Knock on the door ...

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‘It’s open come on in’ you hear a manly voice call from inside the room.  
‘It’s open come on in’ you hear a manly voice call from inside the room.  
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Without hesitation you open the door and step inside. It’s beautiful clean and modern rom with large windows and a large king sized bed. You walking to the room but can see anyone , then you hear the click of the bathroom door and it opens.  
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Without hesitation you open the door and step inside. It’s a beautiful, clean, and modern room with floor to ceiling windows and a large king sized bed. You walk into the room but you don't see anyone. Suddenly, the door to your left opens and the sound startles you.  
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Out steps a large framed man dressed in only a towel. Then you freeze in complete shock letting out a gasp as your eyes connect. He too stops dead in his tracks as he gets a look at you.  
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Stepping out of a steamy bathroom, a large framed man is dressed in only a towel. Then you freeze in complete shock, letting out a gasp as your eyes connect. He too stops dead in his tracks as he gets a look at you.  
You can’t believe it ... you already know this man!  
You can’t believe it ... you already know this man!  
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It’s you boss, stefano from the pizza place you work at part time.  
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It’s you boss, Stefano, from Little Italy Pizza.
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** Stefano- is in his 40s a deep tanned Italian man with thick black hair and a short dark beard. He is in okey shape, he has a rugby players build only with maybe a little more of a gut and is covered in body hair you can tell from his arms and chest hair always exposed when he wears a shirt with most of the top buttons undone.
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** Stefano is in his 40s a deep tanned Italian man with thick black hair and a short dark beard. He is in decent shape, with a rugby players build; only with maybe a little more of a gut and he is covered in hair. But you already suspected as much from his arms and chest hair which are always exposed when he wears a shirt with most of the top buttons undone.
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‘Jake ?! ‘ he mutters confused his mouth left hanging open shocked.
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‘Jake ?! ‘ he mutters, his mouth left hanging open in shock.
‘Oh my god..fuck’ you reply standing there in the room awkwardly looking back at him as he stands in front of you wearing only a towel wrapped around his waist.
‘Oh my god..fuck’ you reply standing there in the room awkwardly looking back at him as he stands in front of you wearing only a towel wrapped around his waist.
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His large hairy chest and his hair still slightly wet from the shower he just obviously came out of.  
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His large hairy chest still slightly wet from the shower he just obviously came out of.  
Do you  
Do you  

Current revision as of 16:32, 18 July 2019

Taking a deep breath you prepare your self.

Knock* knock* knock*

You hit the door with 3 gentle taps.

‘It’s open come on in’ you hear a manly voice call from inside the room. Without hesitation you open the door and step inside. It’s a beautiful, clean, and modern room with floor to ceiling windows and a large king sized bed. You walk into the room but you don't see anyone. Suddenly, the door to your left opens and the sound startles you.

Stepping out of a steamy bathroom, a large framed man is dressed in only a towel. Then you freeze in complete shock, letting out a gasp as your eyes connect. He too stops dead in his tracks as he gets a look at you.

You can’t believe it ... you already know this man!

It’s you boss, Stefano, from Little Italy Pizza.

    • Stefano is in his 40s a deep tanned Italian man with thick black hair and a short dark beard. He is in decent shape, with a rugby players build; only with maybe a little more of a gut and he is covered in hair. But you already suspected as much from his arms and chest hair which are always exposed when he wears a shirt with most of the top buttons undone.


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‘Jake ?! ‘ he mutters, his mouth left hanging open in shock.

‘Oh my god..fuck’ you reply standing there in the room awkwardly looking back at him as he stands in front of you wearing only a towel wrapped around his waist. His large hairy chest still slightly wet from the shower he just obviously came out of.

Do you

leave feeling embarrassed

stay and do what you came to do

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