(LoK) Confront the SharpClaw - Revision history

IrrelevantComment: Fixing mix of tenses

IrrelevantComment — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 23:22:54 GMT

Fixing mix of tenses

IrrelevantComment at 22:19, 9 November 2012

IrrelevantComment — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 22:19:52 GMT

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-	Krystal ~~emerges from~~ the ~~hut to~~ what ~~on any other occasion would have been a pleasant view~~. ~~It was early evening~~, and the ~~sun was setting over~~ the ~~grassy hills~~ to the ~~west~~, ~~visible through~~ the ~~trees of~~ a ~~small forest~~. The ~~hut~~ was ~~built on~~ the ~~edge of~~ the ~~forest~~, ~~meaning~~ the ~~trees were sparse and plenty of light broke through~~ the ~~canopy~~. To the ~~north~~-~~east there was~~ a ~~small village~~ that ~~looked idyllic~~ to ~~the naked eye~~, ~~although~~ Krystal ~~knew better than~~ to ~~expect such~~ a ~~thing~~ of ~~any SharpClaw settlement~~. "''I ~~doubt~~ they ~~would take too kindly~~ to me ~~strolling in there with their warrior's mace~~''" ~~she thinks, turning away~~.	+	It wasn't an easy decision. Krystal remembered two well what the last two SharpClaw had done her, and if these ones knew what she had done then the chances of this ending well were close to zero. But she had no food, and no method of communication. If she didn't get help from somebody then she would starve to death in this forest - assuming something in it didn't eat ''her'' first. No, she had to talk to these SharpClaw, see if she could persuade them to help her.
		+
		+	Pulling herself out of the cockpit, she calls out to the two SharpClaw, realising as she does so that she was wrong - there was only one SharpClaw and he had been talking to himself. SharpClaw were typically muscular brutes, resembling large humanoid lizards in appearance and unlike the women they wore no clothing except their armour. This one however was different. He was still muscular, but he was definitely weaker and smaller than the SharpClaw she had seen before and he had no armour or weapons, so he wasn't a warrior. It hadn't even occurred to Krystal that not all SharpClaw were warriors, but she realised someone had to make their weapons and build their houses.
		+
		+	The SharpClaw looks surprised to see her. He was completely naked and despite her situation Krystal can't help but note that SharpClaw made no attempt to hide their dicks, but this one actually seems to be trying to hide his by turning away. "''A modest SharpClaw? That's something new.''"
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		+	For a second, both the vixen and the lizard stand there, neither knowing what to say. The lizard works up the courage first: "Your armour... you must be the one the warriors brought back today. They boasted much about their new toy."
		+
		+	"And going by your lack of armour, you aren't one of the warriors. Who are you? I've never heard of a SharpClaw male not being a fighter."
		+
		+	"Someone has to make their weapons and vehicles - I suppose you could say I am their technician. You haven't heard of us because we don't exist; most SharpClaw tribes shun or kill anyone who chooses not to become a warrior. Thankfully our chief had a little more wisdom than that. It was him who sent me here to see what technology I can scavenge."
		+
		+	Realising this SharpClaw wasn't about to kill her, Krystal climbs down from the Arwing to talk to him. As she faces him, she can't help but glance down at his cock again, secretly impressed by the size of it. This time however, it was a little less flaccid. Blushing, she realises how little of her body her armour covers, and that climbing down from the Arwing would have left her exposed.
		+
		+	"I need your help" she says, more to distract herself than anything. "I have no food and no way to contact my team. I can't go back to the SharpClaw, you know what they'll do to me."
		+
		+	She didn't expect it to work - SharpClaw were raping, murderous animals. She is incredibly surprised then, when the SharpClaw male looks torn, as if he isn't sure what to do. "My tribe will expect me to bring you back for them. If I don't they will see it as weakness and I will be punished."

-	A cool breeze sweeps through the valley, bringing with it a subtle smell of burning. Krystal turns to face the wind, and sure enough in the south there is smoke rising from a point just outside the forest. "''That must be where one of the Arwings crashed, but who's?''" Krystal thinks, searching in vain for signs of another crash site. "''We were flying over the forest, and Fox's Arwing crashed before mine, so his must be further into the forest. We were also on our way back to the Great Fox, which must mean that it is to the West, but there's no way I can make across that open land with such a pitiful supply of food''".

