User talk:Tealbird

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Please allow actions to happen. You do not need to have 'began to' or 'started to' in front of so many verbs. It begins to get tiresome reading about things starting to begin to happen instead of just happening!

You might also want to review punctuation with dialogue. And don't forget to hyphenate compound modifiers!

If you're going to post in one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, you need to get your grammar and punctuation right. --Platypus 00:22, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

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