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Category:Psycho Killer and the Creatures of Blood

Elementor11234 — Wed, 12 Apr 2017 21:20:09 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'Psycho Killer and the Creators of Blood/Category'

[[Psycho Killer and the Creators of Blood/Category]]

Talk:Jarklos the Psycho Killer

Elementor11234 — Wed, 12 Apr 2017 21:18:18 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'If u want to change my pages. Dont COPYRIGHT WARNING!!'

If u want to change my pages. Dont COPYRIGHT WARNING!!

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Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 15:26:57 GMT

Elementor11234: /* Shut your mouth */

No. You do not get to come here and obliterate someone else's story. Choose a new title and write a story without writing over someone else's work. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:19, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Try reading the [[tutorial]]. And if you create a new page and the links are already blue, edit your page and change your links. DO NOT write over an existing page or you will be banned from the site for vandalism. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

== Shut your mouth ==

Hey this is my own story i made ok. Someone edited my story and i did not like it so i changed it. SO butt out moron.

{{warn1}}

Also, if you want to respond to something someone has said on your talk page, you should post the response on ''their'' talk page, to insure that they see it. You might want to talk to other people politely, especially if you're addressing the sysop, who has the ability to ban you from the site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:47, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

{{warn2}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:18, 11 April 2017 (UTC)

--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 15:23, 11 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 15:26, 11 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234 "Sorry but i don't like that you said that because this is my story i made up and someone tried to change it and put their story in it so tell them to stop changing my story!

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Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 15:23:59 GMT

Elementor11234: /* Shut your mouth */

Stab him in the head with a machete

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:29:40 GMT

Elementor11234:

You stab him and he stays still. He is now dead, again.

Do you

[[Kill your wife]]

[[Kill your 9-year old son]]

[[Kill your 17-year old daughter]]

[[Go to the city alone]]

[[Go to the city with your wife and 2 children]]

Stab him in the head with a machete

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:28:44 GMT

Elementor11234:

You stab him and he stays still. He is now dead, again.

Do you

[[Kill your wife]]

[[Kill your 9-year old son]]

[[Kill your 17-year old daughter]]

[[Go to the city]]

Stab him in the head with a machete

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:27:58 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You stab him and he stays still. He is now dead, again. Do you Kill your wife Kill your 9 son Kill your 17 daughter Go to the city'

You stab him and he stays still. He is now dead, again.

Do you

[[Kill your wife]]

[[Kill your 9 son]]

[[Kill your 17 daughter]]

[[Go to the city]]

Use your own strength

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:21:34 GMT

Elementor11234:

Your dad breaks down the door. Using all your strength you punch him in the throat (adam's apple).
Your dad stands there for a minute, then falls to the ground. He is clutching his throat and coughing up copious amounts of blood.
He soon dies.
10 minutes later you hear a groaning sound. You look down and see your dad with his mouth open wide. His skin complexion is greyish-green and wrinkly and a foul odor like the stench of death is coming from him.

Do you

[[Stab him in the head with a machete]]

[[See what he is going to do]]

Use your own strength

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:21:03 GMT

Elementor11234:

Your dad breaks down the door. Using all your strength you punch him in the throat (adam's apple).
Your dad stands there for a minute, then falls to the ground. He is clutching his throat and coughing up copious amounts of blood.
He soon dies.
10 minutes later you hear a groaning sound. You look down and see your dad with his mouth open wide. His skin complexion is greyish-green and wrinkly and a foul odor is coming from him.

Do you

[[Stab him in the head with a machete]]

[[See what he is going to do]]

Use your own strength

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:20:02 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'Your dad breaks down the door. Using all your strength you punch him in the throat (adam's apple). Your dad stands there for a minute, then falls to the ground. He is clutching h…'

Your dad breaks down the door. Using all your strength you punch him in the throat (adam's apple).
Your dad stands there for a minute, then falls to the ground. He is clutching his throat and coughing up copious amounts of blood.
He soon dies.
10 minutes later you hear a groaning sound. You look down and see your dad with his mouth open wide. His skin complexion is grey and wrinkly and a foul odor is coming from him.

