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Me 'n' My Wife

Numenorean — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 10:04:59 GMT

Numenorean:

You wake up one. ]]
[[Category: Me 'n' My Wife]]

User talk:Platypus

Numenorean — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 09:59:20 GMT

Numenorean:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

== About Contributing ==
I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it
actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point,
but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar
is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me,
Numenorean

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jims Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==
In my efforts to make second person stories have choices only involving the protagonist, I have made three pages unnecessary:
*[[Screams her head off]]
*[[Agree enthusiastically]]
*[[Wait for your next move]]

Their content was rolled into the previous pages. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:37, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

P.S. For all of my griping, I do appreciate the editing you've done on my pages. Thanks. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:41, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Numenorean — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 09:58:47 GMT

Numenorean:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

== About Contributing ==

I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it
actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point,
but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar
is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me.
-- Numenorean --

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jims Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==
In my efforts to make second person stories have choices only involving the protagonist, I have made three pages unnecessary:
*[[Screams her head off]]
*[[Agree enthusiastically]]
*[[Wait for your next move]]

Their content was rolled into the previous pages. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:37, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

P.S. For all of my griping, I do appreciate the editing you've done on my pages. Thanks. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:41, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Numenorean — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 09:57:29 GMT

Numenorean:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

== About Contributing ==

I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it

actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point,

but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar

is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me.
-- Numenorean --

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jims Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==
In my efforts to make second person stories have choices only involving the protagonist, I have made three pages unnecessary:
*[[Screams her head off]]
*[[Agree enthusiastically]]
*[[Wait for your next move]]

Their content was rolled into the previous pages. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:37, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

P.S. For all of my griping, I do appreciate the editing you've done on my pages. Thanks. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:41, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Numenorean — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 09:55:25 GMT

Numenorean:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

== About Contributing ==

I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point, but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me.
-- Numenorean --

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jims Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==
In my efforts to make second person stories have choices only involving the protagonist, I have made three pages unnecessary:
*[[Screams her head off]]
*[[Agree enthusiastically]]
*[[Wait for your next move]]

Their content was rolled into the previous pages. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:37, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

P.S. For all of my griping, I do appreciate the editing you've done on my pages. Thanks. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:41, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

Whip out your cock and tell her to suck it

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 23:11:28 GMT

Numenorean:

You unzip your pant's and pull out your fully erect cock inches from her face.

She looks at it with wide eyes and then looks up at you "I've never seen one in real life before..." she says quietly

"Do you... Want me to put it in my mouth?"

"thats the idea" you say with a grin.

She grabs your stiff cock and puts her lips around the head, slowly pushing it into the moist warmth of her mouth.

For an amateur she is pretty good, and you moan as she slowly takes in all of your swollen dick.

As she bobs her head up and down you can tell she likes the sensation and she starts making slurping sounds.

You feel like cumming right there...

Do you:
*[[Smutty Sex Romp- Cum in her mouth| Cum in her mouth]]
*[[Smutty Sex Romp- Cum on her face| Cum on her face]]
*[[Don't cum yet]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Whip out your cock and tell her to suck it

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 22:26:32 GMT

Numenorean:

You unzip your pant's and pull out your fully erect cock inches from her face.

She looks at it with wide eyes and then looks up at you "I've never seen one in real life before..." she says quietly

"Do you... Want me to put it in my mouth?"

"thats the idea" you say with a grin.

She grabs your stiff cock and puts her lips around the head, slowly pushing it into the moist warmth of her mouth.

For an amateur she is pretty good, and you moan as she slowly takes in all of your swollen dick.

As she bobs her head up and down you can tell she likes the sensation and she starts making slurping sounds.

You feel like cumming right there...

Do you:
*[[Smutty Sex Romp- Cum in her mouth| Cum in her mouth]]
*[[Cum on her face]]
*[[Don't cum yet]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Whip out your cock and tell her to suck it

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 22:22:40 GMT

Numenorean: Created page with 'You unzip your pant's and pull out your fully erect cock inches from her face. She looks at it with wide eyes and then looks up at you "I've never seen one in real life before.…'

You unzip your pant's and pull out your fully erect cock inches from her face.

