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Teejay
Epitaph for a gunslinger:
Here lies Lester Moore
Four shots from a .44
No Les, no more.
-- Teejay
I've seen the all the problems begin with MEN on a T-shirt. I've been tempted to get it for my GF.
The Lester Moore epitaph is very famous. I'm surprised you've never seen it before.
That poem sounds like it was written by a guilt free Catholic school girl. :)
-- Teejay
A judge was doing arraignments, and the prisoners were in the holding cell of the courthouse, being called forward one by one. Four men were left in the cell when the judge looked at his next case:
State of California vs. Steven Lewon Crook
"Crook!" said the judge. "Step forward!"
All four men stepped out of the holding cell.
-- Teejay
You did a good job with it. As far as I can tell from years of practice, good oral sex when a man goes down on a woman involves being gentle, tonguing her clit, rubbing it while you slip your tongue inside her, and basically following her body's cues until she gushes on your face (and then doing it again and again.)
-- Teejay
I judge Teddy to be about 13. He'll lose interest eventually, probably sooner rather than later.
Headline spotted recently: MILF BRACES FOR FAP OFFENSIVE
My reaction: "Whiskey... Tango... Foxtrot?"
-- Teejay
Maybe they are. When I'm alone in the apartment I'll walk around in my underwear, so maybe they just don't think about it.
-- Teejay
After what happened, no terrorist will come near any of her other concerts. You know security will be ridiculously tight. Definitely go if you want to. -- Teejay
A psychiatrist and a proctologist share an office building. They put up a sign on the front: THE DEPARTMENT OF ODDS AND ENDS. -- Teejay
Your English isn't getting worse. What you're describing doesn't have a formal name.
More... h'mmm. Climb and boink, where she climbs a tree and the guys have to climb up to her and boink her. -- Teejay
In a single day, Samson slew a thousand Philistines with the jawbone of an ass. Every day, thousands of sales are killed with the same weapon. -- Teejay
Even for me, a very fast reader, that took a good chunk of time to read. You're an excellent writer and it's very well written. -- Teejay
I'm quite honored. :) -- Teejay
That's very understandable. I do the same thing with the stories I write for Literotica. It's a way of expressing myself and doing things I can't do IRL. -- Teejay
When the Angles (with the Saxons) invaded England, they settled in what became known as the Land Debatable, namely the north of England and the south of Scotland. The acute Angles went north and the obtuse ones south. -- Teejay
Fredhot16
What I was pissed off about? Eh, just the same old smutty crap on this website. I still find it contemptible but...I really can't muster any energy to gripe in the discussions. I just...there's just so much. So much crap and all my edits...I can't change a damn thing because I don't want to change it, I want to burn it to the ground and start again. That's my problem, the premises of these things.
So. How have you been?
P.S Did you write "Nudisma Terena"?---Fredhot16 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May 2017
Mind if I make a few suggestions for this whole "boinking" thing? (Also, why "boink"? Why'd you choose that as a word?)
1. Truth and Boink?
2. Freeze Boink?
3. Simon Says: Boink Edition?
4. Boink Poker?
Just spitballing.
P.S Is this story a real story for you or just part of your rants? And, yes, I get the joke.--Fredhot16 17:48 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2017
How do you think a "sexual horror" story would go?--Fredhot16 12:41 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2017
That was one of my first thoughts: rape. But I was wondering if there are more ways to show "sexual horror" then that, more dimensions. Something more...subtle.
Why these thoughts? Well, I'm just taking genres and mixing them together, seeing what comes out.
P.S Can you help me with some category help? I'm trying to do multiple categories for my "Dungeons and Dragons" review like this:
The Review- Adult Stories| Dungeons and Dragons| Female Elf Paladin Review. --Fredhot16 12:31 (Louisiana Time), 13 June 2017
You know what? Go ahead, rewrite the scene with the spirit you described, just have her SHOW it! Have her SHOW a fucking emotion! Have some actual dialogue! I'm not asking for a total change, I'm asking for this page to actually look like a fucking book! "Present the page better" is all I'm asking. And "make it less skeevy", if that's possible.
And, for the love of god, DESCRIBE THINGS! PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU, DESCRIBE EVERYTHING! I DON'T CARE WHAT IT IS, JUST DESCRIBE IT SO PEOPLE CAN HAVE A CLEAR IDEA OF WHAT THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO BE READING! Hell, I give you permission to describe the protagonist's breasts, just give the reader SOMETHING!
Oh, and you can just ignore the whole "half-elf" thing. I don't expect you to know about them and for this instance, you don't need to. --Fredhot16 9:42 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2017
The groping and pawing happened at the clothing shop, erm, tent.
Also, yes, I know the rest of the story makes no sense. --Fredhot16 17:52 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2017
Enier
TQ for the tips.
Also, you do not need to have a template. That was put there so you know how to make one if you want. It is not required, and is not useful if your story isn't going to use it. If it is, well, you can replace the template, but they are hard to figure out. Let me know if you need help on it.Reply:
Remind me what a template is?
Can you do combination linking?
Help with the status bar! I need an explanation clearer than the tutorial!
I want something like the table in the tutorial, but blue. can u send me the code?
TQ. How do I make A Wiki?
Platypus
Thank you for your efforts thus far. I appreciate your help, and you have my sympathy for your loss of brain cells. At some point, when I'm feeling brave, I'll tackle what remains. Hot and Horny was most written by writers that I pushed away from Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, and much of it is pretty cringe worthy.
"I'm about to pop an egg." There should be a collection of truly, awfully bad lines somewhere. That turkey deserves special recognition for sheer awfulness. --Platypus 12:42, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
Wolfskin75
did this work? --Wolfskin75
I am thinking of a several character story... And like your too graphic. I wanted to incorporate pictures. Non that have copyright but to give the reader a idea of what i am visualizing. I am trying to find a way to pitch my ideas without it being public... But i dont use anom email so...yeah. I think however, i should work on figuring out the mechanics before i start writing. And i invite you to add to were you see fit. I like your stories. (i read some.) --
Wolfskin75