Do you

[[Stab him in the head with a machete]]

[[See what he is going to do]]

Slam the door in his face and lock the door

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:07:01 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You have to find a weapon to use and fast. Do you: Grab the machete Grab the flamethrower Use your own strength Grab the MG40 (Machine Gun 40)'

You have to find a weapon to use and fast.
Do you:

[[Grab the machete]]

[[Grab the flamethrower]]

[[Use your own strength]]

[[Grab the MG40 (Machine Gun 40)]]

Jarklos the Psycho Killer

Elementor11234 — Tue, 11 Apr 2017 02:04:05 GMT

Elementor11234:

You are Jarklos. Your name used to be Davis. Your homeless mother left you for a grain of rice when you were 11 and your dad scarred up your face with a machete when she did. You are 40 years old. You are bald. You have a daughter and a son who adores you and a wife who loves you.
You still live with your dad. He beats you constantly and tortues you in front of your wife and children. Your dad is not a psycho, he is an alcoholic.
One day you have had enough, You change your name to Jarklos. "Jarklos the Psycho Killer." You start to kill people and get away with it.

Today you wake up and stumble out of your bedroom door. Your dad is waiting for you outside the door. He has a chain with metal spikes that are hot in his hands. "Time for your punishment." he says with a sneer.

Do you;

[[Try to grab the chain]]

[[Accept the punishment]]

[[Slam the door in his face and lock the door]]

[[Make a break for it.]]

[[Pretend to accept the punishment, but at the last 2 seconds, jump out the window]]
[[Category:Psycho Killer and the Creatures of Blood]]

Your dad in the Stomach

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 22:25:45 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You stab your dad in the stomach. He falls to the ground. Happy that he is dead, you sling him over your shoulders like a deer. Just as you open the door you hear a groaning in y…'

You stab your dad in the stomach. He falls to the ground. Happy that he is dead, you sling him over your shoulders like a deer. Just as you open the door you hear a groaning in your ear. You turn around and see that your dad has turned into a.... (you died before u can say the word).

Your dad in the Leg

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 21:52:43 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You stab your dad in the leg. Your dad kicks your neck with the macheted leg. The machete slices your neck. You are dead.'

You stab your dad in the leg. Your dad kicks your neck with the macheted leg. The machete slices your neck. You are dead.

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Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 21:48:12 GMT

Elementor11234: /* Shut your mouth */ new section

Leg

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:47:30 GMT

Elementor11234:

Your dad falls over and lands on top of you. You try to get up. As you do the machete stabs your leg and tears up your ACL. You die from exhaustion.

Head

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:43:05 GMT

Elementor11234:

You stab your dad in the head. Your dad does not die. "You idiot!" he says. He grabs the machete from his head and throws it horizontally at your eyes. You cannot see anymore. You take a step back and fall out the window.
You fall into an empty grave. The grave closes on you.
3 days later you die from being buried alive.

The machete

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:39:54 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You grab your machete just as your dad breaks down the door. Your dad tries to whip the hot, spiky, metal chain at your stomach. You duck and stab your dad in the, Stomach …'

You grab your machete just as your dad breaks down the door.
Your dad tries to whip the hot, spiky, metal chain at your stomach.
You duck and stab your dad in the,

[[Stomach]]

[[Eye]]

[[Head]]

[[Leg]]

[[Foot]]

[[Neck]]

Slam the door in his face

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:34:44 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You slam the door in your dad's face. You have to choose one of your weapons. Do you choose: The machete The Flamethrower The MG40. Your own strength.'

You slam the door in your dad's face.
You have to choose one of your weapons.

Do you choose:

[[The machete]]

[[The Flamethrower]]

[[The MG40.]]

[[Your own strength.]]

Try to grab the chain

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:30:50 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You grab the chain. Your dad pushes the chains hot spikes into your hand. Your dad heaves you against the wall and the spikes stay stuck on the wall. 2 days later you die. The la…'

You grab the chain. Your dad pushes the chains hot spikes into your hand. Your dad heaves you against the wall and the spikes stay stuck on the wall. 2 days later you die. The last thing you see is your dad's sneer.

Accept the punishment

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:27:56 GMT

Elementor11234:

You accept the punishment. Your dad wraps the chain around you and throws you out the window.
You die of burning skin and blood loss before your hit the ground.

Make a break for it

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:17:32 GMT

Elementor11234:

You try to make a break for it. Your dad whips the chain like a lasso and the chain wraps around your head. The burning metal spikes dig into your brain and melt it till it's dust and kill you.
The End.

Make a break for it

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:16:55 GMT

Elementor11234:

You try to make a break for it. Your dad whips the chain like a lasso and the chain wraps around your head. The burning metal spikes dig into you and kill you.
The End.

Make a break for it

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:16:35 GMT

Elementor11234:

You try to make a break for it. Your dad whips the chain like a laso an the chain wraps around your head. The burning metal spikes dig into you and kill you.
The End.

