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TFA: Bring out your female prisoner interrogation machine

Bammy — Mon, 28 Dec 2015 07:09:56 GMT

Bammy: Created page with 'You now realise that a more intense interrogation method is needed to break through Rey's mental defenses. After ordering a passing stormtrooper to fetch the 'female prisoner int…'

You now realise that a more intense interrogation method is needed to break through Rey's mental defenses. After ordering a passing stormtrooper to fetch the 'female prisoner interrogation machine' you tell Rey what is in store for her.

"The device I am about to use on you is specifically designed for use on women prisoners" you say in your deep, monotonous voice. "It will stimulate your intimate body parts and force you to reveal what you know of Skywalker's location".

A look of horror spreads across Rey's face as you describe her fate, making you eager to begin her interrogation.

After only a few minutes wait, the stormtrooper wheels a formidable looking device into the interrogation room. It consisted of a large black box containing a motor with two phalluses protruding from one end. Rey had no doubt as to where these were going to end up.

"Please" she whimpers feebily "You don't have to do this . . . just let me go .. please."

Her pleading means nothing to you, so you line up the phalluses with Rey's pussy and ass and reach for the controls.

What do you do next?
*[[TFA: Have the 1st phallus penetrate her pussy.]]
*[[TFA: Have the 2nd phallus penetrate her ass.]]
*[[TFA: Fill both her holes!]]

{{StarStatus|char=Kylo Ren|movie=The Force Awakens|location=Interrogation Room}}

[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]

Ask her to suck your cock

Bammy — Tue, 18 Aug 2015 08:57:56 GMT

Bammy:

"Could I um . . I mean um . .. could I just" you stammer, trying to decide how to break it to her that you want more.

"Could you have what?" your mother asks cautiously, still covering her modesty from your wandering eyes. "Whatever it is I'll just have to buck up and do it won't I?"

Ok. . . well then . .. could I have a blowjob?" you finally blurt out. Your mother looks shocked and doesn't seem to believe that your doing this but the reality of the situation seems to dawn on her. She has to do it if she wants the support money.

"Adam please don't do this . . " she starts to stammer "I'm your mother for Christs sake!!" She then pauses with the realization of what she must do to uphold her servitude to you. She moves over to you and takes off your belt then slides your pants and boxers down to your ankles. Your cock is rock hard already from the sight of seeing your mother in the nude. "Oh my! . . Adam is this because of me?" she queries, seeming slightly impressed that she has made you fully erect just by stripping. She takes your cock in her hand and slowly pumps up and down making you moan with desire. She then lowers her head and takes your cock in her warm mouth. She seems hesitant at first but quickly speeds up her sucking and slurping probably because she wants you to cum fast and get it over with. Her methods are definitely working as you feel your orgasm approaching.

"I'm so close" you murmur as you push your mothers head further onto your cock. Her DD breasts are now bouncing in rhythm with her sucking. You are seconds away from cumming. Where do you cum?

Do you:
*[[Cum on her breasts]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum down her throat| Cum down her throat]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum on her face| Cum in her face]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

AUA: Ask her to do something she'd never do

Bammy — Tue, 18 Aug 2015 08:46:54 GMT

Bammy:

"Um, Mom... can you take your clothes off?" You ask, nervously.

"Oh my god, sweetie! Um... well... I suppose I have to. But, dammit, Adam! Why would you want to see your own mother...?" She trails off, blushing heavily.

"You said you'll do anything I want." You reply defiantly knowing that you have to be firm to get what you want.

"But this is so sudden. I mean, as a first request, you can't just-"

"Anything!."

She stops, caught by her own words. With a deep breath, she slowly lifts her shirt over her head, the movement making her massive breasts jiggle within their prison. She shoots you an annoyed glance, as she unbuttons her jeans, and you watch as she pulls them down her shapely thighs, giving you full view of her matching white panties. The tight fabric of her underwear lets you see the outline of her labia, and you feel a tightness in your pants. Grimacing, she reaches round and unhooks her bra, making sure her arm covers her modesty, before letting her bra drop to the floor. Finally, she removes her panties the only way she could, with her free hand covering her crotch. Inch by inch, they lower, with long, slow gyrations of her hips. Her efforts to maintain her decency only making for an ironically erotic display.

