Ditch Charlotte for a while and sit next to Melvin

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"Look, I've got to go for a minute." you say to Charlotte and rise from your seat. "Finish the story at school, okay?"

She nods at you, a bit inattentive as you take a seat next to Melvin in front of you.

Startled, he almost drops his eyeglasses when you say, "'Sup, geek?"

He looks at you with wide-open eyes, not even blinking. Then he replies,"What do you want?"

A good question. What would you want with him?

His pointy nose, greasy brown hair and scrawny frame doesn't exactly make him the most attractive guy. You think for a moment, then answer with:

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 "Look, I've got to go for a minute." you say to Charlotte and rise from your seat. "Finish the story at school, okay?"
-She nods at you, a bit unattentive as you take a seat next to Melvin in front of you.
+She nods at you, a bit inattentive as you take a seat next to Melvin in front of you.
-Startled, he almost drops his eyeglasses when you say: "'Sup, geek?"
+Startled, he almost drops his eyeglasses when you say, "'Sup, geek?"
-He looks at you with wide-open eyes, not even blinking. Then he replies:
+He looks at you with wide-open eyes, not even blinking. Then he replies,"What do you want?"
-"What do you want?"
+A good question. What would you want with him?
-A good question. What would you want with him? His pointy nose, greasy brown hair and scrawny frame doesn't exactly make him the most attractive guy. You think for a moment, then answer with:
+His pointy nose, greasy brown hair and scrawny frame doesn't exactly make him the most attractive guy. You think for a moment, then answer with:
 *[["Well, I haven't done my math homework. Be a pal and let me copy yours, okay?"]]