his troubles.
	*Rocky angsts about his origin story and how the Realtor is a better house than he'll ever be.		*Rocky angsts about his origin story and how the Realtor is a better house than he'll ever be.
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	*Eric attempts to console Rocky and offers to enchant him into a magic stone.		*Eric attempts to console Rocky and offers to enchant him into a magic stone.
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	*Freek clomps down the stairs and, though he sounds surprised, he recognizes Grim right away.		*Freek clomps down the stairs and, though he sounds surprised, he recognizes Grim right away.
	*Kraggi confirms Grim's identity.		*Kraggi confirms Grim's identity.
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		+	Ann's House
		+	*Ann says Rose is her sister
		+	*Chuck isn't buying her story.
		+	*Ann tries to prove her point by pointing out they have the same smell.
		+	*Chuck says that would mean they are the same person not sisters.
		+	*Lomgren walks to the door scene.
		+	*Ann mentions Rose is from another dimension and asks Chuck to drop the subject.
		+	*Chuck sees Lomgren and asks if he is her lifemate.
		+	*Rose says he's not hers but that Ann is certainly interested.
		+	*Chuck orders them to "get to it" then, forgetting about his earlier desire to be on his way, walks to the couch and takes a nap.
		+	*Lomgren asks about Chuck.
		+	*Ann is blushing.
		+	*Rose uses advanced meowing to speak deviously about Ann and Lomgren to Chuck as he goes to lie down.
		+	*Lora leaves to go home.
		+	*KF chants "polar bears . . . polar bears . . . polar bears . . ."
		+	*Ann's mind joins the chanting then she goes to take her shower, forgetting to ask Rose the question Chuck's appearance interrupted.
		+	*KF asks Ann what thought she hid with the polar bear chant earlier.
		+	*Ann tells him it was about Lomgren and made her deserve a cold shower.
		+	*KF translates Roses feline statement from before.
		+	*Ann says Rose is trying to push Ann into Lomgren and then explains her reasoning and thoughts about this subject.
		+	*KF doesn't want their relationship to stay hidden.
		+	*Ann asks when would be a good time for the big reveal.
		+	*KF's thoughts are interrupted by how good the shower feels.
		+	*KF experiences his first "brushing" as Ann.
		+	*Ann asks him about the breakfast conversation on how to remove KF from her head.

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		+	Ann's House
		+	*KF has trouble saying "physical contact" as the physical pleasure of Ann brushing her arm is too distracting.
		+	*Ann gives a devious smile as she asks him "Come again?" just to see "if he could get it all out while she was brushing."
		+	*KF pleasure moans unable to speak full words.
		+	*Ann finishes her arm and stops to clean the brush giving KF a chance to talk.
		+	*KF explains that physical contact with his other self could help. He then asks for "more brushing, please?"
		+	*Ann starts to brush her face deciding to let KF enjoy it.
		+	*KF sends Ann the desire to lean into the brush.
		+	*Lomgren leaves to shower at his house.
		+	JJA's House
		+	*JJA enters the transformatrix to test the FV10 form. Apparently there is a physical limit to beauty and this is it so there can be no FV11.
		+	*JJA makes a video of himself in this form being worshiped by a simulated throng of men and women. He saves the form to the T1001 then adds an audio explanation to his video before broadcasting it.
		+	*Bob had called his maniacal friend Keb who offers to help him with living arrangements if a 20x20 plot of land and mining equipment is provided.
		+	*Bob feels JJA's house might be a construction company so he knocks on the door expecting to be ignored.
		+	Author Brothers House
		+	*Freek says Grim hasn't been home. He then asks Grim to start cooking.
		+	*Elshi asks "what Uncle Nutter and Auntie Grim have been up to."
		+	*Grim turns pale and looks at Kraggi.
		+	*Kraggi covers saying that he and Grim were testing out all all the stuff at their new restaurant.
		+	*Grim goes off to cook.
		+	*Elshi goes to bug Atescu.
		+	*Freek asks Kraggi about his realtionship with Freek's (newly female) sister (Grim).
		+	*Kraggi says she's his girlfriend "at the moment" and asks if there are any specifics Freek would like to know.
		+	*Freek is just curious. He can handle the truth.
		+	*Kraggi tells him of the gender shifts and love making.
		+	*Freek defines the relationship as a Teyran.
		+	*Kraggi defines it as a Gzargl. ;)
		+	*Freek debates the terminology throwing of words like keyoll and teytar.
		+	*Atescu asks if a Gzargl is like and informal Nir to which Freek says it is different.
		+	*He then decides to submit the word Gzargl to the Compendium of Sentient Relationships.
		+	*Eric the Cleric and James, God of Awesome send Kraggi a note via speed demon traveling windlessly at Mach 2. The note reveals the existence of Bob.
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Sleepyorigami: Page 70

Sleepyorigami — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 01:35:20 GMT