	Does she:		Does she:
-	*[[(LoK) ~~Search for the other Arwing (with food)~~\|~~head south-east in search of Fox's Arwing~~?]]	+	*[[(LoK) Appeal to his compassion\|appeal to his compassion?]]
-	*[[(LoK) ~~Investigate her Arwing~~ (~~with food~~)\|~~head south towards her Arwing~~?]]	+	*[[(LoK) Seduce him\|try to seduce him?]]
		+	*[[(LoK) Threaten him\|threaten him?]]


-	{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour~~'', ''Mace'', ''Backpack'', ''Food~~''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}	+	{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}

-	[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]	+	[[Category: Legend of Krystal\|Confront the SharpClaw]]

IrrelevantComment: (LoK) Explore the surrounding area (with food) moved to (LoK) Confront the SharpClaw: Unused page - repurposing it

IrrelevantComment — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 21:19:05 GMT

(LoK) Explore the surrounding area (with food) moved to (LoK) Confront the SharpClaw: Unused page - repurposing it

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IrrelevantComment at 03:25, 8 November 2012

IrrelevantComment — Thu, 08 Nov 2012 03:25:53 GMT

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	Does she:		Does she:
-	*[[(LoK) Search for the other Arwing\|head south-east in search of Fox's Arwing?]]	+	*[[(LoK) Search for the other Arwing (with food)\|head south-east in search of Fox's Arwing?]]
-	*[[(LoK) Investigate her Arwing\|head south towards her Arwing?]]	+	*[[(LoK) Investigate her Arwing (with food)\|head south towards her Arwing?]]


-	{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour'', ''Mace'', ''Backpack, ''Food''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}	+	{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour'', ''Mace'', ''Backpack'', ''Food''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}

	[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]		[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]

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IrrelevantComment — Thu, 08 Nov 2012 03:16:14 GMT

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Krystal emerges from the hut to what on any other occasion would have been a pleasant view. It was early evening, and the sun was setting over the grassy hills to the west, visible through the trees of a small forest. The hut was built on the edge of the forest, meaning the trees were sparse and plenty of light broke through the canopy. To the north-east there was a small village that looked idyllic to the naked eye, although Krystal knew better than to expect such a thing of any SharpClaw settlement. "''I doubt they would take too kindly to me strolling in there with their warrior's mace''" she thinks, turning away.

A cool breeze sweeps through the valley, bringing with it a subtle smell of burning. Krystal turns to face the wind, and sure enough in the south there is smoke rising from a point just outside the forest. "''That must be where one of the Arwings crashed, but who's?''" Krystal thinks, searching in vain for signs of another crash site. "''We were flying over the forest, and Fox's Arwing crashed before mine, so his must be further into the forest. We were also on our way back to the Great Fox, which must mean that it is to the West, but there's no way I can make across that open land with such a pitiful supply of food''".

Does she:
*[[(LoK) Search for the other Arwing|head south-east in search of Fox's Arwing?]]
*[[(LoK) Investigate her Arwing|head south towards her Arwing?]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Tribal Armour'', ''Mace'', ''Backpack, ''Food''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}

[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]

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-	It wasn't an easy decision. Krystal ~~remembered two~~ well what the last two SharpClaw had done her, and if these ones knew what she had done then the chances of this ending well were close to zero. But she ~~had~~ no food, and no method of communication. If she ~~didn~~'t get help from somebody then she would starve to death in this forest - assuming something in it didn't eat ''her'' first. No, she had to talk to these SharpClaw, see if she could persuade them to help her.	+	It wasn't an easy decision. Krystal remembers too well what the last two SharpClaw had done her, and if these ones knew what she had done then the chances of this ending well were close to zero. But she has no food, and no method of communication. If she doesn't get help from somebody then she would starve to death in this forest - assuming something in it didn't eat ''her'' first. No, she had to talk to these SharpClaw and see if she could persuade them to help her.