"There!" She stands, too embarrassed to look you in the face, but the intense glare at her feet lets you know how she's feeling.

You are lost for words as you gaze at your mother's beautiful body, pondering your next move.

What do you do now?

Do you:

*[[Ask her to suck your cock]]
*[[Ask her to masturbate in front of you]]
*[[Ask her to have sex with you]]

[[Category:A Unique Arrangement]]

Ask her to masturbate in front of you

Bammy — Fri, 03 Apr 2015 04:51:34 GMT

Bammy: Created page with '"Very happy" you murmur as you survey Sarah's beautiful body standing before you. "All right . .. you've had your little look you horny little bugger" says Sarah in a dangerous …'

"Very happy" you murmur as you survey Sarah's beautiful body standing before you.

"All right . .. you've had your little look you horny little bugger" says Sarah in a dangerous tone. "But this has gone far enough".

She starts to reach down for her panties but you stop her. "Uh. . . I'd rather you not do that actually" you mumble, daring yourself to take this further.

"And what would you have me do then?" exclaims Sarah. "Walk around for the rest of the day in the nude?". Her deep blue eyes are now glaring at you reproachfully, unaware of the plans you have in store for her.

"I . .kinda wanted to see you...touch yourself" you reply in a quiet voice, now staring at the ground guiltily. You are extremely turned on now and your erect cock has tented your pants.

"What?!?" gasps Sarah, becoming red in the face with a mixture of shock and rage. "Now you listen here you little pervert I. . ." she tails off as she realizes by your now defiant stare that she has no choice in the matter. "Oh god" she sighs as she slowly sinks onto the nearby couch and reluctantly spreads her curvy legs to yet again reveal her pussy. She gives you on last glare and places her hand on her clitoris and rubs it reluctantly. "I can't believe i'm doing this" she moans, avoiding eye contact but continuing nevertheless.

Sarah really doesn't seem to like this, what do you do:

*[[Take pity and tell her to stop]]
*[[Order her to keep going]]
*[[Start to stroke your cock]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

User:Kantus

Bammy — Mon, 16 Feb 2015 03:22:54 GMT

Bammy:

Hi, I'm Kantus. I dabble in smut. I decided to make a user page on the off chance people have comments or questions. Not sure why they would since lol who am I anyway, but better safe than sorry. And who knows, maybe someone does read what I write!

Hey there. I am a big fan of your work on 'A Unique Arrangement'. I was wondering if you were going to do anymore work on it. It's a really good story so please please do more!
Cheers.

NJO: Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (human female)

Bammy — Thu, 25 Dec 2014 08:15:52 GMT

Bammy:

Chose the location:

*[[NJO: On Danntoine with Ankin Solo]]
*[[NJO: On a Yuuzhan Vong Ship with Leia and Jaina Solo]]

[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]
{{StarStatus2|char=Mara Jade Skywalker|book=The New Jedi Order }}

Ask her to get some rest

Bammy — Sat, 20 Dec 2014 22:03:22 GMT

Bammy:

You decide to ask your mother to have a rest. . because you have plans for her once shes asleep. You approach her as she paces and say "Um . . Hey Mom, why don't you get some rest? I mean you've had a tough day and what we did can never happen again. I suppose i was just. .. pushing the boundaries right? Isn't that what kids do?"

Your Mother looks at you warily, still obviously shell-shocked at what she has had to do. "Well. ." she starts. "I suppose you are turning into a teenager and i know what its like trust me I've been there. But like you said we can never do this again" she finishes firmly.

"Of course Mom" you quickly say as your Mother makes her way to her bedroom.

You wait about 20 minutes for her to fall asleep and then you creep silently into her bedroom. You see her toned figure outlined under the sheets of the bed in the dark room. You are getting increasingly hornier as you tip-toe across the room to the side of her bed. You hear her soft, steady breathing as you make sure she is really asleep before peeling back the sheets to reveal her still naked body. You strip off your own clothes without making a sound and lower yourself onto the bed next to her. Your cock is now rock hard and just centimeters away from her exposed orifices. Your Mother is yours for the taking. What do you do next?

