Say something/boy (Lil)

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''Hi, what's your name?'' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.
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"Hi, what's your name?"' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.
The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him,  
The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him,  
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''Jeremy.'' he replies.
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"Jeremy." he replies.
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''Jeremy... That's a nice name.''
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"Jeremy... That's a nice name."
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''Erm... thanks.''
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"Erm... thanks."
there's an awkward silence...
there's an awkward silence...

Current revision as of 02:06, 20 January 2011

"Hi, what's your name?"' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.

The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him, "Jeremy." he replies.

"Jeremy... That's a nice name."

"Erm... thanks."

there's an awkward silence...

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