User talk:Shirasade

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Using colons as dialogue connectors should be the exception, not the rule. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 14:05, 19 January 2016 (UTC)

Can you please get over your obsession with colons? That isn't how normal people write dialogue. --Platypus 16:59, 20 February 2016 (UTC)

Other than the colon thing, your English is better than many native speakers or writers. --Platypus 19:47, 20 February 2016 (UTC)

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