=== CONGRATULATIONS ===
''You have unlocked your first "SHENANIGOUS (it's a real word, I swear)" page. This is where I can do all sorts of stuff like break the fourth wall, other walls that may be standing around and indulge in baseless and shameless self praise/loathe. Why? Well for the heck of it really… or is it?'' ''' ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) '''

''Anyhoo I'm aware that this page was sort of shoved down your throat but I assure you this is the last of that kind. No other SHENANIGOUS (it's a real word, I swear) page in any likelihood will be as easy to find or obvious in luring you in, which I am sure you'll find out soon enough.''
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So, let's see what landed you here… ''da taa da daa'' it's your event log. You seem to have clicked [[Path of the Maiden (mfSHN)|Path of the Maiden]]. Hmmm… okay I don't think you did it on purpose why don't you try again? 

[[Path of the Renegade (alPOTR)|Path of the Renegade]]

[[Okay I guess Third time is the charm… (mfSHN)|Path of the Maiden]]

[[Category: Awaylands]][[Category: S(irw,Is)]]

2014-04-30T12:38:40Z

Renegade1412: /* Sorry about that... */

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy. On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story. Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.

Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
 The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
 I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
 Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
 If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
 to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
 [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
 one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
 people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
 but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
 I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
 Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft

== Sorry about that... ==

First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)

It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)

AIF Alice on the phone.

2014-04-30T10:12:11Z

Renegade1412:

You quickly go downstairs, to the phone...

"Hello" you say into the phone.

"Hey, Scott...," you hear your Mom's voice, "I'm with Alice and...", her voice is quickly cut off and you hear what seems like a quick struggle.

"Scott, dear...," now it's your aunt Alice, "What your Mom was trying to say is that we both have some things to take care of and you might have to take care of your meals. You have the keys to my house right? The bread is in the oven you can take it. Okay, see you in the afternoon. bye...". Alice proceeded to disconnect the call without even waiting for your response.

That was really weird. But your only concern is that your whole master plan went to waste. And the whole telephone conversation seems to have killed your boner.

You let out a deep sigh and decide to...

[[AIF_Masturbate with extreme prejudice|Jack off to the milf whore from the porn.]]

[[AIF_Investigate Mom and Alice|Check out why the phone call felt weird.]]

[[Category:All in the Family]]

AIF Alice on the phone.

2014-04-30T05:26:40Z

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AIF Struggle with waiting

2014-04-30T03:37:21Z

Renegade1412:

Sitting there with your hard throbbing dick in your hand you contemplate the gains and losses you'd incur if you masturbated right then... You can claim instant, guaranteed pleasure which is a few notches lower than what you can expect after exposing yourself to your own aunt deliberately and (hopefully) getting away with it. You feel that you're thinking things way too scientifically, as if in a classroom. The moment class comes to your trail of thought you feel the monster between your legs starting to go soft. In order to make sure you aren't caught off guard you immediately turn the porn back on and decide to raise back your little one. 

The moment you grab your cock by the shaft while etching the images of a mature woman pleasing 5 different men at the same time, it springs back to full form and drives you to the edge... almost to the point that all of your hard work would have been ruined. You stay still all of a sudden making no sudden movements and trying to concentrate on silence, which is impossible with the headphones on you. Your dick just throbs there like crazy sending all kinds of signals throughout your body, just begging to be touched. At this point you wouldn't be surprised if a breeze got you off. After what seemed like an eternity the pleasure waves trying to break out finally subsided and the throbbing returned to normal pace. 

''That was amazing'', you think to yourself. You carefully place two fingers on the underside of your cock to test the waters, it feels unique. Your dick is much more sensitive than normal as if you've just had a massive orgasm, but the member is still rock hard. You decide that you'll keep yourself at the edge till Alice gets here. So, you just use two fingers to stroke your dick at a slow pace. But no matter how slow you went you can feel that you are closing in on your climax much more faster than your fingers. At times you rest your fingers but your cock doesn't seem to listen to your intentions. You make a mental note that if you were to cum right now then things were just unlucky, and you are more than happy to have discovered this new world of pleasure. You have already turned off the porn and are just sitting there gently stroking your rock hard member you start to lose your handle on your surrounding but is quickly brought back to reality by... 

