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Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello. | Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello. | ||
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| + | Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. | ||
Revision as of 05:23, 5 November 2009
Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.
Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this.