-	Pulling herself out of the cockpit, she calls out to the two SharpClaw, realising as she does so that she was wrong - there ~~was~~ only one SharpClaw and he had been talking to himself. SharpClaw were typically muscular brutes, resembling large humanoid lizards in appearance and unlike the women they wore no clothing except their armour. This one however ~~was~~ different. He ~~was~~ still muscular, but he ~~was~~ definitely weaker and smaller than the SharpClaw she had seen before and he ~~had~~ no armour or weapons, so he ~~wasn~~'t a warrior. It hadn't even occurred to Krystal that not all SharpClaw were warriors, but she realised someone had to make their weapons and build their houses.	+	Pulling herself out of the cockpit, she calls out to the two SharpClaw, realising as she does so that she was wrong - there is only one SharpClaw and he had been talking to himself. SharpClaw were typically muscular brutes, resembling large humanoid lizards in appearance and unlike the women they wore no clothing except their armour. This one however is different. He is still muscular, but he is definitely weaker and smaller than the SharpClaw she had seen before and he has no armour or weapons, so he isn't a warrior. It hadn't even occurred to Krystal that not all SharpClaw were warriors, but she realised someone had to make their weapons and build their houses.

-	The SharpClaw looks surprised to see her. He ~~was~~ completely naked and despite her situation Krystal can't help but note that SharpClaw made no attempt to hide their dicks, but this one actually seems to be trying to hide his by turning away. "''A modest SharpClaw? That's something new.''"	+	The SharpClaw looks surprised to see her. He is completely naked and despite her situation Krystal can't help but note that SharpClaw made no attempt to hide their dicks, but this one actually seems to be trying to hide his by turning away. "''A modest SharpClaw? That's something new.''"

	For a second, both the vixen and the lizard stand there, neither knowing what to say. The lizard works up the courage first: "Your armour... you must be the one the warriors brought back today. They boasted much about their new toy."		For a second, both the vixen and the lizard stand there, neither knowing what to say. The lizard works up the courage first: "Your armour... you must be the one the warriors brought back today. They boasted much about their new toy."
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	"Someone has to make their weapons and vehicles - I suppose you could say I am their technician. You haven't heard of us because we don't exist; most SharpClaw tribes shun or kill anyone who chooses not to become a warrior. Thankfully our chief had a little more wisdom than that. It was him who sent me here to see what technology I can scavenge."		"Someone has to make their weapons and vehicles - I suppose you could say I am their technician. You haven't heard of us because we don't exist; most SharpClaw tribes shun or kill anyone who chooses not to become a warrior. Thankfully our chief had a little more wisdom than that. It was him who sent me here to see what technology I can scavenge."

-	Realising this SharpClaw wasn't about to kill her, Krystal climbs down from the Arwing to talk to him. As she faces him, she can't help but glance down at his cock again, secretly impressed by the size of it. This time however, it ~~was~~ a little less flaccid. Blushing, she realises how little of her body her armour covers, and that climbing down from the Arwing would have left her exposed.	+	Realising this SharpClaw wasn't about to kill her, Krystal climbs down from the Arwing to talk to him. As she faces him, she can't help but glance down at his cock again, secretly impressed by the size of it. This time however, it is a little less flaccid. Blushing, she realises how little of her body her armour covers, and that climbing down from the Arwing would have left her ass exposed.

	"I need your help" she says, more to distract herself than anything. "I have no food and no way to contact my team. I can't go back to the SharpClaw, you know what they'll do to me."		"I need your help" she says, more to distract herself than anything. "I have no food and no way to contact my team. I can't go back to the SharpClaw, you know what they'll do to me."

-	She ~~didn~~'t expect it to work - SharpClaw were raping, murderous animals. She is incredibly surprised then, when the SharpClaw male looks torn, as if he isn't sure what to do. "My tribe will expect me to bring you back for them. If I don't they will see it as weakness and I will be punished."	+	She doesn't expect it to work - SharpClaw were raping, murderous animals. She is incredibly surprised then, when the SharpClaw male looks torn, as if he isn't sure what to do. "My tribe will expect me to bring you back for them. If I don't they will see it as weakness and I will be punished."


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	*[[(LoK) Seduce him\|try to seduce him?]]		*[[(LoK) Seduce him\|try to seduce him?]]
	*[[(LoK) Threaten him\|threaten him?]]		*[[(LoK) Threaten him\|threaten him?]]
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	{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}		{{Status\|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''\|Health=100\|MP=0\|Level=0}}

	[[Category: Legend of Krystal\|Confront the SharpClaw]]		[[Category: Legend of Krystal\|Confront the SharpClaw]]