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DirtyMeStoryTime's review of The Devils Daughter:
Nothing reviewed yet. Sorry, this is over 600 pages. It will take a while. I will make notes on here as I go.

Some random grammar mistakes. Not too bad, but they are there.

Author tries to use extensive descriptions.

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