Do you:
*[[Slide your cock into her pussy]]
*[[Force your cock into her ass]]
*[[Awaken her]]
[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

Ask her to get some rest

Bammy — Sat, 20 Dec 2014 02:51:43 GMT

Bammy:

You decide to ask your mother to have a rest. . because you have plans for her once shes asleep. You approach her as she paces and say "Um . . Hey Mom, why don't you get some rest? I mean you've had a tough day and what we did can never happen again. I suppose i was just. .. pushing the boundaries right? Isn't that what kids do?"

Your Mother looks at you warily, still obviously shell-shocked at what she has had to do. "Well. ." she starts. "I suppose you are turning into a teenager and i know what its like trust me I've been there. But like you said we can never do this again" she finishes firmly.

"Of course Mom" you quickly say as your Mother makes her way to her bedroom.

You wait about 20 minutes for her to fall asleep and then you creep silently into her bedroom. You see her toned figure outlined under the sheets of the bed in the dark room. You are getting increasingly hornier as you tip-toe across the room to the side of her bed. You hear her soft, steady breathing as you make sure she is really asleep before peeling back the sheets to reveal her still naked body. You strip off your own clothes without making a sound and lower yourself onto the bed next to her. Your cock is now rock hard centimeters and away from her exposed orifices. Your Mother is yours for the taking. What do you do next?

Do you:
*[[Slide your cock into her pussy]]
*[[Force your cock into her ass]]
*[[Awaken her]]

Ask her to get some rest

Bammy — Sat, 20 Dec 2014 02:50:51 GMT

Bammy: Created page with 'You decide to ask your mother to have a rest. . because you have plans for her once shes asleep. You approach her as she paces and say "Um . . Hey Mom, why don't you get some res…'

You decide to ask your mother to have a rest. . because you have plans for her once shes asleep. You approach her as she paces and say "Um . . Hey Mom, why don't you get some rest? I mean you've had a tough day and what we did can never happen again. I suppose i was just. .. pushing the boundaries right? Isn't that what kids do?"

Your Mother looks at you warily, still obviously shell-shocked at what she has had to do. "Well. ." she starts. "I suppose you are turning into a teenager and i know what its like trust me I've been there. But like you said we can never do this again" she finishes firmly.

"Of course Mom" you quickly say as your Mother makes her way to her bedroom.

You wait about 20 minutes for her to fall asleep and then you creep silently into her bedroom. You see her toned figure outlined under the sheets of the bed in the dark room. You are getting increasingly hornier as you tip-toe across the room to the side of her bed. You hear her soft, steady breathing as you make sure she is really asleep before peeling back the sheets to reveal her still naked body. You strip off your own clothes without making a sound and lower yourself onto the bed next to her. Your cock is now rock hard centimeters and away from her exposed orifices. Your Mother is yours for the taking. What do you do next?

Do you:
*[[Slide your cock into her pussy]]
*[[Force your cock into her ass]]
*[[Wake her up]]

User talk:Kantus

Bammy — Mon, 15 Dec 2014 23:09:18 GMT

Bammy:

Hey Mate.
I just want to say that i admire your work on the 'A Unique Arrangement' story. You may have noticed that i have done some work on it too. I hope you like it as you are the original author. if there are any ideas you could give me (or vice-versa) just let me know. Please do more of 'AUA'! You are so good!
Cheers
[[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 08:55, 15 December 2014 (UTC)

User talk:Kantus

Bammy — Mon, 15 Dec 2014 08:55:44 GMT

Bammy:

Hey Mate.
I just want to say that i admire your work on the 'A Unique Arrangement' story. You may have noticed that i have done some work on it too. I hope you like it as you are the original author. if there are any ideas you could give me (or vice-versa) just let me know.
Cheers
[[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 08:55, 15 December 2014 (UTC)Bammy

