User talk:Miholyshellada364
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Revision as of 18:27, 13 May 2008
So far, your story doesn't seem to be a Choose-Your-Own-Adventure. There aren't any choices. And while I understand the urge to indent new paragraphs, doing that here puts your words in a box and makes things unreadable.--Platypus 14:27, 13 May 2008 (EDT)