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-	~~Location~~	+	The Pub
-	*~~Event~~	+	*Eric attempts to console Rocky and offers to enchant him into a magic stone.
-		+	Ann's House
		+	*Chuck did work in Real Estate once.
		+	*Lora gives him a belly rub.
		+	*Chuck keeps asking about lifemates.
		+	*Rose lets it slip that her lifemate is female.
		+	*Lora congratulates Rose.
		+	*Chuck didn't know 'Ann' was that way, "not that there's anything wrong with that of course."
		+	*Rose attempts to explain herself.
		+	*Chuck is okay with transgenderism citing that Kraggi would approve. He then hears footsteps.
		+	*Lora says it's probably Rose, Death, or Lomgren.
		+	*Chucks eyes water at the mention of Rose (Ann's dead mother).
		+	*Ann rounds the corner and asks Rose, by name, half a question before seeing Chuck and hiding back behind the corner again.
		+	*Chuck becomes upset and starts to yelling.
		+	*Lora says she ''knew'' she was right about Rose's identity earlier.
		+	*Rose nervously laughs while backing away from chuck and attempting to explain.
		+	*Lora stops the belly rub and tells chuck to stop upsetting Rose.
		+	*Chuck, crying very sad kitty tears, reveals that his "cowardice" was responsible for Rose's death.
		+	*Lora finally realizes she should stop talking.
		+	*Rose asks Ann to help.
		+	*Ann joins Rose in attempting to defuse the situation.
		+	*Chuck asks for aquick explanation so he can be on his way. He's visibly sobbing still.
		+	Author Brother's House
		+	*Elshi meets Kraggi halfway and dubs him "Uncle Nutter."
		+	*Kraggi (not chuck) purrs in ecstasy as he likes the name and is excited about Atescu's pie.
		+	*Grim tells Kraggi that it will be a Pecan Pie.
		+	*Freek clomps down the stairs and, though he sounds surprised, he recognizes Grim right away.
		+	*Kraggi confirms Grim's identity.

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Sleepyorigami: Page 69

Sleepyorigami — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 03:27:52 GMT

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-	~~Location~~	+	The Diner
-	*~~Event~~	+	*Grim calls Kraggi a tease then whispers "after dinner".
-		+	Outside
		+	*Kraggi asks Grim who is Elshi's father. Answer: Freek.
		+	*Kraggi likes Elshi and learns that Freek is a writer.
		+	*Grim remembers a time when Elshi gave Freek an accidental "Inverse Mohawk with a blaster shot. This lead him to shaving his head when it didn't grow back.
		+	*Kraggi contemplates getting an inverse mohawk just to freak Freek out.
		+	Author Brother's House
		+	*Kraggi and Grim arrive.
		+	*Atescu (who just arrived shortly before them) does not recognize Grim.
		+	*Grim uses her feminine wiles to convince Atescu of her identity and to let Kraggi join them for dinner.
		+	*ELshi asks if she should call Kraggi "Uncle Kraggi" to which he says Nutter is fine. He also asks of her well being.
		+	Ann's House
		+	*Lora lets Rose clean her face like Vor does sometimes.
		+	*She asks if she can borrow the towel to wear home because her clothes smell.
		+	*Rose agrees about the towel as there are plenty.
		+	*Lora hears Charlie at the door and rushes to answer it.
		+	*Charlie (Chuck) likes Lora because she has cats, but he is looking for Ann.
		+	*Lora greets Chick and yells to Ann she has a visitor.
		+	*Chuck notices Lora speaks cat (she is slightly surprised to learn this) and he thanks her for her help.
		+	*Chuck introduces himself as Royalty and Lora doesn't know how to act about it.
		+	*Rose smiles at Chuck saying "I haven't seen you in years".
		+	*Chuck asks Ann (really Rose) if she has found a lifemate yet.
		+	*Lora corrects Chuck saying this is Rose.
		+	*Chuck starts to cry and says Rose (Ann's Mother) is dead. He thinks of Al-kiraq.
		+	*Rose nudges Lora and says she is Ann and attempts to change the subject.
		+	*Chuck gestures for a belly rub.
		+	*Lora apologizes for mixing them up and asks Chuck if he ever worked in real estate.
		+	The Pub
		+	*Eric check on Rocky.
		+	*Rocky feels ignored and asks for the "strongest cheepest drink. Again."
		+	*Eric makes him a Bloody Mary (sans virgin blood) and asks Rocky about his troubles.
		+	*Rocky angsts about his origin story and how the Realtor is a better house than he'll ever be.

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Sleepyorigami: Templating

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 20:54:10 GMT

Templating

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	*He starts clawing and meowing.		*He starts clawing and meowing.
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Sleepyorigami: Revised formatting format. New Table of contents feature added

Sleepyorigami — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 15:18:54 GMT

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Sleepyorigami: Grammar

Sleepyorigami — Fri, 07 Aug 2009 21:31:15 GMT

Grammar

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	Eric's House		Eric's House
	*Eric screams at the intruder (Ex).		*Eric screams at the intruder (Ex).