Make a break for it

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:15:59 GMT

Elementor11234:

You try to make a break for it. Your dad whips the chain like and also an the chain wraps around your head. The burning metal spikes dig into you and kill you.
The End.

Jarklos the Psycho Killer

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:13:24 GMT

Elementor11234:

You are Jarklos. Your name used to be Davis. Your homeless mother left you for a grain of rice when you were 11 and your dad scarred up your face with a machete when she did. You are 40 years old. You are bald. You have a daughter and a son who adores you and a wife who loves you.
You still live with your dad. He beats you constantly and tortues you in front of your wife and children. Your dad is not a psycho, he is an alcoholic.
One day you have had enough, You change your name to Jarklos. "Jarklos the Psycho Killer." You start to kill people and get away with it.

Today you wake up and stumble out of your bedroom door. Your dad is waiting for you outside the door. He has a chain with metal spikes that are hot in his hands. "Time for your punishment." he says with a sneer.

Do you;

[[Try to grab the chain]]

[[Accept the punishment]]

[[Slam the door in his face]]

[[Make a break for it]]

[[Pretend to accept the punishment, but at the last 2 seconds, jump out the window]]

Jarklos the Psycho Killer

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 20:12:12 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'You are Jarklos. Your name used to be Davis. Your homeless mother left you for a grain of rice when you were 11 and your dad scarred up your face with a machete when she did. You…'

You are Jarklos. Your name used to be Davis. Your homeless mother left you for a grain of rice when you were 11 and your dad scarred up your face with a machete when she did. You are 40 years old. You are bald. You have a daughter and a son who adores you and a wife who loves you.
You still live with your dad. He beats you constantly and tortues you in front of your wife and children. Your dad is not a psycho, he is an alcoholic.
One day you have had enough, You change your name to Jarklos. "Jarklos the Psycho Killer." You start to kill people and get away with it.

Today you wake up and stumble out of your bedroom door. Your dad is waiting for you outside the door. He has a chain with metal spikes that are hot in his hands. "Time for your punishment." he says with a sneer.

Do you;

[[Try to grab the chain]]
[[Accept the punishment]]
[[Slam the door in his face]]
[[Make a break for it]]
[[Pretend to accept the punishment, but at the last 2 seconds, jump out the window]]

Psycho Killer and the Creatures of Blood

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 19:57:32 GMT

Elementor11234: Created page with 'There are 3 "Main" characters in this story. Each character just as important as the first. Here are the 3 characters. They will tie together in the story. Jarklos- This charac…'

There are 3 "Main" characters in this story. Each character just as important as the first.

Here are the 3 characters. They will tie together in the story.

Jarklos- This character is the Crazy and enjoys killing anything alive. He wears raggedy clothes with tears in them.

Sati- She is the 5th most powerful the creature of blood in the story.

Jac-The detective and master of disguise.

Will you be;

[[Jarklos the Psycho Killer]]

[[Sati the 5th most powerful creature of blood]]

[[Jac the Detective]]

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Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 19:48:41 GMT

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User talk:Platypus

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 19:30:15 GMT

Elementor11234: /* CREATING YOUR STORY */ new section

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive6]]

<b> >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. </b>

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

Is it O.K to delete stories that have a few pages and that nobody has worked on for what seems like forever? Or at least move it to the pit?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:14 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my ([[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --[[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]

== Moving project ==

Hi Platypus,

Would you be interested in moving the project to its own domain and server? It's become painfully clear EditThis is not capable of supporting the project's infrastructure and is hindering the continued growth of the project. I've noticed several issues which are causing problems for CYOS:

* The throttling is disrupting both readers and writers from fully enjoying the stories.
* Excessive abuse filters are causing administrative issues for you.
* Lack of anti-abuse tools makes it extremely inefficient to counter abuse.
* Extremely outdated MediaWiki installation which hasn't been updated in nearly 8 years.