She looks at it with wide eyes and then looks up at you "I've never seen one in real life before..." she says quietly

"Do you... Want me to put it in my mouth?"

"thats the idea" you say with a grin.

She grabs your stiff cock and puts her lips around the head, slowly pushing it into the moist warmth of her mouth.

For an amateur she is pretty good, and you moan as she slowly takes in all of your swollen dick.

As she bobs her head up and down you can tell she likes the sensation and she starts making slurping sounds.

You feel like cumming right there...

Do you:
*[[Cum in her mouth]]
*[[Cum on her face]]
*[[Don't cum yet]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Tell your slave to grab the bunny girl

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 22:10:29 GMT

Numenorean:

"Right then, grab that wench servant." You command, pointing at the girl with the bunny ears.

"b-but sir..." your slave protests and you strike him across the face with the flat end of your sword

"Don't question your master!" you shout. The slave nods quickly and rushes over to girl and grabs her.

She yets out a yelp and starts struggling, and her leotard gets ripped in the process, exposing her large round breasts.

You get aroused at the site of this and start rubbing your crotch

"bring her over here" you command your servant. He obeys and takes the girl over to you and throws her in front of you on her knees.

She looks up at you with big scared eyes and asks "w-what are you going to do with me?"

Do You:
*[[Whip out your cock and tell her to suck it]]
*[[Ask her why she is wearing bunny ears and a leotard]]
*[[Tell her to suck your slaves dick]]
*[[tell her to take off her clothes]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Tell your slave to grab the bunny girl

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 22:09:30 GMT

Numenorean: Created page with ' "Right then, grab that wench servant." You command, pointing at the girl with the bunny ears. "b-but sir..." your slave protests and you strike him across the face with the fla…'

"Right then, grab that wench servant." You command, pointing at the girl with the bunny ears.

"b-but sir..." your slave protests and you strike him across the face with the flat end of your sword

"Don't question your master!" you shout. The slave nods quickly and rushes over to girl and grabs her.

She yets out a yelp and starts struggling, and her leotard get ripped, exposing her large round breasts.

You get aroused at the site of this and start rubbing your crotch

"bring her over here" you command your servant. He obeys and takes the girl over to you and throws her in front of you on her knees.

She looks up at you with big scared eyes and asks "w-what are you going to do with me?"

Do You:
*[[Whip out your cock and tell her to suck it]]
*[[Ask her why she is wearing bunny ears and a leotard]]
*[[Tell her to suck your slaves dick]]
*[[tell her to take off her clothes]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:52:36 GMT

Numenorean:

You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will

"y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor

Do you:
*[[Tell your slave to give you head]]
*[[Tell your slave to grab the bunny girl]]
*[[Tell your slave to bend over and prepare to be fucked]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Dance Studio]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:50:53 GMT

Numenorean:

You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will

"y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor

Do you:
*[[Tell your slave to give you head]]
*[[Tell your slave to grab the bunny girl]]
*[[Tell your slave to bend over and prepare to be fucked]]

{{Status|Location=''The Dance Studio''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:46:12 GMT

Numenorean:

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:44:37 GMT

Numenorean:

You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will

"y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor

Do you:
*[[Tell the man to give you head]]
*[[Tell the man to grab the bunny girl]]
*[[Tell the man to bend over and prepare to be fucked]]

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:42:32 GMT

Numenorean:

You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will
"y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor

Do you:
*[[Tell the man to give you head]]
*[[Tell the man to grab the bunny girl]]
*[[Tell the man to bend over and prepare to be fucked]]

Claim the man as your servant

Numenorean — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:36:45 GMT

Numenorean: Created page with 'You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will "y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor'

You tell the man that he's your slave now and has to submit to your will
"y-yes master" he say's, looking down at the floor