User talk:Jdublee

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Revision as of 20:32, 18 May 2009 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

Do not write in first person in the middle of a story that's written in second person. Use proper spelling and grammar. And do not post incomplete pages. Complete pages include choices so the story can continue. And include the status bar and category from the previous page. --Platypus 10:33, 18 May 2009 (PDT)

Better, but please attempt to use proper spelling and grammar. Names get capitalized and if you can't even spell 'penis' correctly, you shouldn't be writing in Smutty Sex Romp. --Platypus 12:17, 18 May 2009 (PDT)

Your grammar and spelling still requires improvement if you intend to continue posting. I am quite particular about Smutty Sex Romp, having written a large portion of it. At the very least, learn to put periods at the ends of setences. --Platypus 13:32, 18 May 2009 (PDT)

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