Plain belly - Revision history

Frozenrapids at 07:55, 4 May 2010

Frozenrapids — Tue, 04 May 2010 07:55:51 GMT

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	But I can fix that. Im the Fix-It-Up Chappie.		But I can fix that. Im the Fix-It-Up Chappie.

-	I've ~~some~~ here to help you. I have what you need.	+	I've come here to help you. I have what you need.

	And my prices are low. And I work at great speed.		And my prices are low. And I work at great speed.
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	My friends, you can have them for three dollars each!"		My friends, you can have them for three dollars each!"

		+	"Just pay me your money and hop right aboard!

-	~~"Just pay me your money and hop right aboard~~!"	+	No enemy will win when you brandish this sword!"

		+	But again my friend we have come to a cross,

		+	Are the benefits worse this mere 3 dollar loss,

-	~~And again my friend we have come~~ to ~~a cross,~~	+	Would you want to join the star-bellied fun?

-	~~will you jump in the machine, a 3 dollar loss,~~	+	Or will you avoid this strange outsider and run?
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-	~~To be like the star bellies and join in the fun?~~	+
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-	Or will you avoid this strange outsider~~, turn away~~ and run?	+

	[[get a star]]		[[get a star]]

Platypus at 12:13, 3 May 2010

Platypus — Mon, 03 May 2010 12:13:30 GMT

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	Put together a very peculiar machine.		Put together a very peculiar machine.

-	And he said, "You want ~~starts~~ like a Star-Belly Sneetch...?	+	And he said, "You want stars like a Star-Belly Sneetch...?

	My friends, you can have them for three dollars each!"		My friends, you can have them for three dollars each!"
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	[[refuse to get a star]]		[[refuse to get a star]]
		+	[[Category: Revisiting the Sneetches]]

HelyxChase: Created page with 'Then ONE day, it seems... while the plain belly Sneetches Were moping and doping alone on the beaches, Just sitting there wishing their bellies had stars... A stranger zipped …'

HelyxChase — Mon, 03 May 2010 01:34:37 GMT

Created page with 'Then ONE day, it seems... while the plain belly Sneetches Were moping and doping alone on the beaches, Just sitting there wishing their bellies had stars... A stranger zipped …'

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Then ONE day, it seems... while the plain belly Sneetches

Were moping and doping alone on the beaches,

Just sitting there wishing their bellies had stars...

A stranger zipped up in the strangest of cars!

"My friends," he announced in a voice clear and keen,

"My name is Sylvester McMonkey McBean.

And I've heard of your troubles. I've heard you're unhappy.

But I can fix that. Im the Fix-It-Up Chappie.

I've some here to help you. I have what you need.

And my prices are low. And I work at great speed.

And my work is one hundred percent guarenteed!"

Then, quickly, Sylvester McMonkey McBean

Put together a very peculiar machine.

And he said, "You want starts like a Star-Belly Sneetch...?

My friends, you can have them for three dollars each!"

"Just pay me your money and hop right aboard!"

And again my friend we have come to a cross,

will you jump in the machine, a 3 dollar loss,

To be like the star bellies and join in the fun?

Or will you avoid this strange outsider, turn away and run?

[[get a star]]

[[refuse to get a star]]