We can fix all of the above problems and implement a mass undo feature, a mobile version of the website, and do much more to create a modern CYOS-type website once we move to a new domain and server. Since CYOS doesn't allow user to user emails, could you perhaps contact me at floatingspace@protonmail.com to discuss specifics? Thanks. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 21:47, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

:Ya, it's just the actual lead administrator isn't reachable and appears to have abandoned the project years ago for you to run. There's really nothing stopping the members of the community from getting up and moving their stories and content to a new website that's actually managed and has the features CYOS needs. For example, I think an actual notification system (see the Echo extension available for MediaWiki) would be helpful for writers to keep track of new story developments. There are lots of useful features available to newer versions of MediaWiki. I think also thinking of a client-side story customization tool, which would allow readers to customize the names and other parameters of stories without changing the story for everyone else. In short, there's great potential in the project, but EditThis is hindering progress. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 16:27, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

::So what's your verdict on moving? Individuals can of course move stories, but a mass organized effort would probably be better and help build an actual community on a new platform that's actually maintained. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 17:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

Sorry Platypus, but I will let you deal with [[User talk:John Smith]] and his new SSR pages [[You must be mistaken]] and [[Rip open the Peace Corps girl's shirt]]. I thought about adding the category to those pages and sending him a warning, but since that is your story, I thought it would be better to just let you know and decide if you wanted to just fix them or delete them, and how you wanted to warn him. Anyways, just letting you know. Feel free to stop by my story and let me know what you think if you have the time ^.^ Working hard on it, but not sure if it is good to go into the details that I am. btw, the story is [[Masochist me]]. Well, the one I am working on currently. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have asked Teejay, but, he isn't really that strong in critiquing. I have been trying to write my Masochist me, and been hung up on my training. I am enjoying writing it alot, and trying to make sure that the reader actually understand sex, as opposed to some of the stuff that ends up in the stories on here. But, I was thinking. I am wondering, should I even bother writing this? I mean, the entire story, while it will have some vanilla sex in it, and might use a little of the current material I am writing as fodder, it is not really "the story". I realize that there are many stories here that have inconsistencies, and go off on some side thing that have nothing to do with the plot, but I am wondering if there is any use in all this research and writing. It helps, slightly, to highlight the main character, show the reader what she is like, what she is experiencing, and compares and contrasts some of the differences between her and a normal, vanilla woman, so I know it isn't completely pointless. I am also having fun researching the different steps in sex, and trying to teach the reader about human sexuality, but it is not an educational story either. Can you let me know your thoughts? Is my The teacher part of the story pointless, a waste of time, etc? Will readers even care about this part, since they are probably coming to the story to read about a woman being slapped and hit, tied and bound, tortured and humiliated? I mean, to me, this feels needed, just to get the users to think about the world she is living in, and about who she is herself. But, well, I am not the other readers on this site. Am I going to far, and should stick to simple, "I moaned as the paddle fell across my ass, red welt left behind. He grabbed my hair, forcing my head up from across his knee, and held my gaze to his. "Are you going to be good now, or do you need more?" I shot him my best defiant look. "Well, in that case," with that, he stopped talking, shoved me back over his knee and brought the belt down over and over and over again. My ass was on fire, which only make me wetter, and forced me to moan and scream, cry and kick harder. God, I was about to climax from the sheer sweetness of the pain, mind wrapped in a blissful haze."

Also, is what I am writing on the teacher page any good? Is it redundant? Too long? Does it captivate, or just bore? Is the writing style okay? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:44, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

== Simple Question ==

Hey, Platypus, I seem to be having a rather strange issue, and since you seem to get around in this site, figured I would ask you. I'm working on my story [[Fallout: New Vegas]], and having a small issue with the category pages. More specifically, the page counter. On the "F" page, I tried to configure it like other stories to count the number of pages in the category "FNV". When I am logged out, the counter says one page. When I am logged in, it says the actual amount (still small, just starting), but I would like to figure out why this is and how to fix it. Anyways, whenever you get a chance if you could look at it or give me an answer it would be greatly appreciated.

Well, thank you anyways for the help, it would have bugged me for a while.

Hola i need help creating a story but i dont know how to make a you choose story plz help me-Elementor11234
p.s. sorry for editing out your stuff.

== CREATING YOUR STORY ==

HELLO I NEED HELP ON CREATING MY OWN STORY WITHOUT JUST EDITING SOMEONE ELSES STORY NEED HELP IMMEDIATLY
--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 19:30, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

User talk:Platypus

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 19:26:57 GMT

Elementor11234:

The Tournament

Elementor11234 — Mon, 10 Apr 2017 19:02:36 GMT

Elementor11234:

You are a slave in the roman empire. The date is March 10th, 1201. You are not just any slave, you are King Caesar's slave! "Slaveboy get me food!" the king shouts.

Do you:
*[[Sit back and don’t do anything]]
*[[Punch the king.]]
*[[Get the king food.]]
*[[Go to the kitchen]]

[[Category: The Tournament]]