Daniel Walpole

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Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.
Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.

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Brief Description

Daniel is one of my characters for the MKRP, a natural born Gal-Zaborian. He's the first born of Archie, thus destined to inherit the mantle of leadership. Unfortunately, not only did he not inherit his father's financial abilities, he also has an incredible meek and submissive personality, with a serious lack of self confidence. The one exception to this is his sister, who can be so annoying that even he losing his temper with her.


Physical Description

A human male teenager, five foot eight when he isn't slouching, with brown hair and green eye. A very lanky young man, he nonetheless possesses a certain wiry quality to him. However, this is hard to notice due to his slouching posture. Generally dresses in the latest in Elledian fashion, pantaloons of denim and sleeveless tunic of light cloth.

Finally, thanks to expensive healing magic, he doesn't have zits.


Personality

A shy, studious type. He's spent all his life living in his father's shadow. He spends most of his time studying anything he can get his hands on.


Powers

Daniel is blessed by Sanje, which means he has an affinity for Death Magic. There is nothing sinister about this, it's just a trait some people have. This, combined with his naturally studious nature, means he's quite adapt at Yogamancy for one so young. The only thing holding him back from being even better is a certain lack of focus. In short, Daniel will study anything he can get his hands on. Such a dilettante approach isn't appropriate for the Mystic Arts, so other than knowledge young Daniel has only made real progress in Yogamancy and Necromancy. he has mastered the following abilities.

  • Inflict Pain: With but a touch, Daniel can cause the muscles of the effected body part to seize up. This is the equivalent of a bad cramp and will generally last about half a minute.
  • Healing the Dead: With enough time, Daniel can completely restore a Zombie of anything but damage to the central nervous system, even regenerating tissue if necessary. As an example, completely regrowing an arm would take an hour, but reattaching it would be a lot easier.
  • Knock Out: Again with a touch, Daniel can sometimes knock someone out. Sometimes being the operative word, as it rarely works. However, if it did then it would last a minute, during which time only magically healing could bring them around.
  • Reanimation: Daniel can animate any human or smaller sized animal as a Gold Class Zombie, or anything bigger or sentient as a Standard Class Zombie. Former takes about an hour, while the latter half that. This being a Yogamantic Ritual, the Zombies are non aggressive.
  • Command Undead: Daniel can control a number of Zombies equal to one and a half humans in size. With works by effecting the Undead tissue itself, not the mind or spirit. (Assuming the Zombie in question has either.)


Mary Sue Rating

4:

Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.

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