User talk:Kantus

Bammy — Mon, 15 Dec 2014 08:53:59 GMT

Bammy: Created page with 'Hey Mate. I just want to say that i admire your work on the 'A Unique Arrangement' story. You may have noticed that i have done some work on it too. I hope you like it as you are…'

Cum on her breasts

Bammy — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 07:50:27 GMT

Bammy:

You gasp as your orgasm hits and you quickly pull your cock out from your mother's mouth and blast her massive tits with your hot sticky cum. Your mother gasps as her DD breasts are covered with your spunk. "Oh my goodness!" she exclaims as you jerk the rest of your load onto her drenched chest. Your mother appears speechless as she slowly gets up and walks to get a towel from the bathroom. Your are still super horny as you watch your mother clean herself up despite your orgasm a few seconds ago. "Sweetie. . i know i said you could ask me anything but. . please don't let me have to do that again" your mother starts to say. "I love you but i'm your mother and we can't do this". She then reaches down to pick up her panties and starts to slide them back up her toned legs.

"No" you say "i want you to stay undressed". She looks dumbfounded and slightly upset as she reluctantly slides her panties off and chucks them on the floor.

"Why oh why did i tell you about this arrangement!?!" she exclaims, clearly frustrated at the situation she is now in. "Your father would be distraught!" she continues as she starts to pace up and down the room in distress.

Your mother is obviously upset at what you have done already but you are still horny and your erection is coming back.
What do you ask her to do next?

Do you:
*[[Ask her to call her friends for a little 'catch-up']]
*[[Ask her to have sex with you]]
*[[Ask her to get some rest]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

Cum on her breasts

Bammy — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 07:46:56 GMT

Bammy:

You gasp as your orgasm hits and you quickly pull your cock out from your mother's mouth and blast her massive tits with your hot sticky cum. Your mother gasps as her DD breasts are covered with your spunk. "Oh my goodness!" she exclaims as you jerk the rest of your load onto her drenched chest. Your mother appears speechless as she slowly gets up and walks to get a towel from the bathroom. Your are still super horny as you watch your mother clean herself up despite your orgasm a few seconds ago. "Sweetie. . i know i said you could ask me anything but. . please don't let me have to do that again" your mother starts to say. "I love you but i'm your mother and we can't do this". She then reaches down to pick up her panties and starts to slide them back up her toned legs.

"No" you say "i want you to stay undressed". She looks dumbfounded and slightly upset as she reluctantly slides her panties off and chucks them on the floor.

"Why oh why did i tell you about this arrangement!?!" she exclaims, clearly frustrated at the situation she is now in. "Your father would be distraught!" she continues as she starts to pace up and down the room in distress.

Your mother is obviously upset at what you have done already but you are still horny and your erection is coming back.
What do you ask her to do next?

Do you:
*[[Ask her to call her friends for a little 'catch-up']]
*[[Ask to have sex with her]]
*[[Ask her to get some rest]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

Cum on her breasts

Bammy — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 04:19:28 GMT

Bammy: Created page with 'You gasp as your orgasm hits and you quickly pull your cock out from your mother's mouth and blast her massive tits with your hot sticky cum. Your mother gasps as her DD breasts …'

You gasp as your orgasm hits and you quickly pull your cock out from your mother's mouth and blast her massive tits with your hot sticky cum. Your mother gasps as her DD breasts are covered with your spunk. "Oh my goodness!" she exclaims as you jerk the rest of your load onto her drenched chest. Your mother appears speechless as she slowly gets up and walks to get a towel from the bathroom. Your are still super horny as you watch your mother clean herself up despite your orgasm a few seconds ago. "Sweetie. . i know i said you could ask me anything but. . please don't let me have to do that again" your mother starts to say. "I love you but i'm your mother and we can't do this". She then reaches down to pick up her panties and starts to slide them back up her toned legs.

"No" you say "i want you to stay like that". She looks dumbfounded and slightly upset as she reluctantly slides her panties off and chucks them on the floor.

"Why oh why did i tell you about this arrangement!?!" she exclaims, clearly frustrated at the situation she is now in. "Your father would be distraught!" she continues as she starts to pace up and down the room in distress.

