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[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|DirtyMeStoryTime's]] review of [[A Big Ugly Story]]:<br> | [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|DirtyMeStoryTime's]] review of [[A Big Ugly Story]]:<br> | ||
| - | + | Well, at this point, it is not a very big, big ugly story. Most of the story hits dead ends, with no completed path. | |
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| + | The story is written well, with descriptions to bring about the scene image. But mostly, it is pretty simplistic in progression. Your only goal is to have sex. Like the main pages, the sex scenes are short and to the point. Do not read this expecting complex plot developments or character growth. This story also does a good job making the character's physical appearance realistic, rather than perfect, bringing more levels of realism. How quickly the characters just start having sex is a different matter... | ||
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| + | Recommendation: While the story isn't bad (for what it is), the shortness of any given path makes it difficult to recommend. If you are an author in search of something to complete, and are more interested in the sex rather than character development, then it is recommended. However, if you are a reader in search of a full story, it might be better to avoid, as there is little completion to it. | ||
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Current revision as of 05:11, 22 June 2016
DirtyMeStoryTime's review of A Big Ugly Story:
Well, at this point, it is not a very big, big ugly story. Most of the story hits dead ends, with no completed path.
The story is written well, with descriptions to bring about the scene image. But mostly, it is pretty simplistic in progression. Your only goal is to have sex. Like the main pages, the sex scenes are short and to the point. Do not read this expecting complex plot developments or character growth. This story also does a good job making the character's physical appearance realistic, rather than perfect, bringing more levels of realism. How quickly the characters just start having sex is a different matter...
Recommendation: While the story isn't bad (for what it is), the shortness of any given path makes it difficult to recommend. If you are an author in search of something to complete, and are more interested in the sex rather than character development, then it is recommended. However, if you are a reader in search of a full story, it might be better to avoid, as there is little completion to it.