[[AIF_Alice on the phone.|...the phone bell ringing.]]

[[AIF_Alice at the door.|...the door bell ringing.]]

[[AIF_Alice in your room!|...Alice staring at you!]]

[[Category: All in the Family]]

AIF Struggle with waiting

2014-04-30T03:36:37Z

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Sitting there with your hard throbbing dick in your hand you contemplate the gains and losses you'd incur if you masturbated right then... You can claim instant, guaranteed pleasure which is a few notches lower than what you can expect after exposing yourself to your own aunt deliberately and (hopefully) getting away with it. You feel that you're thinking things way too scientifically, as if in a classroom. The moment class comes to your trail of thought you feel the monster between your legs starting to go soft. In order to make sure you aren't caught off guard you immediately turn the porn back on and decide to raise back your little one. 

The moment you grab your cock by the shaft while etching the images of a mature woman pleasing 5 different men at the same time, it springs back to full form and drives you to the edge... almost to the point that all of your hard work would have been ruined. You stay still all of a sudden making no sudden movements and trying to concentrate on silence, which is impossible with the headphones on you. Your dick just throbs there like crazy sending all kinds of signals throughout your body, just begging to be touched. At this point you wouldn't be surprised if a breeze got you off. After what seemed like an eternity the pleasure waves trying to break out finally subsided and the throbbing returned to normal pace. 

''That was amazing'', you think to yourself. You carefully place two fingers on the underside of your cock to test the waters, it feels unique. Your dick is much more sensitive than normal as if you've just had a massive orgasm, but the member is still rock hard. You decide that you'll keep yourself at the edge till Alice gets here. So, you just use two fingers to stroke your dick at a slow pace. But no matter how slow you went you can feel that you are closing in on your climax much more faster than your fingers. At times you rest your fingers but your cock doesn't seem to listen to your intentions. You make a mental note that if you were to cum right now then things were just unlucky, and you are more than happy to have discovered this new world of pleasure. You have already turned off the porn and are just sitting there gently stroking your rock hard member you start to lose your handle on your surrounding but is quickly brought back to reality by...

[[AIF_Alice on the phone.|...the phone bell ringing.]]
[[AIF_Alice at the door.|...the door bell ringing.]]
[[AIF_Alice in your room!|...Alice staring at you!]]

[[Category: All in the Family]]

AIF Turn on the computer and find some porn

2014-04-29T19:17:57Z

Renegade1412:

You found your favorite porn and that's how the next hour passed. It was hard not to jack off, but you some how managed it. 
It's 8:00. She should be here any minute...

But 15 minutes passed and she is not here. 5 more minutes... 10 more... 
Looks like she won't come.

[[AIF_You_W_Archor!|Fuck it, You were hard long enough]]

[[AIF_Struggle with waiting|Try to drag on...]]

[[AIF_Wait Patiently|Wait patiently]]

[[Category: All in the Family]]

User:Renegade1412

2014-04-29T19:11:47Z

AIF Go take a shower

2014-04-29T09:24:05Z

Renegade1412:

You have spilled the semen all over yourself so you figured it's time to take a shower. You went upstairs, undressed and hopped in the shower. 
While drying off you started thinking about what happened. ''At the beginning she looked at you and smiled. Yes! Smiled! This is so great. And then after she looked again she said... Go and have some fun? Did she meant... Wow, I hope so!'' You noticed you're getting hard again. 

[[AIF_Head downstairs dressed|Ignore it and get dressed.]]

[[AIF_You're alone so...|Head to your bedroom as is... (Since you're alone.)]]

[[Category:All in the Family]]