Your mother is obviously upset at what you have done already but you are still horny and your erection is coming back.
What do you ask her to do next?

Do you:
*[[Ask her to call her friends for a little 'catch-up']]
*[[Ask to have sex with her]]
*[[Ask her to get some rest]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

AUA: Ask her to do something she'd never do

Bammy — Fri, 12 Dec 2014 02:18:03 GMT

Bammy:

You decide to ask your mother to strip.

"Um Mom . . . can you take your clothes off?" you ask, nervously.

"Oh my god sweetie! um . . well. . oh i suppose i have to. But dammit Adam why would you ask this of your own mother"? stammers your mother.

"Because you said you'll do anything i want" you reply.

Your Mother hesitantly takes off her shirt revealing her massive DD breasts barely contained in a plain white bra. Giving you an angry look she continues to strip by sliding her blue jeans down her shapely legs giving you a generous view of her matching white panties. You can just make out the shape of her pussy lips through the thin fabric making your cock start to rise in anticipation. Reluctantly, your mother quickly unclips her bra and removes her panties, leaving her naked as the day she was born. You notice that her pussy has a small amount of pubic hair above it.

"Happy now?" asked your mother as she stands hands on hips glaring at you in a disapproving manner.

You are lost for words as you gaze at your mother's beautiful body, pondering your next move.

What do you do now?

Do you:
*[[Ask her to suck your cock]]
*[[Ask her to masturbate in front of you]]
*[[Ask her to have sex with you]]

[[Category:A Unique Arrangement]]

Ask her to suck your cock

Bammy — Fri, 12 Dec 2014 00:56:00 GMT

Bammy:

"Could i um . . have a blowjob?" you ask cautiously. Your mother looks at you angrily and can't seem to believe that your doing this but eventually resigns to the fact that she is your slave and has to do everything you want.

"Adam please don't do this . . " she starts to stammer "I'm your mother for Christs sake!!" She then pauses with the realization of what she must do to uphold her servitude to you. She moves over to you and takes off your belt then slides your pants and boxers down to your ankles. Your cock is rock hard already from the sight of seeing your mother in the nude. "Oh my! . . Adam is this because of me?" she queries, seeming slightly impressed that she has made you fully erect just by stripping. She takes your cock in her hand and slowly pumps up and down making you moan with desire. She then lowers her head and takes your cock in her warm mouth. She seems hesitant at first but quickly speeds up her sucking and slurping probably because she wants you to cum fast and get it over with. Her methods are definitely working as you feel your orgasm approaching.

"I'm so close" you murmur as you push your mothers head further onto your cock. Her DD breasts are now bouncing in rhythm with her sucking. You are seconds away from cumming. Where do you cum?

Do you:
*[[Cum on her breasts]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum down her throat| Cum down her throat]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum on her face| Cum in her face]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

Ask her to suck your cock

Bammy — Fri, 12 Dec 2014 00:47:57 GMT

Bammy:

"Could i um . . have a blowjob?" you ask cautiously. Your mother looks at you angrily and can't seem to believe that your doing this but eventually resigns to the fact that she is your slave and has to do everything you want.

"Adam please don't do this . . " she starts to stammer but pauses with the realization of what she must do. She moves over to you and takes off your belt then slides your pants and boxers down to your ankles. Your cock is rock hard already from the sight of seeing your mother in the nude. "Oh my! . . Adam is this because of me?" she queries, seeming slightly impressed that she has made you fully erect just be stripping. She takes your cock in her hand and slowly pumps up and down making you moan with desire. She then lowers her head and takes your cock in her warm mouth. She seems hesitant at first but quickly speeds up her sucking and slurping probably because she wants you to cum fast and get it over with. Her methods are definitely working as you feel your orgasm approaching.

"I'm so close" you murmur as you push your mothers head further onto your cock. Her DD breasts are now bouncing in rhythm with her sucking. You are seconds away from cumming. Where do you cum?

