Demand the rate be paid

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"I'm afraid that's not how it works," you say, nodding your head in disagreement. "I'll need the payment by the day. It's a living wage as much as anything else."
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She gets up slowly, clearly disappointed. 'I apologize for wasting your time then,' she says quietly. 'I guess I'll have to look for another detective - someone who knows how to do business.' She drops her cigarette into the ashtray and heads for the door. You hate to see her leave, but with the way she sways her hips, you can't help but love watching her go.
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She seems to consider it, then gets to her feet slowly. "I apologize for wasting your time then," she says quietly, dropping her cigarette into her glass and turning to head for the door. You hate to see her leave, but with the way she sways her hips, you can't help but love watching her go.
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Now you can get back to what you were doing: drinking and sulking, and waiting for a more profitable case.
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With the blonde gone, you can get back to what you were doing: drinking and sulking, and waiting for a more profitable case.
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The End.
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(Not quite) The End
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(Still adding to the plot)
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Revision as of 00:00, 15 September 2015

She gets up slowly, clearly disappointed. 'I apologize for wasting your time then,' she says quietly. 'I guess I'll have to look for another detective - someone who knows how to do business.' She drops her cigarette into the ashtray and heads for the door. You hate to see her leave, but with the way she sways her hips, you can't help but love watching her go.

Now you can get back to what you were doing: drinking and sulking, and waiting for a more profitable case.


So much for that knock-out blonde.



(Not quite) The End (Still adding to the plot)

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