User talk:Magikarp7297
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Regarding Featured stories
I 've just noticed that your in charge of what becomes featured around here and what doesn't. It's still a W.I.P, but could you check out my story 120 Minutes Remain? You know, give some constructive criticism and whatnot? As I said, it's still under massive construction (Adding improved status indicators, changing page option names (Which takes forever btw) and constantly error checking), but I've been working on it for over a year and a half now and would really appreciate it if you would consider my proposition and maybe give me advice on any reasons why it might not be 'featured' material.
Message me back in your own time
Adam
As I said, it's still a major W.I.P and I don't think I'm even a quarter of the way finished yet (Even though I'm making much faster progress in comparison to a year ago). I'll be sure to inform you when I'm finished so you can properly consider my proposition.
Regarding non-death endings, I'll be sure to add a lot more of them.
The one-choice pages will be fixed in due course.
120 Minutes Remain is intended for the Mature section so, as I said, there will be well over 200, maybe even 300 pages, in it when I'm done sometime next year.
Thank's for the feedback!
Adam
Regarding RAGE
A few mental breakdowns, family crisis, and long, tedious hours spent writing pointless crap in French, if you really want to know what happened. Combine all them and the result is me completely forgetting about our agreement. Here, I've included a handy equation below:
404 error brain not responding+My brothers throwing shit out the window+Des trucs inutiles=Brain death apparently
Anyway, about RAGE...
I think we should include as many weapons as possible; Guns, knives, bombs, throw them all in. How good the reader does should be dependent on how many people they murder. For example, a 'bad' ending would be one where the reader is gunned down by police or killed by some other event before actually slaughtering anyone. A 'good' ending would be your usual. Bombing schools/gunning down random people/etc. This would be your typical run-of-the-mill ending, nothing special, just a few dozen or so to a hundred killed.
However, we should include one or two 'genocide' or 'merciless' endings where shit gets real. I'm talking about mass chaos and death by any means necessary (Nukes, Massive shootouts, whatever. We'll deal with specifics later). These would be the best endings to get, so we should make them difficult enough to achieve for the reader.
Any other misc. stuff can be thrown in, like you mentioned. It could be rape, theft, arson, or any other criminal stuff. Just nothing too gory or overly sexual, there's already to much of that on this site.
Sorry if this message is a bit rushed, but I'm kinda in a hurry. Message me back ASAP regarding the above and if you would like to add some things or scrap others.
See you soon!
-Adam02oc
Ok, Imma just gonna go ahead and add some pages to RAGE. Feel free to message me about any mistakes or errors I make and I will fix them ASAP.
Adam
Call of the wild
Add a template if you need mate, you know what you're doing. I trust you :) -Irish
Platypus talk
Before i found CYOS, I did other writing elsewhere. How did I find CYOS? I was doing some research on choose-your-own-adventure stories and happened across the site. Back then, there weren't even 10 stories started. Remember, this was a dozen years ago.
If life seems meaningless right now, remember, it is our job to give meaning to life, not the other way around. --Platypus 20:39, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
I believe the spellchecking is performed by your browser, not by the site. I use Google Chrome, and it spellchecks as I write. --Platypus 18:34, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
