User talk:Rubies3
From Create Your Own Story
If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, all choices must be choices your character can make. You cannot have the character choose who or what you see. And please, pay attention to your punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. Remember that the asterisk * goes outside the double brackets to make the link to the next pages of the story. And make sure to use hyphens when necessary, such as in compound adjectives, i.e. half-hard cock, ruby-red lips, etc. --Platypus 01:01, 1 April 2014 (UTC)