Do you:
*[[Cum on her breasts]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum down her throat| Cum down her throat]]
*[[A Unique Arrangement- Cum on her face| Cum in her face]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

Ask her to suck your cock

Bammy — Fri, 12 Dec 2014 00:38:45 GMT

Bammy: Created page with '"Could i um . . have a blowjob?" you ask cautiously. Your mother looks at you angrily and can't seem to believe that your doing this but eventually resigns to the fact that she …'

"Could i um . . have a blowjob?" you ask cautiously. Your mother looks at you angrily and can't seem to believe that your doing this but eventually resigns to the fact that she is your slave and has to do everything you want.

"Adam please don't do this . . " she starts to stammer but pauses with the realization of what she must do. She moves over to you and takes off your belt then slides your pants and boxers down to your ankles. Your cock is rock hard already from the sight of seeing your mother in the nude. "Oh my! . . Adam is this because of me?" she queries, seeming slightly impressed that she has made you fully erect just be stripping. She takes your cock in her hand and slowly pumps up and down making you moan with desire. She then lowers her head and takes your cock in her warm mouth. She seems hesitant at first but quickly speeds up her sucking and slurping probably because she wants you to cum fast and get it over with. Her methods are definitely working as you feel your orgasm approaching.

"I'm so close" you murmur as you push your mothers head further onto your cock. Her DD breasts are now bouncing in rhythm with her sucking. You are seconds away from cumming. Where do you cum?

Do you:
*[[Cum on her breasts]]
*[[Cum in her throat]]
*[[Cum in her vagina]]

[[Category: A Unique Arrangement]]

AUA: Ask her to do something she'd never do

Bammy — Thu, 11 Dec 2014 21:49:37 GMT

Bammy:

You decide to ask your mother to strip.

"Um Mom . . . can you take your clothes off?" you ask, nervously.

"Oh my god sweetie! um . . well. . oh i suppose i have to. But dammit Adam why would you ask this of your own mother"? stammers your mother.

"Because you said you'll do anything i want" you reply.

Your Mother hesitantly takes off her shirt revealing her massive DD breasts barely contained in a plain white bra. Giving you an angry look she continues to strip by sliding her blue jeans down her shapely legs giving you a generous view of her matching white panties. You can just make out the shape of her pussy lips through the thin fabric making your cock start to rise in anticipation. Reluctantly, your mother quickly unclips her bra and removes her panties, leaving her naked as the day she was born. You notice that her pussy has a small amount of pubic hair above it.

"Happy now?" asked your mother as she stands hands on hips glaring at you in a disapproving manner.

You are lost for words as you gaze at your mothers beautiful body, pondering your next move.

What do you do now?

Do you:
*[[Ask her to suck your cock]]
*[[Ask her to masturbate in front of you]]
*[[Ask her to have sex with you]]

[[Category:A Unique Arrangement]]

User talk:Platypus

Bammy — Thu, 11 Dec 2014 00:40:21 GMT

Bammy:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

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<b> You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) </b>

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

AUA: Ask her to do something she'd never do

Bammy — Wed, 10 Dec 2014 05:52:45 GMT

Bammy: Created page with 'You decide to ask your mother to strip. "Um Mom . . . can you take your clothes off?" you ask, nervously. "Oh my god sweetie! um . . well. . oh i suppose i have to. But dammit …'

You decide to ask your mother to strip.

"Um Mom . . . can you take your clothes off?" you ask, nervously.

"Oh my god sweetie! um . . well. . oh i suppose i have to. But dammit Adam why would you ask this of your own mother"? stammers your mother.

"Because you said you'll do anything i want" you reply.

Your Mother hesitantly takes off her shirt revealing her massive DD breasts barely contained in a plain white bra. Giving you an angry look she continues to strip by sliding her blue jeans down her shapely legs giving you a generous view of her matching white panties. You can just make out the shape of her pussy lips through the thin fabric making your cock start to rise in anticipation. Reluctantly, your mother quickly unclips her bra and removes her panties, leaving her naked as the day she was born. You notice that her pussy has a small amount of pubic hair above it.

"Happy now?" asked your mother as she stands hands on hips glaring at you in a disapproving manner.

(to be continued i suppose. . . i dont know how to add the options at the end)