User talk:Pepperdude
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| - | Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. | + | Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. I forgot to mention that the whole status thing at the bottom with gender, height, weight, inventory, is completely new to me. Really innovative and a great idea, it definitely helps add to the realism and the idea of having choices and doing things. Also it's great to help for subtle hints down the road and to maybe make choices in the beginning matter more and easier to implement later on since you can use them as placeholders to remember what went on. |
Revision as of 05:37, 5 November 2009
Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.
Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. I forgot to mention that the whole status thing at the bottom with gender, height, weight, inventory, is completely new to me. Really innovative and a great idea, it definitely helps add to the realism and the idea of having choices and doing things. Also it's great to help for subtle hints down the road and to maybe make choices in the beginning matter more and easier to implement later on since you can use them as placeholders to remember what went on.
