User talk:JackalRobot

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Ooft! 6/10. To be honest, I expected that. I intentionally chose to make the story linear so I wouldn't have had to make a large amount of pages. Chapter 1 was basically just character development, so you would get an understanding of what a grave situation you were in. Chapter 2 will soon see more choices, and probably turn into some action sequence at the end. I'm only going to make three or four endings. If you would like, I can happily tell you what happens in the end.

Liked your review, your review was much tougher than my ones, but, that's not necessarily a bad thing. --Heyoeveryone 20:44, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

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Hey JR! Thanks for leaving me the message. I noticed the same link mistake, which is a mistake mind you (the slang for guys in Australia is Bloke). At first I was deterred to add the (m) or (f) whenever the choices were the same, and just change the story to any gender, but then I remembered the reason that I chose to give people the choice of their gender. So that different scenario's would occur, without the need to be sexist or anything.

Oh, and I borrowed your User background for my own, I hope that's okay. I can get rid of it if you take offence that I didn't ask for permission first. --Brunosius 09:32, 22 November 2011 (AUS EST)