Talk:Call Brandon's cell phone
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This page should be re-written I think. When I wrote the pages leading up to it for starters jessica was on foot. In this page she magically has a car.
Also the bully is frightened to easily by a ringing phone... and a second bully beats him up. When I wrote this I was gonna make the bully be a demon just like our main charecter.
--Yihman1 04:55, 3 November 2012 (UTC)