Talk to the person next to you

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Turning your head away from the car window, you speak to the person next to you your 14yr. old sister
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You turn your head away from the car window, looking at the person next to you. Your sister with brown wavy hair was sitting looking as bored as you are. "This place is kinda faraway isn't it?"  
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"This place is kinda faraway isn't it?"  
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She responded half-heartedly "Its a waste of our winter break... I hope there's at least internet."
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She looked at you and said in a half-hearthed voice "Ya it is we've been driving for 2 hours now in this forest."
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They had arrived from their academy several weeks before, hurriedly rushed to go on a business trip by their father.
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Eileen and you were on your way to see your dad to spend the winter break, thinking you would have a normal holiday at home a good change from the boarding academy you were off to during the school year.  
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He was as simple as you could describe it a man who deals with things most people don't deal with as he put it.
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He was not around most of the time but he wasn't a bad father he provided for the the two of them, but he wasn't around a lot.
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But this year's vacation was different, and now you and your sister are off to wherever your father was as he continues his research.
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Laying back on the car seat you relax and the darkness suddenly comes.
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Laying back on the car seat "I wonder where were going? Dad's research must be very important for him to not come home." You were now getting tired and sleepy from the long journey. "Well it's so important, but this place is so deep in the countryside I wonder if were going camping." she sighed at this. "Camping for Christmas that would really be horrible." You laughed at this.
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"Wake up hey!!" You have a headache and turn ur body to a better position to sleep.
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Deep in conversation you failed to realize the trees suddenly parted way ahead of the car revealing finally a field of grass and a gigantic house sticking out with cars and workers busy renovating the old grey mansion.
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Suddenly a jab hit your side and you open your eyes slowly taking the picture in slowly.
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"C'mon were here get out."
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The Car had stopped and looking out a tall house loomed ahead. Workers were busy gardening or fixing or moving to look at the new arrival.
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You step out of the car.
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The car suddenly stopped in a halt, interrupting your conversation you had finally arrived at your destination a giant mansion in the countryside.
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Your sister amazed at the place went out of the car her eyes going over the details of where they were going to live for the next few months.

Revision as of 08:06, 17 July 2009

You turn your head away from the car window, looking at the person next to you. Your sister with brown wavy hair was sitting looking as bored as you are. "This place is kinda faraway isn't it?"

She looked at you and said in a half-hearthed voice "Ya it is we've been driving for 2 hours now in this forest."

Eileen and you were on your way to see your dad to spend the winter break, thinking you would have a normal holiday at home a good change from the boarding academy you were off to during the school year.

But this year's vacation was different, and now you and your sister are off to wherever your father was as he continues his research.

Laying back on the car seat "I wonder where were going? Dad's research must be very important for him to not come home." You were now getting tired and sleepy from the long journey. "Well it's so important, but this place is so deep in the countryside I wonder if were going camping." she sighed at this. "Camping for Christmas that would really be horrible." You laughed at this.

Deep in conversation you failed to realize the trees suddenly parted way ahead of the car revealing finally a field of grass and a gigantic house sticking out with cars and workers busy renovating the old grey mansion.

The car suddenly stopped in a halt, interrupting your conversation you had finally arrived at your destination a giant mansion in the countryside. Your sister amazed at the place went out of the car her eyes going over the details of where they were going to live for the next few months.


Do you:

Walk around the area

Go inside the large mansion

Get back in the car

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